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1Nahas, Xylo [Ability App] Empty Nahas, Xylo [Ability App] on 18/03/14, 08:50 am

Xylo

Xylo
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D-Tier
Name: ربط السرقة باري (Hook Thieving Parry).
Tier: D.
Cost: 10 Stamina.
Weapon Type: Shamshir.
Class: Defense.
Range: Self.
Duration: Instant.
Cool-Down: 2 Posts.
Description: A simple parry only capable with the use curved blades known as the Shamshir. This technique is only used when an opposing sword is swung at the user from above them (pulling the blade down upon the user). By swinging the Shamshir at the opposing blade at a complete opposite angle, the user will attempt to clash blades together before giving way by a miniscule amount. By utilizing the curve in the Shamshir, the wielder will that transfer the weight from the opposing sword away from the user whilst bringing their elbows higher allowing the end of their hilt to point directly in the air. The opposing blade will then either continue it's track to the side of the user or stop completely, with the user's sword in between his own body and the opponents blade. With less opposing weight to deal with the user is able to have a free hand to strike the opponent.

Name: اضطراب الغبار (Dust Disorder).
Tier: D.
Cost: 10 Stamina.
Weapon Type: Shamshir.
Class: Offensive.
Range: 10m.
Duration: 2 Posts.
Cool-Down: 2 Posts.
Description: In an attempt of obscuring vision for the opponent temporarily, the user will swing his blade across the ground afront him, whilst curving the blade allowing the Shamshir (which is curved itself) to cut a light layer of earth/dust before swinging it affront him directing a small cloud of dust affront him. The cloud of dust gains size swiftly, with a radius of 1m and the cloud being almost perfectly spherical, it is impossible to see through which will linger for 2 posts before dissipating into thin air.

Name: هلال الانفطار (Crescent Moon Cleaving).
Tier: C.
Cost: 20 Stamina.
Weapon Type: Shamshir.
Class: Offensive.
Range: 1m.
Duration: Instant.
Cool-Down: 3 Posts.
Description: Initiated through precise timing in given openings, the user wields their blade to either side of the body whilst keeping both legs together with one heel in front of the other, but touching each other. Within the instant of the stance being made, the user will leap forward 1 meter traveling at 15m/s whilst pulling their blade across the torso in a diagonal fashion. The user will spin a full 360 motion in an instant, which will tear halfway through muscle on any given area the blade strikes (C-Tier Damage).



Last edited by Xylo on 20/03/14, 09:45 pm; edited 1 time in total


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2Nahas, Xylo [Ability App] Empty Re: Nahas, Xylo [Ability App] on 19/03/14, 10:49 am

Xylo

Xylo
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Requesting a review on this ability app. I know i have two more D rank abilities to spend, but i shall keep them for later use? If that's not alright i'll just do without them.


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3Nahas, Xylo [Ability App] Empty Re: Nahas, Xylo [Ability App] on 20/03/14, 03:59 pm

Duquin

Duquin
A-Tier
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Dust Disorder: You can't blind someone for two full posts just by getting dust in their eyes. Please change to wording so that you obscure their vision, but full blindness is a no go.

Crescent Moon Cleaving: Please add your movement speed during the 1m movement.


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Thank you all, for everything.

4Nahas, Xylo [Ability App] Empty Re: Nahas, Xylo [Ability App] on 20/03/14, 09:46 pm

Xylo

Xylo
D-Tier
D-Tier
Edits made.


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5Nahas, Xylo [Ability App] Empty Re: Nahas, Xylo [Ability App] on 22/03/14, 10:20 pm

Duquin

Duquin
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You can still get 2 more free D tier starter abilities. But for now....


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Thank you all, for everything.

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