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1Zubaidah's Starting Abilities Empty Zubaidah's Starting Abilities on 30/05/17, 03:43 pm

Zuzu Mansur

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Izenportis Guard


Tier: C tier

Class: Warrior

Type: Defensive

Range: Close

Requirements/Drawbacks: Character must be using a polearm, such as some sort of spear. The stance needs the character to be able to keep themselves in a stable position before the incoming attack.

Scaling:Guard/Higher tier attacks can be guarded against for an additional 10 Stamina per tier above.

Sustain: 0

Cool Down: 2 posts

Cost: 20 stamina

Description:

    Holding the shaft with two hands, the character rests the butt of the polearm firmly on the ground, angling it diagonally across the body so as to deflect an incoming attack, of C tier damage or less, by moving the polearm from its slant into a perpendicular position.


Abrupt Thrust

Tier: D tier

Class: Warrior

Type: Offensive

Range: Short

Requirements/Drawbacks: The character must be using a polearm, such as some sort of spear. The character must be able to see the target, and focus on the vital point they are aiming for.

Scaling: Hits

Sustain: 0

Cool Down: 1 post

Cost: 10 stamina

Description:

    The character draws their polearm back quickly, before jabbing forwards, leaning into the blow with their full weight, aiming for the rib area to deal D tier damage. This attack is used to penetrate through armour by exerting as much force as they can onto a small area.


Sweeping Strike


Tier: D tier

Class: Warrior

Type: Offensive

Range: Short

Requirements/Drawbacks: The character must be using a polearm, such as a sort of spear. The character must be in a wide enough area to fully swing their polearm to be able to carry out this attack.

Scaling: Damage

Sustain: 0

Cool Down: 1 post

Cost: 10 stamina

Description:

    The character brings their polearm to one side before stepping forward and sweeping it to the other, slashing in an exact 180 degree horizontal plane to deal D tier damage. This attack is used to clear the area in front.


Henam Guard


Tier: D tier

Class: Warrior

Type: Defensive

Range: Close

Requirements/Drawbacks: The character must be using a polearm, such as a sort of spear. The character must be able to brace for the impact of an incoming attack and so must be in the stance before that.

Scaling: Block/Lowers damage taken by another tier for every additional 10 stamina.

Sustain: 0

Cool Down: 1 post

Cost: 10 stamina

Description:

    The character holds their polearm diagonally, the blade pointing down towards their weak leg. This allows the character to protect themselves from blows in line with the lower limbs of their weak side, while protecting the upper torso on their prominent side including the head, lowering the damage taken by one tier. This, however, has the unfortunate consequence of leaving the lower limbs of their prominent side vulnerable, as well as the upper torso of the weak side.



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2Zubaidah's Starting Abilities Empty Re: Zubaidah's Starting Abilities on 31/05/17, 11:46 am

Zuzu Mansur

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Is there anything I can improve on? I mean, I know there are but I'm not sure what to put in to imrove it.


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3Zubaidah's Starting Abilities Empty Re: Zubaidah's Starting Abilities on 31/05/17, 01:57 pm

Ariel

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You are going to need more than stating the weapon required to the requirements/drawbacks. Your first ability is a good example of what you should do.

Izenportis Guard:
- Scaling is an increase of 10 stamina, not 20.

Henam Guard:
- Just scale it so it can block an increase of one tier in damage per scaling. Like what you did with your first ability.


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4Zubaidah's Starting Abilities Empty Re: Zubaidah's Starting Abilities on 31/05/17, 02:58 pm

Zuzu Mansur

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How are the changes?


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5Zubaidah's Starting Abilities Empty Re: Zubaidah's Starting Abilities on 01/06/17, 05:29 pm

Zuzu Mansur

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Should I add another skill, or do you think four is enough?


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6Zubaidah's Starting Abilities Empty Re: Zubaidah's Starting Abilities on 02/06/17, 05:16 am

Diana Corvus

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You're missing a single D tier ability that you can create for free. If you need ideas for an ability, feel free to ask around in the Discord or message one of us. : )

Izenportis Guard


  • Requirements/Drawbacks: "...at least one post beforehand, and is susceptible to attacks one post after the block."

    This section isn't really needed since our combat systems allow for more fluid combat. The requirement that she needs stable footing is good enough without these further restrictions.
  • Cool Down: This should be 2 posts.
  • Description: You need to include that it may block up to C tier damage unless scaled.


Abrupt Thrust


  • Description: You need to include how much damage this ability deals. Which would be D tier damage.


Sweeping Strike


  • Requirements/Drawbacks: "The character cannot defend from attacks behind them one post after due to the nature of the attack."

    This could be edited out and exchanged for just stating she needs the space to be able to preform the sweep or something along those lines. This is for the same reason as above.
  • Description: You need to include how much damage this ability deals. Which would be D tier damage.


Henam Guard


  • Requirements/Drawbacks: Again, with the grading above. This could be taken out:

    "...at least one post beforehand."


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7Zubaidah's Starting Abilities Empty Re: Zubaidah's Starting Abilities on 02/06/17, 08:37 am

Zuzu Mansur

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There, I made the changes. Are those up to scratch?


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8Zubaidah's Starting Abilities Empty Re: Zubaidah's Starting Abilities on 02/06/17, 01:58 pm

Ariel

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Abrupt Thrust:

- You should be aware that armor does not exist on the site.

Henam Guard:

- Keep in mind this can only defend against D-Tier attacks (unless scaled).

You can also have another D-Tier ability without training it.


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9Zubaidah's Starting Abilities Empty Re: Zubaidah's Starting Abilities on 02/06/17, 02:09 pm

Zuzu Mansur

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The idea for Henam Guard is that it isn't a full on block. It only decreases the damage taken. So with no scaling, a C tier attack would become D tier. With scaling, C tier attack would become null.


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10Zubaidah's Starting Abilities Empty Re: Zubaidah's Starting Abilities on 02/06/17, 02:22 pm

Ariel

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Approved

I won't move this thread yet since you haven't created your last D-Tier Starter Ability.
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[center][b]Izenportis Guard[/b][/center]

[b]Tier:[/b] C tier

[b]Class:[/b] Warrior

[b]Type:[/b] Defensive

[b]Range:[/b] Close

[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Character must be using a polearm, such as some sort of spear. The stance needs the character to be able to keep themselves in a stable position before the incoming attack.

[b]Scaling:[/b]Guard/Higher tier attacks can be guarded against for an additional 10 Stamina per tier above.

[b]Sustain:[/b] 0

[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 posts

[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stamina

[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Holding the shaft with two hands, the character rests the butt of the polearm firmly on the ground, angling it diagonally across the body so as to deflect an incoming attack, of C tier damage or less, by moving the polearm from its slant into a perpendicular position. [/list]

[center][b]Abrupt Thrust[/b][/center]

[b]Tier:[/b] D tier

[b]Class:[/b] Warrior

[b]Type:[/b] Offensive

[b]Range:[/b] Short

[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The character must be using a polearm, such as some sort of spear. The character must be able to see the target, and focus on the vital point they are aiming for.

[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits

[b]Sustain:[/b] 0

[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post

[b]Cost:[/b] 10 stamina

[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The character draws their polearm back quickly, before jabbing forwards, leaning into the blow with their full weight, aiming for the rib area to deal D tier damage. This attack is used to penetrate through armour by exerting as much force as they can onto a small area.[/list]

[center][b]Sweeping Strike[/b][/center]


[b]Tier:[/b] D tier

[b]Class:[/b] Warrior

[b]Type:[/b] Offensive

[b]Range:[/b] Short

[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The character must be using a polearm, such as a sort of spear. The character must be in a wide enough area to fully swing their polearm to be able to carry out this attack.

[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage

[b]Sustain:[/b] 0

[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post

[b]Cost:[/b] 10 stamina

[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The character brings their polearm to one side before stepping forward and sweeping it to the other, slashing in an exact 180 degree horizontal plane to deal D tier damage. This attack is used to clear the area in front. [/list]

[center][b]Henam Guard[/b][/center]


[b]Tier:[/b] D tier

[b]Class:[/b] Warrior

[b]Type:[/b] Defensive

[b]Range:[/b] Close

[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The character must be using a polearm, such as a sort of spear. The character must be able to brace for the impact of an incoming attack and so must be in the stance before that.

[b]Scaling:[/b] Block/Lowers damage taken by another tier for every additional 10 stamina.

[b]Sustain:[/b] 0

[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post

[b]Cost:[/b] 10 stamina

[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The character holds their polearm diagonally, the blade pointing down towards their weak leg. This allows the character to protect themselves from blows in line with the lower limbs of their weak side, while protecting the upper torso on their prominent side including the head, lowering the damage taken by one tier. This, however, has the unfortunate consequence of leaving the lower limbs of their prominent side vulnerable, as well as the upper torso of the weak side. [/list]


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