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1Lya's Start Abilities  Empty Lya's Start Abilities 14/09/15, 12:06 am

Lya

Lya
D-Tier
D-Tier

Name: Water Ball Form
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Water
Class: Defensive|Supplementary
Range: 10m
Cool-Down: 3 Posts
Description:
Using this spell, Lya is capable of creating a ball of water up to 5m in diameter for 2 posts. This ball can float and be controlled within 10m of the user at 10m/s. The ball of water can absorb up to D rank damage before bursting out into a puddle. The user or others can jump into the ball to be moved around within the range of the spell. However, as they are in water, they must hold their breath.

Name: Minor Hail
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Water - Ice
Class: Offensive|Supplementary
Range: 10m
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description:
A simple spell in which Lya freezes water in the air around her to form a hail storm of up to five softball sized spheres that can be shot at opponents within 10m of the user at 10m/s. Should the Hail make contact with an opponent's limb, that limb will be frozen and restricted for two posts.

Name: Mist
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Water
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10m
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description:
Lya can create a thick spherical field of fog 5m in diameter within 10m of her position for two posts. The fog spreads at 10m/s. Those within the fog will find themselves disoriented and unable to see for one post until the fog clears.

Name: Ice Whip
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Magoi
Element: Water - Ice
Class: Offensive | Supplementary
Range: 10m
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description:
Lya can form a whip made of ice that can be up to 5m in length from the tip of her staff or her hand. The whip can lash out up to 10m at 10m/s. Anything the whip touches freezes. Should the whip make contact with an opponent's limb, that limb will be frozen and restricted for two posts.

Name: Mirror Construct
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Magoi
Element: Water - Ice
Class: Defense|Supplementary
Range: 20m
Cool-Down: 4
Description:
Lya can freeze the water in the air around her to create a reflective surface similar to a mirror. The ice forms at 15m/s and can cover up to 10m within 20m of Lya. The ice can be manipulated into various forms and split up to form various things. However, the ice must remain within the 10m diameter scale of the spell. The mirrors can last for 3 posts before melting. They require C rank damage to be shattered. The true purpose of the mirrors is that they react to Lya's magic. As such, so long as a mirror is out on the field, Lya can use it with her spells. As such, she can shoot projectiles such as “Minor Hail” out of any mirrors in the area and use the mirrors to transport her spells throughout the range of Mirror Construct. Should the mirror make contact with an opponent's limb, that limb will be frozen and restricted for two posts.


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2Lya's Start Abilities  Empty Re: Lya's Start Abilities 14/09/15, 04:19 am

Azix Niraj

Azix Niraj
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

Water Ball Form: A few things wrong with this one. First, a D-tier ability is unable to be two different types of classes (Defensive/Supplementary or Offensive/Supplementary). This is because the effect of both parts would be halved and you are unable to halve beyond D-tier. Second, Magicians don't gain access to defensive abilities within the Intelligence Spec. They can still clash against an ability with an equal-tier ability to prevent taking damage, but they don't get the defensive boost. The cooldown should be two posts.

Minor Hail: Same thing with the offensive/supplementary. It would have to be one or the other at D-tier.

Mirror Construct: See above. The cooldown should be three posts. Also, the mirrors would only last for as long as the ability is sustained, not a set duration. The maximum amount of times it could be split would be limited to two, since it is C-tier.

As a note for all your spells, you can remove the "lasts for x turns", since that depends on if you sustain the ability or not. If it is part of a status effect, however, you may keep that wording. Please also note under cost that the ability is "10 magoi|5 sustained" if it is D-tier or "20 magoi|10 Sustained" if it is C-Tier.

Other than that, I do like your spells, they just need those edits. Don't forget to go over the Ability Guidelines to make sure you have a grasp on the rules. If you have any questions, don't hesitate to PM me or another Staff member. If you have skype, you can also message me (Name is Xenofection). We're always available to help ^^ Bump when you've edited.


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