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1Eve Will [5 new abbilties] Empty Eve Will [5 new abbilties] on 16/05/15, 11:41 pm

Eve Will

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Name: Board Keeper
Tier: B
Cost: 30/15
Weapon Type: Shield
Class: Defensive
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: The user takes cover behind their shield at 20m/s, blocking incoming damage up to 1 A tier or equivalent.

Name: En passant
Tier: C
Cost: 20
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Offensive
Range: 10 meters
Cool-Down: 2 posts or sustain+1
Description: The user kicks their sword into the sky at 15m/s, which will come down within 10meters of the user while inflicting C rank damage to everything in its path.

Name: FootShoot
Tier: C
Cost: 20/10
Weapon Type: Foot
Class: Offensive
Range: 10m
Cool-Down: 3/sustain+1
Description: Kicks something similar size to a football at 15m/s with a max range of 10 meters inflicting C blunt damage. [Something loose on the ground [Bin, stone, head, small bench] Dimensions will not exceed 30centimeters.

Name: Wave Punch
Tier: B
Cost: 30/15
Weapon Type:Fist
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: The user punches at 20m/s, that deals B-Tier damage. If striking an object, the ground, or a wall, the damage ripples out in a 10 meter diameter, causing massive destruction to the object/floor/wall struck.

Name: Bear Hug
Tier: B
Cost: 30/15
Weapon Type: Arms
Class: Offensive/supplementary
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 5 posts
Description: Grabs a target with both arms hugging them extremely tight at 20m/s and inflicts C rank damage while Immobilizing 2 limbs for 3 posts.



Last edited by Eve Will on 20/05/15, 07:38 pm; edited 5 times in total


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2Eve Will [5 new abbilties] Empty Re: Eve Will [5 new abbilties] on 17/05/15, 07:50 am

Ariella Negri

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B-tier abilities do not need the "or sustain+1" on the cool-down, as you will never be able to sustain a B-tier ability beyond 4 turns, even at Omega-tier.

En passant The way the first part of this is worded is that it is kicked up into the air and comes down. The way the second part is worded is that it shoots OUT ten meters. It can do one or the other. Also, if it goes up one post and does not come down until the next, you will be without your weapon until you retrieve it.

Wave Punch: This needs to include damage done and the size effect of the "ripple"

FootShoot: You need to indicate WHAT is being kicked. If you are kicking a piece of the ground, please specify this. You also need to indicate the size in specific measurements.

Bear Hug: C-tier immobilization only affects two limbs for three posts.


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3Eve Will [5 new abbilties] Empty Re: Eve Will [5 new abbilties] on 17/05/15, 10:07 am

Eve Will

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Made chances though I think, I could word wave punch allot similar. em found a quick example on Google via images, pretty much this but can punch ground, wall or a person. Not that I think you didn't understand that. Just not sure how to word it
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4Eve Will [5 new abbilties] Empty Re: Eve Will [5 new abbilties] on 17/05/15, 12:12 pm

Vardreth

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En passant:
There was actually a ruling on abilities explaining that projectiles had to land in the same post they were fired off in order to avoid the complications of what that caused. This would actually need to be changed on the ability v.v.

Wave Punch:
I know exactly what you're going with here. Zai, from the Coli, has the same ability :D. I've reworded it a bit here. I do want to make sure you're aware that if you hit a living creature, it won't ripple throughout their body. It will just deal localized damage.


The below are approved, all we need is En Passant to get a quick fix ^_^.

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[b]Name:[/b] Board Keeper
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Shield
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user takes cover behind their shield at 20m/s, blocking incoming damage up to 1 A tier or equivalent.
 
[b]Name:[/b] FootShoot
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Foot
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10m
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3/sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] Kicks something similar size to a football at 15m/s with a max range of 10 meters inflicting C blunt damage. [Something loose on the ground [Bin, stone, head, small bench] Dimensions will not exceed 30centimeters.  

[b]Name:[/b] Wave Punch
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15
[b]Weapon Type:[/b]Fist
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user punches at 20m/s, that deals B-Tier damage. If striking an object, the ground, or a wall, the damage ripples out in a 10 meter diameter, causing massive destruction to the object/floor/wall struck.

[b]Name:[/b] Bear Hug
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Arms
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Grabs a target with both arms hugging them extremely tight at 20m/s and inflicts C rank damage while Immobilizing 2 limbs for 3 posts.


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5Eve Will [5 new abbilties] Empty Re: Eve Will [5 new abbilties] on 17/05/15, 12:44 pm

Eve Will

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Fixed, though I do have a question reguarding, piercing abilities. lets say someone was flying and due to the angle of this attack, it would hit them, and then hit them again on way back down would that count as 2 C rank hits, or 1. [assuming 1]


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6Eve Will [5 new abbilties] Empty Re: Eve Will [5 new abbilties] on 17/05/15, 12:50 pm

Vardreth

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It would depend on how it struck the person in the sky. If it was a dead on attack, that opponent would take the C-Tier damage and it would stop right then and there under PVP circumstances. If the edge grazed them, it would be able to continue its movement almost unhindered.

In jobs and the like, you wouldn't have to worry too much since you're in control of the story that you tell. So long as it doesn't pierce completely through opponents who can take more than C-Tier damage, it should be good.


Abilities approved for training as written below:

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[b]Name:[/b] Board Keeper
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Shield
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user takes cover behind their shield at 20m/s, blocking incoming damage up to 1 A tier or equivalent.

[b]Name:[/b] En passant
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] The user kicks their sword into the sky at 15m/s, which will come down within 10meters of the user while inflicting C rank damage to everything in its path.
 
[b]Name:[/b] FootShoot
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Foot
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10m
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3/sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] Kicks something similar size to a football at 15m/s with a max range of 10 meters inflicting C blunt damage. [Something loose on the ground [Bin, stone, head, small bench] Dimensions will not exceed 30centimeters.  

[b]Name:[/b] Wave Punch
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15
[b]Weapon Type:[/b]Fist
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user punches at 20m/s, that deals B-Tier damage. If striking an object, the ground, or a wall, the damage ripples out in a 10 meter diameter, causing massive destruction to the object/floor/wall struck.

[b]Name:[/b] Bear Hug
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Arms
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Grabs a target with both arms hugging them extremely tight at 20m/s and inflicts C rank damage while Immobilizing 2 limbs for 3 posts.


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7Eve Will [5 new abbilties] Empty Re: Eve Will [5 new abbilties] on 17/05/15, 05:59 pm

Eve Will

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En passant Trained
FootShoot Trained
Same Topic different posts


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8Eve Will [5 new abbilties] Empty Re: Eve Will [5 new abbilties] on 17/05/15, 07:51 pm

Vardreth

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Training approved:

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[b]Name:[/b] En passant
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] The user kicks their sword into the sky at 15m/s, which will come down within 10meters of the user while inflicting C rank damage to everything in its path.
 
[b]Name:[/b] FootShoot
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Foot
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10m
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3/sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] Kicks something similar size to a football at 15m/s with a max range of 10 meters inflicting C blunt damage. [Something loose on the ground [Bin, stone, head, small bench] Dimensions will not exceed 30centimeters. 


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9Eve Will [5 new abbilties] Empty Re: Eve Will [5 new abbilties] on 19/05/15, 07:29 am

Eve Will

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10Eve Will [5 new abbilties] Empty Re: Eve Will [5 new abbilties] on 19/05/15, 03:11 pm

Merrze

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Before I can pre-approve your training you need to put Bear Hug in and bold and of course the other abilities that were used in the second post.


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11Eve Will [5 new abbilties] Empty Re: Eve Will [5 new abbilties] on 19/05/15, 07:05 pm

Eve Will

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My bad.. forgot to bold the stuff again when I moved the post. Thanks and fixed


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12Eve Will [5 new abbilties] Empty Re: Eve Will [5 new abbilties] on 19/05/15, 07:41 pm

Merrze

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It's okay we all make mistakes ^-^ Pre-approved please wait for the approval of a staff member.


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13Eve Will [5 new abbilties] Empty Re: Eve Will [5 new abbilties] on 19/05/15, 10:56 pm

Vardreth

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Training approved~

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Bear Hug
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Arms
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] Grabs a target with both arms hugging them extremely tight at 20m/s and inflicts C rank damage while Immobilizing 2 limbs for 3 posts.


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14Eve Will [5 new abbilties] Empty Re: Eve Will [5 new abbilties] on 20/05/15, 08:05 pm

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15Eve Will [5 new abbilties] Empty Re: Eve Will [5 new abbilties] on 20/05/15, 09:10 pm

Vardreth

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Training approved ^_^

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Wave Punch
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15
[b]Weapon Type:[/b]Fist
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user punches at 20m/s, that deals B-Tier damage. If striking an object, the ground, or a wall, the damage ripples out in a 10 meter diameter, causing massive destruction to the object/floor/wall struck.


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16Eve Will [5 new abbilties] Empty Re: Eve Will [5 new abbilties] on 20/05/15, 11:18 pm

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17Eve Will [5 new abbilties] Empty Re: Eve Will [5 new abbilties] on 20/05/15, 11:56 pm

Vardreth

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Training Approved:

Code:
[b]Name:[/b] Board Keeper
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Cost:[/b] 30/15
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Shield
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
[b]Description:[/b] The user takes cover behind their shield at 20m/s, blocking incoming damage up to 1 A tier or equivalent.


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