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1Tai  Empty Tai on 03/04/14, 04:10 am

Daisuke

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Tai  350px-Kung-FuMynahBird
Name:Tai
Tier:D-tier
Type: Brute
Species:Bird
Speed:3m/s
Special:
Passive Traits

  • Flight~ Like many birds of the world Tai posses the ability to fly, but his isn't able to carry anyone.

Active Traits

  • Increased speed~With a duration of 3 posts and a cool down of 7 posts Tai's speed will be able to go the full amount of that tier instead of half. For this trait a 5 stamina cost is required.

Appearance:Tai resembles a large black-colored mynah bird, and he stands at the height of 5'3. He possess a orange beak and has yellow markings near his eyes. Tai wears a oriental, white-colored clothing with torn sleeves and blue straps. He would usually be seen wearing this, not every taking it off unless replacing it.



Last edited by Daisuke on 18/04/14, 03:31 pm; edited 7 times in total

2Tai  Empty Re: Tai on 03/04/14, 09:37 am

Duquin

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Fix your broken coding.

Being able to use martial arts isn't really a special. As a brute that can just kind of his basic offense so you don't HAVE to mention it.


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3Tai  Empty Re: Tai on 03/04/14, 01:32 pm

Daisuke

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Edits made

4Tai  Empty Re: Tai on 03/04/14, 01:53 pm

Duquin

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Approved!


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Thank you all, for everything.

5Tai  Empty Re: Tai on 18/04/14, 02:49 pm

Daisuke

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edited?

6Tai  Empty Re: Tai on 18/04/14, 02:57 pm

Duquin

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Your active trait seems more like a passive. I suggest saving it till you are C-tier and ready to gain your second passive ability.

If you'd like to keep it, you may, but it will need a magoi/stamina cost of 5 and a cool down of 7 posts.


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Thank you all, for everything.

7Tai  Empty Re: Tai on 18/04/14, 03:14 pm

Daisuke

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Edited and I can't think of anything for the active right now so I will leave it.

8Tai  Empty Re: Tai on 18/04/14, 03:32 pm

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Approved!

Code:
[img]http://img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130624031409/toriko/images/thumb/4/4a/Kung-FuMynahBird.jpg/350px-Kung-FuMynahBird.jpg[/img]
[b]Name:[/b]Tai
[b]Tier:[/b]D-tier
[b]Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Species:[/b]Bird
[b]Speed:[/b]3m/s
[b]Special:[/b]
[u]Passive Traits[/u]
[list]
[*]Flight~ Like many birds of the world Tai posses the ability to fly, but his isn't able to carry anyone.
[/list]
[u]Active Traits[/u]
[list]
[*]Increased speed~With a duration of 3 posts and a cool down of 7 posts Tai's speed will be able to go the full amount of that tier instead of half. For this trait a 5 stamina cost is required.
[/list]
[b]Appearance:[/b]Tai resembles a large black-colored mynah bird, and he stands at the height of 5'3. He possess a orange beak and has yellow markings near his eyes. Tai wears a oriental, white-colored clothing with torn sleeves and blue straps. He would usually be seen wearing this, not every taking it off unless replacing it.


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Thank you all, for everything.

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