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1Sloths Abilities [Revamped] Empty Sloths Abilities [Revamped] 14/04/16, 11:15 am

Diligence

Diligence
A-Tier
A-Tier

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Name: Shut down
Tier: A
Cost: 40 Stamina | 20 Stamina
Weapon Type: Hands
Class: Offensive / Supplementary
Range: 20 M See notes
Cool-Down: 7 posts
Description: Dynatos moves at speeds of 25 m/s. He strikes the pressure points of his opponent at 20 m within him, causing selects parts of their body (3 limbs)  to go numb for 3 posts and deals B tier damage.


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Name: Hawk Eyes
Tier: B
Cost: 30 Stamina | 15 Stamina
Weapon Type: Hand
Class: Defensive
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: Dynatos focuses on the opponent’s movements. He then moves at speeds of 20 m/s parrying whatever attack they launch at him with his arm. This technique can parry up to 1 A tier amount of damage..

Name: Flame Bite
Tier: B
Cost: 30 Stamina | 15 Stamina
Beast Type: Brute
Class: Supplementary
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: Ares bites the opponent tearing through their muscle at the same time he bites the opponent and tears into their muscle he produces fire from his mouth into the torn muscle/wound at 20m/s. The opponent suffers 2nd degree burns while the flame from the attack itself lasts for 2 posts and deals additional D-tier  damage per  post of actual flames.  

C
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Name: No Name
Tier: C
Cost: 20 | 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Hand
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 3 Posts + 1 if sustained
Description: Dynatos rushes at his opponent at speeds of 15 m/s. He then quickly bear hugs them. clinging tightly he jumps 10 M into the air. He spins multiple times before launching them at the ground to deal C-tier damage.

Name: Flamethrower
Tier: C
Cost: 20 | 10
Beast Type: Brute
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10 M
Cool-Down: 3 posts + 1 if sustained
Description: Ares opens his mouth and releases a stream of fire that travels up to 10 meters at 15 m/s. The opponent hit with this technique suffers 2nd degree burns.

Name: Gaia Devestation Lv
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Stamina | 10 Stamina
Weapon Type:Hand
Class: Offensive
Range: 10 M
Cool-Down: 3 Post +1
Description: Dynatos clenches his fist; quickly rearing back Dynatos slams his clenched fist into the ground cause a crater to form in the ground around the point of impact. The area in a 10 M range is destroyed and sunk in. There becomes a lot of deformities in the ground due to the technique. Debris goes flying out in a 10 M range as well. The ruble from the technique lasts for the thread but only in the 10 M range of the move. The debris sent flying moves 15 m/s and will do C tier damage.

D
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Name: Megalos Spear Lv 1
Tier: D
Cost: 5 Stamina | 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Offensive
Range: 5 m
Cool-Down: 2 posts + 1 if sustained
Description: Dynatos changes the way he holds the sword it appears as if he was holding a spear and is about to throw it. He then rears back and launches his sword at the opponent up to 5 meters away at 10 m/s, dealing D-tier damage to anything it strikes. Dynatos will be unable to use the sword again until he picks up the weapon.

Name: Speed Boost Lv 1
Tier: D
Cost: 10|5 Stamina
Weapon Type: Magoi Manipulation
Class: Supplementary
Range: Self
Cool-Down: 4 posts
Description: Dynatos focuses his energy into his legs allowing him to move at 10 m/s for the remainder of the post.

Name: Hard Body Lv 1
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: - Body
Class: Defensive
Range: Self
Cool-Down: 2 posts + 1 if sustained
Description: Dynatos hard focuses his energy into hardening his muscles at 10 m/s, allowing him to deflect up to C-tier damage.. This increases the amount of damage his body can withstand, but it all causes him to be implanted into the ground where he is standing.



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2Sloths Abilities [Revamped] Empty Re: Sloths Abilities [Revamped] 14/04/16, 01:53 pm

Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
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Ω-Tier

Shut down : Speed should be 25m/s for A-tier strength ability, then the effect should be immobilization because of strength specialization. In this case, it will deal B-tier immobilization (B-Tier: Immobilize 3 limbs for 3 posts.) and deal B-tier damage because you are using offensive/supplementary class.

Hawk eyes: The range should be close as you are deflecting it the moment the attack got close to you

Flame bite: The cost for it should be 30 | 15 ^^

No name : weapon type should be “hand”. Also the speed should be 15m/s.
This is the wording that I suggested::
Dynatos rushes at his opponent at speeds of 15 m/s. He then quickly bear hugs them. clinging tightly he jumps 10 M into the air. He spins multiple times before launching them at the ground to deal C-tier damage.

Flamethrower: the cooldown should be 3 posts + 1 if sustained. Also you are missing the class in it.

Gaia Devestation Lv: From the wording, it is enough to just put “offensive” in the class, imo ^^ Also you forgot to put weapon type there. [Since you increased the tier of this ability, you will need to retrain it later when it got approved ^^]

Megalos spear Lv 1: Cool down needs 2 posts + 1 if sustained. Cost will be 10 | 5 stamina. Range will be 5m.

Hard body: Cool down must be 2 posts + 1 if sustained.



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3Sloths Abilities [Revamped] Empty Re: Sloths Abilities [Revamped] 14/04/16, 02:13 pm

Diligence

Diligence
A-Tier
A-Tier

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4Sloths Abilities [Revamped] Empty Re: Sloths Abilities [Revamped] 15/04/16, 07:22 am

Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
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Sloths Abilities [Revamped] Approval_zpsoloj6ntd

Approved~

Add this following to vault~
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[spoiler][b]Name:[/b] Shut down
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Cost:[/b] 40 Stamina | 20 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Hands
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive / Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 20 M See notes
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 7 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Dynatos moves at speeds of 25 m/s. He strikes the pressure points of his opponent at 20 m within him, causing selects parts of their body (3 limbs)  to go numb for 3 posts and deals B tier damage. [/spoiler]


[size=16][font=Courier New]β[/font][/size]
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[b]Name:[/b] Hawk Eyes
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina | 15 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Hand
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down: [/b]5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Dynatos focuses on the opponent’s movements. He then moves at speeds of 20 m/s parrying whatever attack they launch at him with his arm. This technique can parry up to 1 A tier amount of damage..

[b]Name:[/b] Flame Bite
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina | 15 Stamina
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Ares bites the opponent tearing through their muscle at the same time he bites the opponent and tears into their muscle he produces fire from his mouth into the torn muscle/wound at 20m/s. The opponent suffers 2nd degree burns while the flame from the attack itself lasts for 2 posts and deals additional D-tier  damage per  post of actual flames.  
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[size=16][font=Courier New]C[/font][/size]
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[b]Name:[/b] No Name
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Hand
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range: [/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts + 1 if sustained
[b]Description:[/b] Dynatos rushes at his opponent at speeds of 15 m/s. He then quickly bear hugs them. clinging tightly he jumps 10 M into the air. He spins multiple times before launching them at the ground to deal C-tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Flamethrower
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 10
[b]Beast Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 M
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts + 1 if sustained
[b]Description:[/b] Ares opens his mouth and releases a stream of fire that travels up to 10 meters at 15 m/s. The opponent hit with this technique suffers 2nd degree burns.
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[size=16][font=Courier New]D[/font][/size]
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[b]Name:[/b] Megalos Spear Lv 1
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 5 Stamina | 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 5 m
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts + 1 if sustained
[b]Description:[/b] Dynatos changes the way he holds the sword it appears as if he was holding a spear and is about to throw it. He then rears back and launches his sword at the opponent up to 5 meters away at 10 m/s, dealing D-tier damage to anything it strikes. Dynatos will be unable to use the sword again until he picks up the weapon.

[b]Name:[/b] Speed Boost Lv 1
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10|5 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Magoi Manipulation
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 4 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Dynatos focuses his energy into his legs allowing him to move at 10 m/s for the remainder of the post.

[b]Name:[/b] Hard Body Lv 1
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] - Body
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range: [/b]Self
[b]Cool-Down: [/b]2 posts + 1 if sustained
[b]Description:[/b] Dynatos hard focuses his energy into hardening his muscles at 10 m/s, allowing him to deflect up to C-tier damage.. This increases the amount of damage his body can withstand, but it all causes him to be implanted into the ground where he is standing.
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This one is approved for training~
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[b]Name:[/b] Gaia Devestation Lv
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina | 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b]Hand
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10 M
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Post +1
[b]Description:[/b] Dynatos clenches his fist; quickly rearing back Dynatos slams his clenched fist into the ground cause a crater to form in the ground around the point of impact. The area in a 10 M range is destroyed and sunk in. There becomes a lot of deformities in the ground due to the technique. Debris goes flying out in a 10 M range as well. [b]The ruble from the technique lasts for the thread but only in the 10 M range of the move.[/b] The debris sent flying moves 15 m/s and will do C tier damage.



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