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1Kokogarah Ability Update  Empty Kokogarah Ability Update 05/09/16, 03:06 pm

Kokogarah Letushraray

Kokogarah Letushraray
D-Tier
D-Tier

D Tier Abilities

Spoiler:

Hand Of The Back
Tier: D - Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must firmly plant their feet onto the ground before using this ability.
Scaling: The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
Sustain: --
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:
The user swings one of their free hands at the target that is at arm's length to connect the back of their hand to the target's face to do D-Tier Base Damage.

A Fork In It
Tier: D - Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must firmly plant their feet onto the ground before using this ability.
Scaling: The distance the ability can travel may increase by 5m for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
Sustain: --
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:
The user catches the weapon or limb of an opponent with the fork in the blade moving it into position. The user then uses their weapon to throw the captured target up to 5m away.

Around The Clock
Tier: D - Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must position their bodies correctly before using this ability.
Scaling: The number of hits or projectiles will double for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
Sustain: 2
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Stamina | 5
Description:
The user spins the sword in their hands while passing it from one hand to the other as they spin it around their body. If hit the target will obtain D-Tier Damage.

Bounce Back
Tier: D - Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Defensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must firmly plant their feet before using this ability.
Scaling: The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
Sustain: --
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:
The user moves their sword and blocks an attack with their sword. This ability can block up to C-Tier Damage.

C Tier Abilities

Spoiler:

Cutting You Down
Tier: D - Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must firmly plant their feet before using this ability.
Scaling: The tier of damage dealt will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
Sustain: --
Cool Down: 2 Post
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:
The user swaps hand holding techniques as they slash a |X| pattern into the target and D-Tier damage for each attack done.

2Kokogarah Ability Update  Empty Re: Kokogarah Ability Update 05/09/16, 05:49 pm

Duquin

Duquin
A-Tier
A-Tier

A Fork In It:

Ability tiers now determine complexity and "skill" involved in a technique. This ability is a bit "advanced" for an ability that should only reflect a beginner's level of mastery as the bare minimum required to perform. Accurately catching an incoming attack like this should be at least C or B tier.


Around The Clock:

Same issue as the previous ability.


Bounce Back:

Please be a bit more detailed in the description. You can no longer vaguely state that you perform a block or an attack. How do you perform this block? It should be a clear and deliberate method such as holding your weapon up horizontally and using a hand on the flat of the blade to brace for impact.


Cutting You Down:

What do you mean by "swaps hand holding techniques"? Switching from a normal grip to a reverse grip? If so, please word it a bit more clearly.

You have needing your feet planted as the requirement. But I don't see how that would be required for an ability like this. Having the different holding technique sounds more like an appropriate requirement.




You seem to be using planted feet as a catchall for most of the abilities. Please take the last edit I mentioned in mind and rework the other ability requirements to be more fitting for the abilities. What physical and environmental NEEDS are there in order for the actions that make up your ability to be performed?


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