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1Luca's Starter Abilities  Empty Luca's Starter Abilities on 16/05/15, 04:52 pm

Luca Rinascita

Luca Rinascita
D-Tier
D-Tier
Name:Fulmine Whip
Tier:D-Tier
Cost:10/5
Element:Lightning
Class:Offensive
Range:10
Cool-Down:2 or Sustain +1
Description:The user forms lightning into the shape of a whip (.1m diameter), it is then thrown toward the target at a speed of 15m/s,when it hits it can be used to wrap around one or multiple limbs or can be used to strike once on one limb and once on another. D-tier Damage

Name:Fulmine Muro
Tier:D-tier
Cost:10/5
Element:Lightning
Class:Offensive
Range:10m
Cool-Down: 2 or Sustain+1
Description: User casts the spell at 10 m/s forming a wall of electric energy 5m in length and 7m in height. Deals D-Tier Damage\

Name:Lightning Orb
Tier:D-Tier
Cost:10/5
Element:Lightning
Class:Offensive
Range:10m
Cool-Down:2 posts or Sustain +1
Description:User Forms a ball of Pure Electricity on the end of their staff and 4m in diameter and launches it at 10 m/s at the target. D-tier damage

Name:Lightning Storm I
Tier:C-Tier
Cost:20/10
Element:Lightning
Class:Offensive
Range:20m
Cool-Down:3 posts or Sustain +1
Description:User summons a powerful bolt of lightning down from the sky at 14 m/s. The bolt hits causing D-tier level burn and paralysis. (10m dimensions)

Name:Shock
Tier:D-tier
Cost:10/5
Element:Lightning
Class:Supplementary
Range:10m
Cool-Down:2 posts or Sustain +1
Description:User blasts target with electricity (10 m/s) causing D-tier disorientation. (1m dimensions)



Last edited by Luca Rinascita on 17/05/15, 01:11 am; edited 1 time in total

2Luca's Starter Abilities  Empty Re: Luca's Starter Abilities on 16/05/15, 07:38 pm

Vardreth

Vardreth
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier
You are missing the bold of every ability. The templates should be copy and pasted from the code box directly. <- Not a required edit. You are free to format them as you wish for that.

Some overall edits that need to be made:
Range - Please view the guidelines at this link here. You have a D-Tier that has a range of 20 meters, when the maximum is 10, and a C-Tier that has a range of 15 meters while the maximum is 20 (This is fine, but you are making your spell weaker on your own, fyi).

Costs - Costs should be either 10/5 for D-Tier (10 is the initial, 5 is the sustained on subsequent posts) or 20/10 for C-Tier.

Cool downs - Cool downs should be either "2 posts or sustain+1" (for D-Tiers) or "3 posts or sustain+1" (for C-Tiers).

Class:
Intelligence's downside is that they do not have any defensive spells. A spell cannot be listed as a Defensive class.


Fulmine Whip:
-If the lightning has a diameter of 5 meters, it is a ball and not a whip. Did you maybe mean a diameter of .1 meters and a length of 5 meters?
-Paralysis is a status effect, and therefore would be a supplementary ability addition to the ability if it also deals damage. D-Tiers can only have 1 class.
--D-Tier Paralysis can numb 1 limb and reduce the opponent's movement speed by 5 m/s, which can be found at this link.


Fulmine Muro:
-If you change this to Offensive and have it deal D-Tier damage, it will have the same end effect due to clashing rules.


Lightning Orb:
-This is both supplementary and offensive since it has paralysis and damage. Please make sure it has 1 or the other.


Lightning Storm I:
-It needs to have the size of the bolt.
-At C-Tier, maximum speed can be 15 m/s. By limiting it to 12 m/s, you are giving everyone else an advantage over yourself. You are not required to do this ^_^.
-You only need to list D-Tier damage as an effect 1 time.

Shock:
-How large is this blast?


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3Luca's Starter Abilities  Empty Re: Luca's Starter Abilities on 17/05/15, 01:39 pm

Luca Rinascita

Luca Rinascita
D-Tier
D-Tier
Is it fixed?


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4Luca's Starter Abilities  Empty Re: Luca's Starter Abilities on 17/05/15, 02:00 pm

Vardreth

Vardreth
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier
I did a bit of fixing up on them, so they should be good to go now ^_^.

Approved as written below:

Code:

[b]Name:[/b] Fulmine Whip
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 10/5
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or Sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] The user forms lightning into the shape of a whip (.1m diameter, 5 meters long), it is then thrown toward the target at a speed of 15m/s,when it hits it can be used to wrap around their limbs, dealing D-Tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Fulmine Muro
[b]Tier:[/b] D-tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 10/5
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10m
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 or Sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] User casts the spell at 10 m/s forming a wall of electric energy 5m in length and 7m in height. Deals D-Tier Damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Lightning Orb
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 10/5
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10m
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or Sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] User Forms a ball of Pure Electricity on the end of their staff, 4m in diameter, and launches it at 10 m/s at the target. D-tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Lightning Storm I
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20m
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts or Sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] User summons a powerful bolt of lightning down from the sky at 14 m/s. The bolt hits causing D-tier level burn and paralysis. (10m in length and diameter)

[b]Name:[/b] Shock
[b]Tier:[/b] D-tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 10/5
[b]Element:[/b] Lightning
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10m
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts or Sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] User blasts out a 1 meter diameter ball of electricity at 10 m/s up to 10 meters away, causing D-Tier disorientation to any caught in its blast.


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