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1Leila's starting pet Empty Leila's starting pet on 18/01/17, 07:17 pm

Leila Rosenberg

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Name: Trapper
Tier: D-rank
Type: Normal
Species: Mysterious hatchling
Appearance:
The first thing people would likely notice when they see Trapper is that he’s a rather unusual type of bird. While its origins are hidden even to its owner Trapper can be best described as a small crimson-colored bird. Around a single meter in height and possessing a wing-span of double its height Trapper might resemble the average eagle in size, but the soft and warm feeling of its white feathers seems nearly otherworldly and the crimson eyes betray a secret waiting to be uncovered.

Passive Traits:

  • Speech:
    Trait Tier: D
    Trait Requirement: Speech training
    Trait Description:
    Despite its young age Trapper quickly revealed his ability to communicate verbally with its owner, possessing the ability to learn and memorize languages. While he currently lacks the ability to communicate in any language aside from the one humans speak it’s still a useful gift to possess.
    Trait Effect:
    Allows it to communicate verbally with people in human languages

  • Embraced by Fire:
    Trait Tier: D
    Trait Requirement: Mysterious Hatchling species
    Trait Description:
    Perhaps a trait connected to the fact Leila found Trapper amidst ashes, Trapper seems to have an unnatural affinity toward fire...
    Trait Effect:
    A passive trait that allows Trapper to register fire-based abilities.

  • Insight:
    Trait Tier: D
    Trait Requirement: Mysterious Hatchling species
    Trait Description:
    Despite being what appears to be a bird of prey Trapper possesses the unique ability to bestow upon itself the ability to see past illusions of a caliber up to its own capacities.
    Trait Effect:
    This grants Trapper the ability to use its keen sight in order to grant itself the power to recognize D-rank illusions (basically ignore them).



Last edited by Leila Rosenberg on 18/01/17, 07:59 pm; edited 2 times in total


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2Leila's starting pet Empty Re: Leila's starting pet on 18/01/17, 07:27 pm

Diana Corvus

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All traits should be passive. We don't have any active traits in the new systems.

For Insight, I would suggest having it allow the pet (not Leila) to recognize D tier illusions in general. No need to put a cooldown on it. Though I can't say I'd allow a pet trait to effect the user as well. At least not this one.


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3Leila's starting pet Empty Re: Leila's starting pet on 18/01/17, 07:33 pm

Leila Rosenberg

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fixed as requested~ instead of empowering either Leila or itself (it can only buff one person at a time with this effect normally) it now can simply recognize/ignore illusions up to D-tier illusions instead.


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4Leila's starting pet Empty Re: Leila's starting pet on 18/01/17, 07:55 pm

Rima Fahim

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A very minior change, but could you bold all the trait names? Also, with Speech, please add a trait effect, as you only have a description down for it.

With insight, you need to reword the whole magoi bit. Just make it so Trapper is able to have a keen eye for illusions, allowing it to see through D-Tier illusions. Everything else looks fine to me though.


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5Leila's starting pet Empty Re: Leila's starting pet on 18/01/17, 08:00 pm

Leila Rosenberg

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there we go~ =3


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6Leila's starting pet Empty Re: Leila's starting pet on 18/01/17, 09:25 pm

Rima Fahim

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APPROVED. That is unless someone can spot a problem with any of this. I'm still relatively new to grading things, so I'm bound to miss something here and there. I also made a few minor edits, just to make it match up with the current template. <3

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[center][img]http://oi61.tinypic.com/2wh2r77.jpg[/img][/center]
[b]Name:[/b] Trapper
[b]Tier:[/b] D-rank
[b]Type:[/b] Normal
[b]Species:[/b] Mysterious Hatchling
[b]Appearance:[/b]
The first thing people would likely notice when they see Trapper is that he’s a rather unusual type of bird. While its origins are hidden even to its owner Trapper can be best described as a small crimson-colored bird. Around a single meter in height and possessing a wingspan of double its height Trapper might resemble the average eagle in size, but the soft and warm feeling of its white feathers seems nearly otherworldly and the crimson eyes betray a secret waiting to be uncovered.

[b]Passive Traits:[/b]
[list]
[*][b]Trait Name:[/b] Speech
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Speech training
[b]Trait Description:[/b]
Despite its young age Trapper quickly revealed his ability to communicate verbally with its owner, possessing the ability to learn and memorize languages. While he currently lacks the ability to communicate in any language aside from the one humans speak it’s still a useful gift to possess.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b]
Allows it to communicate verbally with people in human languages

[*][b]Trait Name:[/b] Embraced by Fire
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Mysterious Hatchling species
[b]Trait Description:[/b]
Perhaps a trait connected to the fact Leila found Trapper amidst ashes, Trapper seems to have an unnatural affinity toward fire...
[b]Trait Effect:[/b]
A passive trait that allows Trapper to register fire-based abilities.

[*][b]Trait Name:[/b] Insight
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Mysterious Hatchling species
[b]Trait Description:[/b]
Despite being what appears to be a bird of prey Trapper possesses the unique ability to bestow upon itself the ability to see past illusions of a caliber up to its own capacities.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b]
This grants Trapper the ability to use its keen sight in order to grant itself the power to recognize D-rank illusions (basically ignore them).
[/list]


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