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1Aten, The Ghost Cobra Empty Aten, The Ghost Cobra on 09/07/16, 03:12 am

Ptolemy Essa

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Aten, The Ghost Cobra Ouxnux
Name: Aten
Tier: C
Type: Normal
Species: Ghost Cobra
Appearance: Aten is 4 meters long and weighs just under 60 pounds making it a long if rather thin snake. despite it's relative light weight it is incredibly strong. Like most other cobra's of it's type Aten has color shifting scales, though by default they are white edged in black. Aten's fangs measure at 4 inches in length. Aten can generally be found wrapped around his master replacing his missing arm.
Beast Traits:

Trait Name: Color shifting Scales
Trait Tier:C
Trait Requirement: Ghost Cobra
Trait Description: The Ghost Cobra goes unseen in the dessert in thanks largely to it's amazing color shifting scales. It has the ability to blend in perfectly with it's surroundings, and while this is not true invisibility it is nearly as effective.
Trait Effect: Aten can blend into his surroundings perfectly so long as he remains still and moves slowly. Moving quickly breaks the illusion.

Trait Name: Strength of the Ghost Cobra
Trait Tier: B
Trait Requirement: Ghost Cobra
Trait Description: The ghost cobra is widely known as one of the most powerful creatures to grace the sands.
Trait Effect: The Snake can preform feats of exceptional strength. It's fangs can shatter rock and it's coils can crush stone into dust and deals B tier damage with it's physical strength alone.



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2Aten, The Ghost Cobra Empty Re: Aten, The Ghost Cobra on 09/07/16, 11:10 am

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Color Shifting Scales - This can't have equivalence to an invisibility spell. Besides, there isn't a standard for what a C-tier invisibility spell is capable of anymore. Each C-tier invisibility spell has the potential to be unique.

For this trait, put that the snake can blend in with a background so long as it is sitting still. Movement breaks the camouflage. You can look into upgrading it later.




Strength of the Ghost Cobra - Remove the line about puncturing steel.


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3Aten, The Ghost Cobra Empty Re: Aten, The Ghost Cobra on 09/07/16, 03:54 pm

Ptolemy Essa

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Done and Done yo


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4Aten, The Ghost Cobra Empty Re: Aten, The Ghost Cobra on 09/07/16, 06:52 pm

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I've corrected part of the wording and a spelling error. If you're okay with these edits then consider your ability approved:

Aten, The Ghost Cobra Ouxnux
Name: Aten
Tier: C
Type: Normal
Species: Ghost Cobra
Appearance: Aten is 4 meters long and weighs just under 60 pounds making it a long if rather thin snake. despite it's relative light weight it is incredibly strong. Like most other cobra's of it's type Aten has color shifting scales, though by default they are white edged in black. Aten's fangs measure at 4 inches in length. Aten can generally be found wrapped around his master replacing his missing arm.
Beast Traits:

Trait Name: Color shifting Scales
Trait Tier:C
Trait Requirement: Ghost Cobra
Trait Description: The Ghost Cobra goes unseen in the dessert in thanks largely to it's amazing color shifting scales. It has the ability to blend in perfectly with it's surroundings, and while this is not true invisibility it is nearly as effective.
Trait Effect: Aten can blend into his surroundings perfectly so long as he remains still. Moving quickly breaks the illusion.

Trait Name: Strength of the Ghost Cobra
Trait Tier: B
Trait Requirement: Ghost Cobra
Trait Description: The ghost cobra is widely known as one of the most powerful creatures to grace the sands.
Trait Effect: The Snake can perform feats of exceptional strength. It's fangs can shatter rock and it's coils can crush stone into dust and deals B tier damage with it's physical strength alone.

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[b]Name:[/b] Aten
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Normal
[b]Species:[/b] Ghost Cobra
[b]Appearance:[/b] Aten is 4 meters long and weighs just under 60 pounds making it a long if rather thin snake. despite it's relative light weight it is incredibly strong. Like most other cobra's of it's type Aten has color shifting scales, though by default they are white edged in black. Aten's fangs measure at 4 inches in length. Aten can generally be found wrapped around his master replacing his missing arm.
[b]Beast Traits:[/b]

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Color shifting Scales
[b]Trait Tier:[/b]C
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Ghost Cobra
[b]Trait Description:[/b] The Ghost Cobra goes unseen in the dessert in thanks largely to it's amazing color shifting scales. It has the ability to blend in perfectly with it's surroundings, and while this is not true invisibility it is nearly as effective.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Aten can blend into his surroundings perfectly so long as he remains still. Moving quickly breaks the illusion.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Strength of the Ghost Cobra
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] B
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Ghost Cobra
[b]Trait Description:[/b] The ghost cobra is widely known as one of the most powerful creatures to grace the sands.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] The Snake can perform feats of exceptional strength. It's fangs can shatter rock and it's coils can crush stone into dust and deals B tier damage with it's physical strength alone.

PM me if this is acceptable and I'll lock/move the thread.


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Thank you all, for everything.

5Aten, The Ghost Cobra Empty Re: Aten, The Ghost Cobra on 10/07/16, 02:01 pm

Ptolemy Essa

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Works for me


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6Aten, The Ghost Cobra Empty Re: Aten, The Ghost Cobra on 10/07/16, 03:57 pm

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Approved, add it t your vault~


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