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1Ability Remake Empty Ability Remake on 17/08/17, 12:00 am

Jingyi Hou

Jingyi Hou
A-Tier
A-Tier
Due to some changes to the weapons Jingyi is getting, I got rid of her two A-tier moves, upgraded Shuangzi Wu to A-tier (along with upgrading its simplicity). I also made edits to how these abilities are worded: Moshe Ke, Bei-kun Zai Emeng, and Static Wool.

Formerly:

Magoi Strike
Tier: B
Class: Warriors
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must be equipped with a weapon that has a blade (such as a spear or a sword); the user must take a deep breath, take a stance and concentrate on channeling their magoi.
Scaling: Duration
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Magoi
Description:

    Jingyi takes a stance as she takes a deep breath, channeling her Magoi into her weapon. The Magoi has a golden shimmer to it as it covers the blade of her weapon, and for a single post her attacks with the blade deal A-tier damage due to the B-tier Magoi Manipulation.


Moshe Ke
Tier: B-tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Jingyi must be stationary enough to concentrate on her Magoi and allow it travel around her body.
Scaling: How many limbs are protected
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Magoi
Description:

    Jingyi stands still as she concentrates on her Magoi, imagining it forming as armor over certain parts of her body. As she does so, Magoi will manifest over said body parts and coat it like a protective armor. For three posts, it will protect a body part from damage until it has met an A-tier damage threshold. Body parts that are protected by Moshe Ke are the arms, legs, torso, and head. If scaled, she can protect more parts of her body. If the shell is targeted by a magic with a passive (Example: a Djinn passive that melts through objects and people), then it will protect Jingyi from such effects and will only shatter once the A-tier damage threshold is met.


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2Ability Remake Empty Re: Ability Remake on 17/08/17, 01:47 am

Rima Fahim

Rima Fahim
A-Tier
A-Tier
Looks good to me, approved for training!

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[center][b]Moshe Ke[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary/Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Jingyi must be stationary enough to concentrate on her Magoi and allow it travel around her body.
[b]Scaling:[/b] How many limbs are protected
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Jingyi stands still as she concentrates on her Magoi, imagining it forming as armor over certain parts of her body. As she does so, Magoi will manifest over said body parts and coat it like a protective armor. For three posts, it will protect a body part from damage until it has met an A-tier damage threshold. Body parts that are protected by Moshe Ke are the arms, legs, torso, and head. If scaled, she can protect more parts of her body. If the shell is targeted by a magic with a passive (Example: a Djinn passive that melts through objects and people), then it will protect Jingyi from such effects and will only shatter once the A-tier damage threshold is met.[/list]


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3Ability Remake Empty Re: Ability Remake on 17/08/17, 07:44 am

Jingyi Hou

Jingyi Hou
A-Tier
A-Tier


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4Ability Remake Empty Re: Ability Remake on 17/08/17, 12:04 pm

Rima Fahim

Rima Fahim
A-Tier
A-Tier
Approved! (Side Note; I'm fairly confident this ability is fine, but just like with everything else, if we ever need to pull it aside to re-edit some stuff please bare with us.)

Code:
[center][b]Moshe Ke[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary/Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Jingyi must be stationary enough to concentrate on her Magoi and allow it travel around her body.
[b]Scaling:[/b] How many limbs are protected
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Jingyi stands still as she concentrates on her Magoi, imagining it forming as armor over certain parts of her body. As she does so, Magoi will manifest over said body parts and coat it like a protective armor. For three posts, it will protect a body part from damage until it has met an A-tier damage threshold. Body parts that are protected by Moshe Ke are the arms, legs, torso, and head. If scaled, she can protect more parts of her body. If the shell is targeted by a magic with a passive (Example: a Djinn passive that melts through objects and people), then it will protect Jingyi from such effects and will only shatter once the A-tier damage threshold is met.[/list]


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