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1Burbuja - Book 1 Empty Burbuja - Book 1 09/01/17, 03:37 pm

Giorgo

Giorgo
D-Tier
D-Tier

Burbuja: Urto
Tier: D
Class: Magician [Water]
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: User is required to direct and point the wand toward the location in which he wishes to perform the spell.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Magoi & 5 to Sustain
Description:

    Ordering the Rukh, the user casts a spell involving water magic. Creating a bubble filled with water, the user directs it at his target outward from where he casts it. It travels in a horizontal straight line from the point where the wand's tip was facing. It is not able to be popped as it is essentially a ball of water, thus anything thrown at it such as throwing knives will be stuck inside bubble until contact with the target. It's size is a meter radius. Distance it can travel is 10 meters.


Burbuja: Pugno
Tier: C
Class: Magician [Water]
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: User is required to tap his hand with his wand in order to cast the spell. Must come into contact with the target to deal damage.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 Post
Cost: 20 Magoi & 10 to Sustain
Description:

    Ordering the Rukh, the user casts a spell involving water magic. Creating a bubble filled with water, the user envelopes his hand of choice in a bubble. Once contact is made with the target and the bubble, it viciously pops letting out a burst of water damage. Knocking back the target a meter when hit. It deals C-Tier damage upon impact.


Burbuja: Avvolgere
Tier: D
Class: Magician [Water]
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: User is required to touch the target's limb with his wand in order to cast the spell.
Scaling: Duration
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Magoi & 5 to Sustain
Description:

    Ordering the Rukh, the user casts a spell involving water magic. Creating a bubble filled with water, the user wraps water filled bubbles onto the limb that his wand touches. Once contact is made with the target, bubbles with a high surface tension wrap around the target's limb. Bubbles of water surrounding the limb makes the limb unable to hold anything anything or even maneuver properly. In other words, if the target whom has been caught in this attack attempts to hold an item then it would end up slipping out of the user's hand. If it is a leg that was wrapped in bubbles then the target would be prevented from accurately moving with that leg. Duration of this spell is one whole post. To pop the bubbles cast by the spell, the target would have to cut through the bubbles with a sharp object exceeding the tier of the spell.


Burbuja: Tartaruga
Tier: D
Class: Magician [Water]
Type: Defensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: User is required to touch himself with his wand to cast the spell.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Magoi & 5 to Sustain
Description:

    Ordering the Rukh, the user casts a spell involving water magic. Encircling the user upon casting the spell, bubbles chocked with water inside surround the user and act in a similar manner to "Borg".


Burbuja: Balzare
Tier: D
Class: Magician [Water]
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: User is required to touch the floor beneath him his wand to cast the spell. Flicks of the wand are required to direct the path and stick the user's feet to the bubbles. Another flick is required to unstick the user's feet to the bubbles.
Scaling: Duration
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Magoi & 5 to Sustain
Description:

    Ordering the Rukh, the user casts a spell involving water magic. Bubbles are assembled to make a path in which allows the user to walk in air and over any obstacle for one post. As the user steps on a bubble of the path, it pops after the user walks off. Bubbles on the path are arranged in a single file line similar to a skinny rope. With a flick of the user's wand, the user can manipulate the direction of the path. Nothing of the same tier can puncture the water filled bubbles, only tiers higher can puncture the bubbles. Bubbles are able to allow the user stick on to them. These bubbles are as large as a basketball.



Last edited by Giorgo on 10/01/17, 09:30 pm; edited 3 times in total

2Burbuja - Book 1 Empty Re: Burbuja - Book 1 09/01/17, 07:26 pm

Giorgo

Giorgo
D-Tier
D-Tier

Finished

3Burbuja - Book 1 Empty Re: Burbuja - Book 1 09/01/17, 07:44 pm

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
A-Tier
A-Tier

Burbuja: Urto

  • Please specify how far the spell can travel and that it does D Tier damage in the description.


Burbuja: Pugno

  • The range would be CLOSE and the type would be OFFENSIVE / SUPPLEMENTARY.

  • Please specify how big the spell is around his hand. You say, "each hit" at the end but this isn't a multiple hit spell. Unless you wanted it to have amount scaling?

  • Also specify that it does D Tier damage in the description.

  • This should cost 20 / 10 magoi and the cooldown should be 2.


Burbuja: Avvolgere

  • The scaling can just be "Duration". No need to over limit yourself.

  • Please specify in the description how far this spell can travel. I'm not entirely sure if this also needs to be able to be broken by strength of the same tier but I'll ask about that.


Burbuja: Tartaruga

  • This should be CLOSE range.

  • The scaling on this doesn't make much sense? How is it doing damage if it's a DEFENSIVE move? D:

  • I'm also not sure what this spell is supposed to do. Could you elaborate further?


Also, you can make 4 D Tier and 1 C Tier spells so you're missing 1 D Tier for your starters.


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4Burbuja - Book 1 Empty Re: Burbuja - Book 1 09/01/17, 09:22 pm

Giorgo

Giorgo
D-Tier
D-Tier

Edited. Damage is scaling how much the skill can defend, its what Duquin told me simply do for my defensive skill on Trently.

5Burbuja - Book 1 Empty Re: Burbuja - Book 1 09/01/17, 09:50 pm

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
A-Tier
A-Tier

Aah, right. My bad. o:

You forgot to make a D Tier ability. You get 4 D Tier abilities and 1 C Tier. You've only made 3 D Tier and 1 C Tier.


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6Burbuja - Book 1 Empty Re: Burbuja - Book 1 10/01/17, 07:43 pm

Giorgo

Giorgo
D-Tier
D-Tier

Edited. Thanks for reminding me Diana.

7Burbuja - Book 1 Empty Re: Burbuja - Book 1 10/01/17, 08:13 pm

Duquin

Duquin
A-Tier
A-Tier

Burbuja: Avvolgere:

How are bubbles with water inside so heavy they overwhelm a limb? This kind of spell shouldn't really be all that effective on anyone with more than D-tier strength.

If you are trying to disable a limb, I think it would be more effective to make a bubble with surface tension that can't be broken with blunt force. So the enemy would need to poke it with something sharp in order to break it. In the meantime, the limb inside the bubble can't grab anything because the surface tension of the bubble pushes it away.


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8Burbuja - Book 1 Empty Re: Burbuja - Book 1 10/01/17, 09:30 pm

Giorgo

Giorgo
D-Tier
D-Tier

Edited. Thanks for the suggestion Duquin.

9Burbuja - Book 1 Empty Re: Burbuja - Book 1 11/01/17, 12:17 am

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
A-Tier
A-Tier

Approved! 0:

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[center][b]Burbuja: Urto[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician [Water]
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User is required to direct and point the wand toward the location in which he wishes to perform the spell.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi & 5 to Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Ordering the Rukh, the user casts a spell involving water magic. Creating a bubble filled with water, the user directs it at his target outward from where he casts it. It travels in a horizontal straight line from the point where the wand's tip was facing. It is not able to be popped as it is essentially a ball of water, thus anything thrown at it such as throwing knives will be stuck inside bubble until contact with the target. It's size is a meter radius. Distance it can travel is 10 meters.[/list]

[center][b]Burbuja: Pugno[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Magician [Water]
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User is required to tap his hand with his wand in order to cast the spell. Must come into contact with the target to deal damage.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi & 10 to Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Ordering the Rukh, the user casts a spell involving water magic. Creating a bubble filled with water, the user envelopes his hand of choice in a bubble. Once contact is made with the target and the bubble, it viciously pops letting out a burst of water damage. Knocking back the target a meter when hit. It deals C-Tier damage upon impact.[/list]

[center][b]Burbuja: Avvolgere[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician [Water]
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User is required to touch the target's limb with his wand in order to cast the spell.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi & 5 to Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Ordering the Rukh, the user casts a spell involving water magic. Creating a bubble filled with water, the user wraps water filled bubbles onto the limb that his wand touches. Once contact is made with the target, bubbles with a high surface tension wrap around the target's limb. Bubbles of water surrounding the limb makes the limb unable to hold anything anything or even maneuver properly. In other words, if the target whom has been caught in this attack attempts to hold an item then it would end up slipping out of the user's hand. If it is a leg that was wrapped in bubbles then the target would be prevented from accurately moving with that leg. Duration of this spell is one whole post. To pop the bubbles cast by the spell, the target would have to cut through the bubbles with a sharp object exceeding the tier of the spell.[/list]

[center][b]Burbuja: Tartaruga[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician [Water]
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User is required to touch himself with his wand to cast the spell.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi & 5 to Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Ordering the Rukh, the user casts a spell involving water magic. Encircling the user upon casting the spell, bubbles chocked with water inside surround the user and act in a similar manner to "Borg". It will block up to one D tier attack unless scaled.[/list]

[center][b]Burbuja: Balzare[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician [Water]
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User is required to touch the floor beneath him his wand to cast the spell. Flicks of the wand are required to direct the path and stick the user's feet to the bubbles. Another flick is required to unstick the user's feet to the bubbles.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi & 5 to Sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Ordering the Rukh, the user casts a spell involving water magic. Bubbles are assembled to make a path in which allows the user to walk in air and over any obstacle for one post. As the user steps on a bubble of the path, it pops after the user walks off. Bubbles on the path are arranged in a single file line similar to a skinny rope. With a flick of the user's wand, the user can manipulate the direction of the path. Nothing of the same tier can puncture the water filled bubbles, only tiers higher can puncture the bubbles. Bubbles are able to allow the user stick on to them. These bubbles are as large as a basketball.[/list]


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