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1Kallias' Starting Abilities Empty Kallias' Starting Abilities on 01/11/17, 01:41 pm

Kallias Althaus

Kallias Althaus
D-Tier
D-Tier
Uwshi Uwshi Alnar
Tier: D-tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must gather Magoi at the tip of their catalyst and then have the catalyst swung to aim at the chosen target.
Scaling: Hits; for every 10 Magoi invested, the user creates an additional ball of fire.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Magoi
Description:

    Kallias gathers magoi at the tip of his catalyst for a moment, ordering the Rukh to ignite the gases (mainly oxygen) around the catalyst. The air combusts into a ball of fire with a diameter of 1m; due to the oxygen-rich fuel used for the spell, the fire burns bright blue. Once the ball forms, Kallias either swing the catalyst or has it swung at his target, shooting it forwards. It’s capable of traveling up to 8m away and deals D-tier damage to whatever it makes contact with.


Tanmu Alghulyan
Tier: D-tier
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must swing their catalyst diagonally in their chosen direction, saying the name of the spell as they do so.
Scaling: AoE; for every 10 Magoi added, the diameter of the area is increased by 2m.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Magoi
Description:

    Kallias swings his catalyst diagonally, from top to bottom whilst saying “Tanmu Alghulyan”. With this, he’s ordering the Rukh to heat up a circular patch of area in front of him. The diameter of the patch is 3m, and the center of the spell may be placed up to 5m away from Kallias.The air in the patch shimmers with heat, distorting the air slightly; this is the only sign of the affected area. The heated area will disappear after 1 post unless scaled.

    • Any liquids will evaporate, solids (such as ice, plastic, and other items with low heat resistance) will melt, and atoms within gases will ionize to the point of combustion.
    • Living organisms that pass through the area (including the user, unless his Borg is active) will suffer from a minor heat stroke for 1 post.



Alainfijar Albarid
Tier: D-tier
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must wave their wand in a downward strike in their chosen direction whilst saying the name of the spell.
Scaling: AoE; for every 10 Magoi added, the diameter of the area is increased by 2m.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Magoi
Description:

    Kallias swings his catalyst in a downward strike whislst saying "Alainfijar Albarid". This is a command to the Rukh to drastically lower the temperature of a circular patch of area. The diameter of the area is 3m, and the center of the spell may be placed up to 5m away from Kallias. The cooled area will disappear after 1 post unless scaled.

    • The spell freezes gases in the air to the point they condense, liquids are frozen, and the surfaces of solids are covered in a level of frost.
    • Living organisms within the area (including the caster, unless their borg is active) will experience a mild case of hypothermia for 1 post.



Tawat Alainfijar
Tier: D-tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must raise have their catalyst raised, pointing the tip at their chosen direction. They then must call the name of the spell.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Magoi
Description:

    Kallias either raises his catalyst or has his catalyst raised, pointing the tip of it in a chosen direction before saying, “Tawat Alainfijar”. This orders the rukh to gather at the tip of the catalyst, combusting gasses in the air. The fire is then shot forwards in a flamethrower fashion; it can reach up to 10m away, and its width is 30 cm. Those caught in the flames are dealt D-tier damage unless scaled. Due to the oxygen-rich source of gasses used for the spell, the fire is bright blue in color.


Har Intafada
Tier: C-tier
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must wave the tip of their catalyst in a circular motion before pointing towards their chosen target.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: 10 Magoi
Description:

    Kallias waves the tip of his catalyst in a circular motion, gathering magoi whilst he does so. He then points it towards a target, ordering the rukh to chase it; however, the farthest the Rukh can travel is up to 3m away. It then encircles the target, combusting the gasses around it. This results in an explosion that's 4m in diameter, engulfing the target and dealing C-tier damage. Due to the oxygen-rich source of gasses used for the spell, the fire is bright blue in color.



Last edited by Kallias Althaus on 07/11/17, 10:12 pm; edited 6 times in total


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2Kallias' Starting Abilities Empty Re: Kallias' Starting Abilities on 01/11/17, 07:10 pm

Amaya

Amaya
β-Tier
β-Tier
Uwshi Uwshi Alnar: Fireball is too large for a D tier spell. 1m would be a more appropriate size.
Additionally, how long does it take to build up the charge for this spell?

Tanmu Alghulyan: Too large once again. Please also specify the part of the spell you are spawning on cast (the edge or the center).
You're also applying way too many effects for a D-tier spell. Please limit it to 1 or 2.

Alainfijar Albarid: This is a D tier heat spell. You can't completely freeze something solid if it's too large. It'd be more the temperature of some crisp lettuce in the fridge.
You also cannot apply 2 cold based effects. You'll have to chose either the slow or hypothermia.
Please also specify the part of the spell you are spawning on cast (the edge or the center).

Tawat Alainfijar: I'll need you to specify how wide the flamethrower is (and in what shape it is) before I can grade this. Remember that increasing the width will decrease the range.

Har Intafada: Lacks detail. Does it move forward in a straight line? Does it chase? Does it spawn around someone? How large is the explosion?


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3Kallias' Starting Abilities Empty Re: Kallias' Starting Abilities on 01/11/17, 10:05 pm

Kallias Althaus

Kallias Althaus
D-Tier
D-Tier
Bump! Sorry for the mistakes!


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4Kallias' Starting Abilities Empty Re: Kallias' Starting Abilities on 03/11/17, 09:47 pm

Rima Fahim

Rima Fahim
A-Tier
A-Tier
Tanmu Alghulyan - For a D-Tier ability, I think the area should only be around 3-meters in diameter. As for the effects on it, you say that "solids will melt", to what extent? A D-Tier ability isn't going to be capable of melting most things, unless we're talking about melting say like...a piece of plastic or something. XD

Alainfijar Albarid - I think the same should be applied to this ability, and make the base size only 3-meters in diameter. I also feel like hypothermia might be a little bit *too* much for a D-Tier ability? I think a simple slow, or perhaps giving someone a minor case of the chills would be more suitable.

Tawat Alainfijar - If you want this ability to shoot 7-meters away, I think the width should be a little smaller. If you want to keep it 1-meter though, I think reducing the range to 5-meters would be the way to go.


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5Kallias' Starting Abilities Empty Re: Kallias' Starting Abilities on 07/11/17, 10:13 pm

Kallias Althaus

Kallias Althaus
D-Tier
D-Tier
Edited to fit what we discussed in discord!


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6Kallias' Starting Abilities Empty Re: Kallias' Starting Abilities on 08/11/17, 02:17 am

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
A-Tier
A-Tier
Approved.

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[center][b]Uwshi Uwshi Alnar[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must gather Magoi at the tip of their catalyst and then have the catalyst swung to aim at the chosen target.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits; for every 10 Magoi invested, the user creates an additional ball of fire.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Kallias gathers magoi at the tip of his catalyst for a moment, ordering the Rukh to ignite the gases (mainly oxygen) around the catalyst. The air combusts into a ball of fire with a diameter of 1m; due to the oxygen-rich fuel used for the spell, the fire burns bright blue. Once the ball forms, Kallias either swing the catalyst or has it swung at his target, shooting it forwards. It’s capable of traveling up to 8m away and deals D-tier damage to whatever it makes contact with.[/list]

[center][b]Tanmu Alghulyan[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must swing their catalyst diagonally in their chosen direction, saying the name of the spell as they do so.
[b]Scaling:[/b] AoE; for every 10 Magoi added, the diameter of the area is increased by 2m.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Kallias swings his catalyst diagonally, from top to bottom whilst saying “Tanmu Alghulyan”. With this, he’s ordering the Rukh to heat up a circular patch of area in front of him. The diameter of the patch is 3m, and the center of the spell may be placed up to 5m away from Kallias.The air in the patch shimmers with heat, distorting the air slightly; this is the only sign of the affected area. The heated area will disappear after 1 post unless scaled.
[list]
[*]Any liquids will evaporate, solids (such as ice, plastic, and other items with low heat resistance) will melt, and atoms within gases will ionize to the point of combustion.
[*]Living organisms that pass through the area (including the user, unless his Borg is active) will suffer from a minor heat stroke for 1 post.
[/list]
[/list]

[center][b]Alainfijar Albarid[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must wave their wand in a downward strike in their chosen direction whilst saying the name of the spell.
[b]Scaling:[/b] AoE; for every 10 Magoi added, the diameter of the area is increased by 2m.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Kallias swings his catalyst in a downward strike whislst saying "Alainfijar Albarid". This is a command to the Rukh to drastically lower the temperature of a circular patch of area. The diameter of the area is 3m, and the center of the spell may be placed up to 5m away from Kallias. The cooled area will disappear after 1 post unless scaled.
[list]
[*]The spell freezes gases in the air to the point they condense, liquids are frozen, and the surfaces of solids are covered in a level of frost.
[*]Living organisms within the area (including the caster, unless their borg is active) will experience a mild case of hypothermia for 1 post.
[/list]
[/list]

[center][b]Tawat Alainfijar[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must raise have their catalyst raised, pointing the tip at their chosen direction. They then must call the name of the spell.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Kallias either raises his catalyst or has his catalyst raised, pointing the tip of it in a chosen direction before saying, “Tawat Alainfijar”. This orders the rukh to gather at the tip of the catalyst, combusting gasses in the air. The fire is then shot forwards in a flamethrower fashion; it can reach up to 10m away, and its width is 30 cm. Those caught in the flames are dealt D-tier damage unless scaled. Due to the oxygen-rich source of gasses used for the spell, the fire is bright blue in color.[/list]

[center][b]Har Intafada[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must wave the tip of their catalyst in a circular motion before pointing towards their chosen target.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Kallias waves the tip of his catalyst in a circular motion, gathering magoi whilst he does so. He then points it towards a target, ordering the rukh to chase it; however, the farthest the Rukh can travel is up to 3m away. It then encircles the target, combusting the gasses around it. This results in an explosion that's 4m in diameter, engulfing the target and dealing C-tier damage. Due to the oxygen-rich source of gasses used for the spell, the fire is bright blue in color.[/list]


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