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1Duality Spells "Remastered" Empty Duality Spells "Remastered" on 09/04/17, 12:59 am

Lagi

Lagi
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Resubmitting my B rank spells for this weapon.

Name: Wood Bullet Pillar
Tier: B-Tier
Element: Life
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
requirements/Drawbacks: The magic tool must strike the surface of plant life or earth with plant life immediately nearby.
Scaling: Powerhouse- For 10 more stamina,
each wooden pillar can do one rank higher in ability tier damage.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 15 Stamina
Description:
After striking plant life or the ground with plant life within 1m of the contact point, four 2 diameter wooden pillars covered in grass and roots sprout forth next to the user. The wooden pillars have spiked tips and can be sent growing towards a target within 30m of the caster. Each wooden pillar can deal D-tier damage.

Name: Wack-A-Mole Mallet
Tier: B-Tier
Element: Life
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must be holding Duality and strike the ground first
Scaling: Powerhouse- For 10 more stamina,
the hammer can do one rank higher in ability tier damage.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 15 Stamina
Description:
Upon striking a nearby medium of plant life, rapid growth causes a large hammer head of wood 4m in size to form with a thick 1m diameter. The vine acts as an "arm" that swings the hammer at the intended target and can grow long enough to give this spell a range of 10m from to point of impact where the magic tool struck the plant life. The hammer can deal B-tier damage and sustaining the ability allows it to be swung again or for a new hammer to be grown from the same medium (or a new medium if the user has struck another location.)



Last edited by Lagi on 25/05/17, 02:18 am; edited 2 times in total


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2Duality Spells "Remastered" Empty Re: Duality Spells "Remastered" on 09/04/17, 01:23 am

Diana Corvus

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I'm sorry, while these are well made abilities, I can't approve these as abilities for your magic weapon. They don't have anything to do with the function of the tool. :(


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3Duality Spells "Remastered" Empty Re: Duality Spells "Remastered" on 10/04/17, 12:21 am

Lagi

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Edited, basically i just have to strike the ground before life magic happens, right?


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4Duality Spells "Remastered" Empty Re: Duality Spells "Remastered" on 10/04/17, 10:33 am

Diana Corvus

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Essentially, yes, but the second ability doesn't really make much sense due to the awkwardness of the actions. Unless you're trying to crush someone's feet. And when you edited it, you didn't take out the part where it appeared in Lagi's hand. u ___u

Ah... while the first ability is okay, here is a more thorough grading from someone else:

Wood Bullet Pillar

Requirements: The magic tool must strike the surface of plant life or earth with plant life immediately nearby.
Description: After striking plant life or the ground with plant life within 1m of the contact point, four 2 diameter wooden pillars covered in grass and roots sprout forth next to the user. The wooden pillars have spiked tips and can be sent growing towards a target within 30m of the caster. Each wooden pillar can deal D-tier damage.

^ The size of the pillars was huge considering how far they were able to travel and that it seemed that the magic traveled 30m basically instantly. So I nerfed their size and made the origin point limited which makes more sense for why they can appear basically instantly. Alternatively, you could put a delay and let him keep the remote distance of the spell. But the size of the pillars should probably still be reduced. I don't think he realizes a 7m diameter pillar is so wide it probably won't be skewering anyone.

Wack-A-Mole Mallet

Requirements: Same as above
Description: Upon striking a nearby medium of plant life, rapid growth causes a large hammer head of wood 4m in size to form with a thick 1m diameter. The vine acts as an "arm" that swings the hammer at the intended target and can grow long enough to give this spell a range of 10m from to point of impact where the magic tool struck the plant life. The hammer can deal B-tier damage and sustaining the ability allows it to be swung again or for a new hammer to be grown from the same medium (or a new medium if the user has struck another location.)

^ The issue with this one being that the hammer was just magically appearing in his hand from the weapon even though its made of metal and didn't really state what it was made out of.


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5Duality Spells "Remastered" Empty Re: Duality Spells "Remastered" on 25/05/17, 02:19 am

Lagi

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finally edited techniques


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6Duality Spells "Remastered" Empty Re: Duality Spells "Remastered" on 28/05/17, 02:23 pm

Rima Fahim

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Approved for training. I don't see anything wrong with these, so I'll go ahead and approve them! However, if any of the other mods can catch something I missed, don't be surprised if they need to be reedited in the future.~

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[b]Name:[/b] Wood Bullet Pillar
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Mid
[b]requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The magic tool must strike the surface of plant life or earth with plant life immediately nearby.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Powerhouse- For 10 more stamina,
each wooden pillar can do one rank higher in ability tier damage.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 15 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
After striking plant life or the ground with plant life within 1m of the contact point, four 2 diameter wooden pillars covered in grass and roots sprout forth next to the user. The wooden pillars have spiked tips and can be sent growing towards a target within 30m of the caster. Each wooden pillar can deal D-tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Wack-A-Mole Mallet
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Element:[/b] Life
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Mid
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must be holding Duality and strike the ground first
[b]Scaling:[/b] Powerhouse- For 10 more stamina,
the hammer can do one rank higher in ability tier damage.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 15 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
Upon striking a nearby medium of plant life, rapid growth causes a large hammer head of wood 4m in size to form with a thick 1m diameter. The vine acts as an "arm" that swings the hammer at the intended target and can grow long enough to give this spell a range of 10m from to point of impact where the magic tool struck the plant life. The hammer can deal B-tier damage and sustaining the ability allows it to be swung again or for a new hammer to be grown from the same medium (or a new medium if the user has struck another location.)


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