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1Axel's Abilities Empty Axel's Abilities on 20/06/15, 03:18 am

Daisuke Yuu

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Name: Arcing Strike
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 2 Post
Description: Axel holds his sword with both hands and does a strike in a downward arc formation, similar to dropping a hammer. The blow does D tier damage, and the sword comes down at a speed of 10 m/s.

Name: Power Kick
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Hand to Hand
Class: Supplementary
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 2 Post
Description: The user unleashes a powerful lateral kick aiming at the head that will send his opponent flying away at 10 m/s. The opponent goes back 1-5 meters.

Name: Power Punch
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Hand to Hand
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 2 Post
Description: The user puts strength into a punch and lands a hit on the opponent. The punch comes at a speed of 10 m/s and the hit deals D tier damage.

Name: Mad Dash
Tier: D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: N/A
Class: Supplementary
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 2 Post
Description: The user does a dash at speed of 10 meters a second. The dash can be anywhere between 1-5 meters.

Name: Parry
Tier: C
Cost: 20 Stamina
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Defensive
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 4 posts
Description: The user moves their blade at 10 m/s to deflect up to B-tier damage.



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2Axel's Abilities Empty Re: Axel's Abilities on 20/06/15, 04:04 am

Merrze

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Mad Dance: You didn't put the speed of the ability which would be 10m/s, also D-tier abilities can only have one part so there can only be one attack. You also didn't list how much damage the ability does which in this case would be D-tier. Also the cool down would be two posts not 4, and the range would be close.

Power Kick: Okay since you are moving in this ability it would be Supplementary and Offensive. You can't make D-tier abilities that are both, you can either charge at the enemy, kick the enemy away or you can kick him to deal damage which would need to be listed and so would the speed. The range would be close if you kick him and the cool down would be 2 posts.

Power Punch: You need to list how fast you are punching the enemy and how much damage the punch deals which would be D-tier damage. The range would be close and the cool down would be 2 posts.

Mad Dash:Since you are dashing this would be a supplementary ability and the range would be close. Also since it is D-tier you can only dash or attack, I assume you would want the dash so it would be supplementary the cool down for this ability would 2 posts. The speed of the ability would also be 10m/s not 15m/s

Whirlwind Shield: The range for this ability would be close and you need to list how fast you are moving your sword around in the attack. You also need to list how much damage it blocks which in this case it can block up to B-tier damage.

Before you go and edit your abilities I suggest you check out this link which is the ability guidelines.

https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t2486-ability-guidelines-important#11813

And here are some ability examples that you can look at for reference.

https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t4296-strength-examples-and-explanations


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3Axel's Abilities Empty Re: Axel's Abilities on 20/06/15, 04:43 am

Daisuke Yuu

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4Axel's Abilities Empty Re: Axel's Abilities on 20/06/15, 05:11 am

Merrze

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Power Kick and Mad Dash: Something I forgot to add but you need to put the distance for these abilities. Like how far the kick would send them and how far you can dash, which would follow the strength range in the guidelines.

For all of your abilities you forgot to put the proper cool downs so please fix those. And for power punch you did not fix the range.


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5Axel's Abilities Empty Re: Axel's Abilities on 20/06/15, 07:19 am

Ariella Negri

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Minor correction, the distance would go off of scale. For strength, range and scale are the same, but other specializations, it does not, so it should be scale. :)


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6Axel's Abilities Empty Re: Axel's Abilities on 21/06/15, 02:55 am

Daisuke Yuu

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Bump

7Axel's Abilities Empty Re: Axel's Abilities on 21/06/15, 07:14 am

Ariella Negri

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Mad Dash: This would be 10 m/s, not 15 m/s.

Get that fixed and you should be good to go.


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8Axel's Abilities Empty Re: Axel's Abilities on 21/06/15, 11:28 am

Daisuke Yuu

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9Axel's Abilities Empty Re: Axel's Abilities on 21/06/15, 12:24 pm

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Looks good, Pre-Approved.


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10Axel's Abilities Empty Re: Axel's Abilities on 21/06/15, 06:02 pm

Ariella Negri

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looks good, approved! Add to vault~

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[b]Name:[/b] Arcing Strike
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Description:[/b] Axel holds his sword with both hands and does a strike in a downward arc formation, similar to dropping a hammer. The blow does D tier damage, and the sword comes down at a speed of 10 m/s.

[b]Name:[/b] Power Kick
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Hand to Hand
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Description:[/b] The user unleashes a powerful lateral kick aiming at the head that will send his opponent flying away at 10 m/s. The opponent goes back 1-5 meters.

[b]Name:[/b] Power Punch
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Hand to Hand
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Description:[/b] The user puts strength into a punch and lands a hit on the opponent. The punch comes at a speed of 10 m/s and the hit deals D tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Mad Dash
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] N/A
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Post
[b]Description:[/b] The user does a dash at speed of 10 meters a second. The dash can be anywhere between 1-5 meters.

[b]Name:[/b] Parry
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 4 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user moves their blade at 10 m/s to deflect up to B-tier damage.


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