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Trently

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Shuriken of Storms [Magic Weapon]:

Ready To Grade - Arashi Tori [A-Tier Magic Weapon Move Set] FOQtMLY
Name: Shuriken of Storms
Tier: A
Type: Weapon | Throwing
Magic Type: Storm [ Wind + Lightning ]
Cost: 10 magoi to activate | 5 to sustain
Appearance: This shuriken is approximately .5 meters across and the magic circle is inscribed on the blue gem in the center of the blades. The blades appear to have streaks of lightning through them.
Function:

  • Stormfall - When the user throws the shuriken after feeding it magoi, it causes a 2m diameter disc of storm magic to spread from its center. The shuriken will stop above the target and the disc of storm clouds will glow brightly for a brief moment. The space directly beneath the shuriken is then struck with a giant lightning bolt capable of covering the entire 2m diameter. Anything caught by the bolt is dealt B-tier damage and electrical paralysis that lasts for one posts. The range of this attack is 10m.
  • Tempest Zone - The user activates this function by keeping the shuriken held in their hand with its center placed against their palm. Feeding magoi into the tool with that condition met causes thick storm clouds to form around the user. The clouds grow to cover a 10m diameter spreading throughout the area blocking the vision of anything within the area unless they are at least 1m away from each other. The electricity within the storm cloud detects the electromagnetic fields of living beings and informs the caster of their location.


Arashi Sonsho
Tier: A-Tier
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Target(s) have to be under the storm. The user must slash his blade above his head to activate the move.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4 Posts
Cost: 20 Magoi
Description:

    The user conjures a storm which tracks and follows the user. The storm is overhead the user 40m but can be made lower as long as the storm stays overhead. Any and all opposing objects or opponents under the storm are susceptible to being struck by A-Tier lightning if the user so chooses. However, the target(s) can only be struck once each post that they are under the storm and no more than that. The opponents or opposing objects struck by the A-Tier lightning are blown away back 5 meters. The A-Tier lightning does A-Tier damage. The storm is 40m in diameter. The storm lasts for 4 posts but once it has tried to strike target(s) with electricity, it dissipates. The only exception to the previous sentence is if the user strikes multiple targets using hit scaling or hits the same target multiple times with lightning in the same post he first struck, then after that would be when the storm dissipates.


Arashi Denki
Tier: A-Tier
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user needs to slash downwards twice to activate the move.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4 Posts
Cost: 20 Magoi
Description:

    The user conjures a thin supercharged storm cloud layer around his Shuriken of Storms that lasts for a total of 4 posts. The user can discharges electricity sparks from his Shuriken of Storms that will go as far as 15m, dealing B-Tier electricity damage and 2 post paralyzation when the user performs a basic action. Things struck by the electricity sparks are knocked back 5 meters every time each time they are hit if the user so chooses.


Arashi Kaze
Tier: A-Tier
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Target(s) have to be under the storm. The user must slash his blade twice above his head to activate the move.
Scaling: For every 10 magoi spent, the user can give 1 of his allies an eye 3m diameter also. An ally given eye acts the same as the user's own eye.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4 Posts
Cost: 20 Magoi
Description:

    The user conjures a storm that is stationary from where it was cast but its eye follows the user, protecting the user from the effects of the storm. The storm is overhead the user 40m but can be made lower as long as the storm stays overhead. Any and all opposing objects or opponents under the storm are susceptible to being slowed down by the strong winds occurring within the storm. The opponents or opposing objects within the first ten meters of the storm have their basic actions and abilities slowed down by 1 tier. The opponents or opposing objects within the second ten meters of the storm have their basic actions and abilities slowed down by 2 tiers. The opponents or opposing objects within the third ten meters of the storm have their basic actions and abilities slowed down by 3 tiers. The opponents or opposing objects within the fourth ten meters of the storm have their basic actions and abilities slowed down by 4 tiers. The fourth ten meters is the closest area of the storm to the user when the storm was cast while the first ten meters is the farthest area of the storm from the user when the storm was cast. The user is unaffected by the storm cause he'll be in the eye of the storm that is 3M in diameter. The user's abilities that enter the storm are unaffected as long as the user's entire body remains within the eye. The storm lasts for a total of 4 posts. The storm is 40m in radius.


Arashi Yoroi

Tier: A-Tier
Type: ​Defensive
Range:​ ​Close
Requirements/Drawbacks:​ ​The user must hold his Shuriken of Storms near his chest to activate the move.
Scaling:​ ​Amount​ ​of​ ​Layers
Sustain:​ ​0
Cool​ ​Down:​ ​4​ ​Posts
Cost:​ ​20​ ​Magoi
Description:  

    The user creates ​a​ thin armor of storm clouds around his body and equipment, this​ ​ability​ ​employs​ ​the​ ​user​ ​with​ ​a​ ​defensive​ ​armor ​made of storm clouds. ​The ​armor ​blocks up to A-Tier damage before dissipating. It lasts four posts.



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Ariel

Ariel
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Arashi Sonsho & Arashi Mahi

- You need to perform an action for the requirement. You could probably just use Stormfall's action of activation (throwing the shuriken and stuff).

- You need to state how many posts until the clouds disperse. Keep in mind, even with this time set, if you use the lightning before the time set is up, the clouds will automatically disperse unless sustained.

Arashi Mahi

- Using the first function, "Stormfall", as a scale to base the limitations of the magic weapon from, the paralysis effect may only last 2 posts.

Arashi Shurikens

- I know you would like this to be a buff, but unfortunately, this won't work. Since you'd be relying completely on magic, any action sending storm cloud shurikens at the enemy would not be considered basic attacks.

- My suggestion to you is to "coat" your shuriken in stormclouds. For so-and-so posts, they release lightning sparks. So when you attack someone close range with the shuriken, they'll be struck by both the sparks + the damage which the basic attack deals If you need clarification, DM me and I'll see if I can explain any better.


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Trently

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Fixed my moves.


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Ariel

Ariel
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A-Tier
Arashi Sonsho

- Can you be a little more detailed about how you’re slashing? E.g, which direction are you slashing?

Arashi Mahi

- Don’t forget to add onto/change the requirements for this one.

Arashi Shurikens

- With buffs, the requirements are usually the action which you perform to apply the buff. They’re not the actual action of performing a basic attack because buffing abilities don’t directly cause damage.


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Trently

Trently
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Fixed my moves again.


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Ariel

Ariel
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Arashi Mahi

You wouldn't be able to use this move twice (without scaling/sustaining anyway) without a period of cooldown in between each strike.


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Trently

Trently
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Replaced Arashi Mahi, added Arashi Kaze and Arashi Yoroi.


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Ariel

Ariel
A-Tier
A-Tier
Arashi Yoroi

- Don't forget to state how many posts until your ability dissipates!


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Trently

Trently
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Done and thank you.


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Ariel

Ariel
A-Tier
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Arashi Kaze

- So uh... new revelation: since detecting people n’ stuff is technically its own effect, unless you make the max amount of speed reduction 3 tiers, you won’t be able to include it. I mean, you probably don’t even need it anyway, so it’s probably fine to drop it.

- It may only affect basic actions. Abilities are exempt from this ability’s effect.

- This should be ‘Supplementary’ as type.

- You need to specify the size of the eye of the storm.


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Trently

Trently
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Done.


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Ariel

Ariel
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A-Tier
You still need to change basic attacks and abilities to just basic attacks.


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Ariel

Ariel
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A-Tier

You're welcome to train it now, but just keep in mind you won't actually be able to use these abilities ICly until you reach A-Tier.
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[center][b]Arashi Sonsho[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A-Tier
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Target(s) have to be under the storm. The user must slash his blade above his head to activate the move.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4 Posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user conjures a storm which tracks and follows the user. The storm is overhead the user 40m but can be made lower as long as the storm stays overhead. Any and all opposing objects or opponents under the storm are susceptible to being struck by A-Tier lightning if the user so chooses. However, the target(s) can only be struck once each post that they are under the storm and no more than that. The opponents or opposing objects struck by the A-Tier lightning are blown away back 5 meters. The A-Tier lightning does A-Tier damage. The storm is 40m in diameter. The storm lasts for 4 posts but once it has tried to strike target(s) with electricity, it dissipates. The only exception to the previous sentence is if the user strikes multiple targets using hit scaling or hits the same target multiple times with lightning in the same post he first struck, then after that would be when the storm dissipates. [/list]

[center][b]Arashi Denki[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A-Tier
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user needs to slash downwards twice to activate the move.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4 Posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user conjures a thin supercharged storm cloud layer around his Shuriken of Storms that lasts for a total of 4 posts. The user can discharges electricity sparks from his Shuriken of Storms that will go as far as 15m, dealing B-Tier electricity damage and 2 post paralyzation when the user performs a basic action. Things struck by the electricity sparks are knocked back 5 meters every time each time they are hit if the user so chooses.[/list]

[center][b]Arashi Kaze[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A-Tier
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Target(s) have to be under the storm. The user must slash his blade twice above his head to activate the move.
[b]Scaling:[/b] For every 10 magoi spent, the user can give 1 of his allies an eye 3m diameter also. An ally given eye acts the same as the user's own eye.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4 Posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user conjures a storm that is stationary from where it was cast but its eye follows the user, protecting the user from the effects of the storm. The storm is overhead the user 40m but can be made lower as long as the storm stays overhead. Any and all opposing objects or opponents under the storm are susceptible to being slowed down by the strong winds occurring within the storm. The opponents or opposing objects within the first ten meters of the storm have their basic actions and abilities slowed down by 1 tier. The opponents or opposing objects within the second ten meters of the storm have their basic actions and abilities slowed down by 2 tiers. The opponents or opposing objects within the third ten meters of the storm have their basic actions and abilities slowed down by 3 tiers. The opponents or opposing objects within the fourth ten meters of the storm have their basic actions and abilities slowed down by 4 tiers. The fourth ten meters is the closest area of the storm to the user when the storm was cast while the first ten meters is the farthest area of the storm from the user when the storm was cast. The user is unaffected by the storm because he will be in the eye of the storm that is 3m in diameter. The user's abilities that enter the storm are unaffected as long as the user's entire body remains within the eye. The storm lasts for a total of 4 posts. The storm is 40m in diameter.[/list]

[center][b]Arashi Yoroi[/b][/center]

[b]Tier:[/b] A-Tier
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b]​ ​Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b]​ ​The user must hold his Shuriken of Storms near his chest to activate the move.
[b]Scaling:[/b]​ ​Amount​ ​of​ ​Layers
[b]Sustain:[/b]​ ​0
[b]Cool​ ​Down:[/b]​ ​4​ ​Posts
[b]Cost:[/b]​ ​20​ ​Magoi
[b]Description:[/b] 
[list]
The user creates ​a​ thin armor of storm clouds around his body and equipment, this​ ​ability​ ​employs​ ​the​ ​user​ ​with​ ​a​ ​defensive​ ​armor ​made of storm clouds. ​The ​armor ​blocks up to A-Tier damage before dissipating. It lasts four posts.[/list]


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Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
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You need to bold where applicable and place the abilities used at the bottom as well as the word count.


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Fixed


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