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1some more techniques part 2 Empty some more techniques part 2 on 24/11/17, 08:11 pm

Lagi

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Name: Viper Fang
Class: Assassian
Tier: B-Tier
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: N/A
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must have an apporpirate application target

Scaling: Lethal Dosage:For 10 more stamina, Lagi can increase the dosage, raising the posion by one rank higher than it is currently
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 20 Stamina
Description:

Lacing an applicable target (Assassin weapon or Assassin/hybrid ability) with poison, exposure to this poison will cause internal C rank damage to the targets internal organs. One exposed, the target will experience this poison for the next two posts.  However, this poison is temporary and after two posts, the effects would subside after dealing the internal damage. In addition to that, the poison would stay on the applicable target or ability until it's used up for that particular aspect (aka, one of the many caltrops etc). This ability by itself can be filled in a vial, prompting the creation of a mundane item that will be treated as "Viper Fang", with the poison value depending on the scaling. If used in this way, a vial can be created once per turn.  

Name: Caltrops
Class: Assassian
Tier: B-Tier
Type: Offensive
Range: N/A
Requirements/Drawbacks:Must first prep throw before spread.

Scaling: Full Slavo: For 10 more stamina , Doubles the meter spread of cattledrops
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

Tossing out a small batch of metal caltrops, Lagi coats an area enough to spread about a 15 meters from in front of him at his current speed tier. The caltrops will be spread in a V-shaped spread With the width itself being 10 meters.  Those who step on the cattle drop will experience B rank ability damage in their foot.  These caltrops will continue to stay in the area for two post's after their placement, and can be laced with a poison ability or poison-related application.

Name: Acid Explosive
Class: Assassian/Beast Master
Tier: B-Tier
Type: Offensive
Range: N/A
Requirements/Drawbacks:Orie must first generate the small acid balls for use

Scaling: Multi: For 10 more stamina, orie can create another explosive acid ball. However, when sustained, that now becomes a part of the new sum generated with continued sustained.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

With Orie's help, Lagi is able to create a small 1-meter black ball of acid that can be used as an explosive. This can be thrown as far as 15 meters at the user's tier speed and explodes upon contact with something other than Lagi. Detonation can deal a b rank acid explosion that spreads 5 meters per explosion, but the acid properties are in tune with Orie, negating damage for Lagi if he is exposed to it. The ball can either be placed or thrown, and looks like a black ball with a violent liquid swirl at the center of it's core.

Name: Hidden Hand Technique
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Assassin
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must have "Perfect Balance" and "B rank or higher speed tiers."

Scaling: Hidden Technique- For 10 More stamina, Lagi can skip another prep drawback for another assassin technique or Assassin hybrid technique. However, for each stamina paid for the scaling, that new amount is now apart of the scaling process, giving lagi the leeway of supplementing prep time equal to the number of scaling paid beforehand.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 posts
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

Using the philosophy of getting things done quickly, Lagi can use a slight of hand technique in order to expedite prep time for an assassin related technique. This substitutes applicable drawbacks with this ability instead, expediting the execution of the technique at a faster pace. The speed tiers come into play when it comes to Assassin techniques or assassin hybrid techniques whose rank is equal or lower to their current Speed tier allowing this action to be applicable.

Name: Acidic Tekken
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Body Manipulation / Beast Tamer
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: Orie first overcoats the limb with the acidiv property on the outside, while proitecting the actual cloathing or items underneath in the inside of the coating.

Scaling: Death Touch- for 10 more stamina, Lagi can up the Acid of this technique for it's damage capabilites to be inreased by one rank for evey 10 stamina paid.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

One of the great things about the infusion of Orie's acidic properties and Lagi's body manipulation is that Lagi an add an acidic touch to any one of his limbs at any given moment, giving them a B rank acidic property in addition to Lagi's  basic strength coming into play.  For every Two ranks in body manipulation, Lagi can do two separate actions with that coated limb, along with another coat being at another limb of Lagi's choosing.

Body Manipulation Rank / Coat and Limb amount
D and C- 1
B and A-  2



Last edited by Lagi on 07/12/17, 01:24 pm; edited 3 times in total


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2some more techniques part 2 Empty Re: some more techniques part 2 on 28/11/17, 04:45 pm

Amaya

Amaya
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Viper Fang: You can't have a C-tier ability deal a total of B-tier damage normally, much less do that AND be supplementary. You can have a total of D-Tier damage, or lose the supplementary aspect and deal a total of C-Tier.
Please also finish your drawback/requirement.

Caltrops: What kind of area are you covering? You only state 15m. Is that a 15 m cone? Square? Circle? I can't grade this until I have an actual shape to grade.

What I can grade is the duration. Your caltrops cannot last an infinite number of posts. Because they don't do damage when thrown, They can stick around for a total of 2 posts. You can increase this duration for every tier you decrease their damage by.

Acid Explosive: Again, you have infinite duration that you can't have. These acid balls must either burst on their own after a set number of turns, or recieve a physical catalyst. You can't have your beast explode something that it no longer has any form of contact with as you no longer have any control over it.

Hidden Hand Technique: This is fine.

Acidic Tekken: You can't use the ability effect to add to the number of turns a limb is coated. We have sustain for that.

You can, however, still coat the extra limbs.


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3some more techniques part 2 Empty Re: some more techniques part 2 on 29/11/17, 04:05 am

Lagi

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fixd, idk what you are asking in regards to acidic tekken


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4some more techniques part 2 Empty Re: some more techniques part 2 on 06/12/17, 04:03 pm

Amaya

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Viper Fang: All gucci.

Caltrops: State the angle of the cone (or the width at the end) and you should be all good.

Acid Explosive: You cannot have a remote detonation. You'd need to either physically hit the ball with something, or let the timer tick down.

This decision was made after combing through Orie's abilities and traits. Orie was shown to have a limited reach of 5m outside of lagi's body, and while she can register body manipulation techniques, once something like an acid ball leaves her body, it is no longer part of the body.

Since this is a body manip ability, and not a spell, you'll need to abide by the logic of body manip. Since the ball is no longer part of the body, you cannot exert influence on it in the same way you couldn't manipulate a severed arm or leg.

If you'd like them to burst early, you can make them detonate on contact as well.

On a separate note, I didn't originally notice that you forgot state how far the balls could be thrown, or if they can in the first place. Make sure you add that in for us.

Hidden Hand Technique: Already Approved.

Acidic Tekken: I just wanted to make sure you knew that coating the same limb twice doesn't add to the number of turns the limb is coated for.


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5some more techniques part 2 Empty Re: some more techniques part 2 on 07/12/17, 06:18 am

Lagi

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edited, and my understanding of acidity tekken was that I would essentially gain two coats for one at higher levels, with each coat dealing B rank acidic damage. So essentially, with the stipulation, I put in the technique regarding body manipulation, two actions.

Not increasing the sustain in any way since I know it'll stay the same, but more longevity by allowing two actions.


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6some more techniques part 2 Empty Re: some more techniques part 2 on 07/12/17, 12:20 pm

Amaya

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Acidic Explosive: You don't have access to long range, so we'll have to cap the throw at 15m.

Everything Else: Good.

Acidic Tekken: That's correct. I just wanted it to be clear that doubling the application wouldn't make it last for 4 posts instead of 2 (or whatever the value is)


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7some more techniques part 2 Empty Re: some more techniques part 2 on 07/12/17, 01:25 pm

Lagi

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Ok throw changed to 15


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8some more techniques part 2 Empty Re: some more techniques part 2 on 07/12/17, 01:30 pm

Amaya

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You should be all good now.

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Viper Fang
[b]Class: [/b]Assassian
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] N/A
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must have an apporpirate application target

[b]Scaling: [/b]Lethal Dosage:For 10 more stamina, Lagi can increase the dosage, raising the posion by one rank higher than it is currently
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Description: [/b]

Lacing an applicable target (Assassin weapon or Assassin/hybrid ability) with poison, exposure to this poison will cause internal C rank damage to the targets internal organs. One exposed, the target will experience this poison for the next two posts.  However, this poison is temporary and after two posts, the effects would subside after dealing the internal damage. In addition to that, the poison would stay on the applicable target or ability until it's used up for that particular aspect (aka, one of the many caltrops etc). This ability by itself can be filled in a vial, prompting the creation of a mundane item that will be treated as [b]"Viper Fang"[/b], with the poison value depending on the scaling. If used in this way, a vial can be created once per turn.  

[b]Name:[/b] Caltrops
[b]Class: [/b] Assassian
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] N/A
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b]Must first prep throw before spread.

[b]Scaling: [/b]Full Slavo: For 10 more stamina , Doubles the meter spread of cattledrops
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description: [/b]

Tossing out a small batch of metal caltrops, Lagi coats an area enough to spread about a 15 meters from in front of him at his current speed tier. The caltrops will be spread in a V-shaped spread With the width itself being 10 meters.  Those who step on the cattle drop will experience B rank ability damage in their foot.  These caltrops will continue to stay in the area for two post's after their placement, and can be laced with a poison ability or poison-related application.

[b]Name:[/b] Acid Explosive
[b]Class: [/b] Assassian/Beast Master
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] N/A
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b]Orie must first generate the small acid balls for use

[b]Scaling: [/b]Multi: For 10 more stamina, orie can create another explosive acid ball. However, when sustained, that now becomes a part of the new sum generated with continued sustained.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description: [/b]

With Orie's help, Lagi is able to create a small 1-meter black ball of acid that can be used as an explosive. This can be thrown as far as 15 meters at the user's tier speed and explodes upon contact with something other than Lagi. Detonation can deal a b rank acid explosion that spreads 5 meters per explosion, but the acid properties are in tune with Orie, negating damage for Lagi if he is exposed to it. The ball can either be placed or thrown, and looks like a black ball with a violent liquid swirl at the center of it's core.

[b]Name:[/b] Hidden Hand Technique
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class: [/b]Assassin
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must have "Perfect Balance" and "B rank or higher speed tiers."

[b]Scaling: [/b]Hidden Technique- For 10 More stamina, Lagi can skip another prep drawback for another assassin technique or Assassin hybrid technique. However, for each stamina paid for the scaling, that new amount is now apart of the scaling process, giving lagi the leeway of supplementing prep time equal to the number of scaling paid beforehand.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description: [/b]

Using the philosophy of getting things done quickly, Lagi can use a slight of hand technique in order to expedite prep time for an assassin related technique. This substitutes applicable drawbacks with this ability instead, expediting the execution of the technique at a faster pace. The speed tiers come into play when it comes to Assassin techniques or assassin hybrid techniques whose rank is equal or lower to their current Speed tier allowing this action to be applicable.

[b]Name:[/b] Acidic Tekken
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class: [/b]Body Manipulation / Beast Tamer
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Orie first overcoats the limb with the acidiv property on the outside, while proitecting the actual cloathing or items underneath in the inside of the coating.

[b]Scaling: [/b]Death Touch- for 10 more stamina, Lagi can up the Acid of this technique for it's damage capabilites to be inreased by one rank for evey 10 stamina paid.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description: [/b]

One of the great things about the infusion of Orie's acidic properties and Lagi's body manipulation is that Lagi an add an acidic touch to any one of his limbs at any given moment, giving them a B rank acidic property in addition to Lagi's  basic strength coming into play.  For every Two ranks in body manipulation, Lagi can do two separate actions with that coated limb, along with another coat being at another limb of Lagi's choosing.

[b][u]Body Manipulation Rank / Coat and Limb amount[/u][/b]
D and C- 1
B and A-  2


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9some more techniques part 2 Empty Re: some more techniques part 2 on 20/12/17, 10:52 am

Lagi

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10some more techniques part 2 Empty Re: some more techniques part 2 on 20/12/17, 10:55 am

Ariel

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approvedd

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Viper Fang
[b]Class: [/b]Assassian
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] N/A
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must have an apporpirate application target

[b]Scaling: [/b]Lethal Dosage:For 10 more stamina, Lagi can increase the dosage, raising the posion by one rank higher than it is currently
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Description: [/b]

Lacing an applicable target (Assassin weapon or Assassin/hybrid ability) with poison, exposure to this poison will cause internal C rank damage to the targets internal organs. One exposed, the target will experience this poison for the next two posts.  However, this poison is temporary and after two posts, the effects would subside after dealing the internal damage. In addition to that, the poison would stay on the applicable target or ability until it's used up for that particular aspect (aka, one of the many caltrops etc). This ability by itself can be filled in a vial, prompting the creation of a mundane item that will be treated as [b]"Viper Fang"[/b], with the poison value depending on the scaling. If used in this way, a vial can be created once per turn. 

[b]Name:[/b] Caltrops
[b]Class: [/b] Assassian
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] N/A
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b]Must first prep throw before spread.

[b]Scaling: [/b]Full Slavo: For 10 more stamina , Doubles the meter spread of cattledrops
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description: [/b]

Tossing out a small batch of metal caltrops, Lagi coats an area enough to spread about a 15 meters from in front of him at his current speed tier. The caltrops will be spread in a V-shaped spread With the width itself being 10 meters.  Those who step on the cattle drop will experience B rank ability damage in their foot.  These caltrops will continue to stay in the area for two post's after their placement, and can be laced with a poison ability or poison-related application.

[b]Name:[/b] Acid Explosive
[b]Class: [/b] Assassian/Beast Master
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] N/A
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b]Orie must first generate the small acid balls for use

[b]Scaling: [/b]Multi: For 10 more stamina, orie can create another explosive acid ball. However, when sustained, that now becomes a part of the new sum generated with continued sustained.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description: [/b]

With Orie's help, Lagi is able to create a small 1-meter black ball of acid that can be used as an explosive. This can be thrown as far as 15 meters at the user's tier speed and explodes upon contact with something other than Lagi. Detonation can deal a b rank acid explosion that spreads 5 meters per explosion, but the acid properties are in tune with Orie, negating damage for Lagi if he is exposed to it. The ball can either be placed or thrown, and looks like a black ball with a violent liquid swirl at the center of it's core.

[b]Name:[/b] Hidden Hand Technique
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class: [/b]Assassin
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must have "Perfect Balance" and "B rank or higher speed tiers."

[b]Scaling: [/b]Hidden Technique- For 10 More stamina, Lagi can skip another prep drawback for another assassin technique or Assassin hybrid technique. However, for each stamina paid for the scaling, that new amount is now apart of the scaling process, giving lagi the leeway of supplementing prep time equal to the number of scaling paid beforehand.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description: [/b]

Using the philosophy of getting things done quickly, Lagi can use a slight of hand technique in order to expedite prep time for an assassin related technique. This substitutes applicable drawbacks with this ability instead, expediting the execution of the technique at a faster pace. The speed tiers come into play when it comes to Assassin techniques or assassin hybrid techniques whose rank is equal or lower to their current Speed tier allowing this action to be applicable.

[b]Name:[/b] Acidic Tekken
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class: [/b]Body Manipulation / Beast Tamer
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Orie first overcoats the limb with the acidiv property on the outside, while proitecting the actual cloathing or items underneath in the inside of the coating.

[b]Scaling: [/b]Death Touch- for 10 more stamina, Lagi can up the Acid of this technique for it's damage capabilites to be inreased by one rank for evey 10 stamina paid.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description: [/b]

One of the great things about the infusion of Orie's acidic properties and Lagi's body manipulation is that Lagi an add an acidic touch to any one of his limbs at any given moment, giving them a B rank acidic property in addition to Lagi's  basic strength coming into play.  For every Two ranks in body manipulation, Lagi can do two separate actions with that coated limb, along with another coat being at another limb of Lagi's choosing.

[b][u]Body Manipulation Rank / Coat and Limb amount[/u][/b]
D and C- 1
B and A-  2


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