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1Luca Rinascita Empty Luca Rinascita on 10/05/15, 07:00 pm

Luca Rinascita

Luca Rinascita
D-Tier
D-Tier
Name: Luca Rinascita
Country Affiliation: Immuchakk
Race: Immuchakk

Tier: D-Tier

Specialization: Intelligence-Lightning

Age + Birthdate: 19 + 9/19

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Hetrosexual

Personality: Luca is normally very cheerful and curious, he will very rarely think about negatives for very long often changing the subject before it gets too dark or depressing.He is very stubborn when it comes down to it, but in arguments he normally tries to look on both sides before he makes judgement.He has a very strong moral compass,always wanting to help those that he can,protect the innocent and be there for those he calls friends.
He is not often quiet about how he feels expressing how he feels about everything without thinking,he gets easily upset when it comes to little things but when it's something important he is often collected and calm. His passion for knowledge drive him to extremely curious about everything he comes across.
 When it comes to meeting people he treats everyone with the same amount of respect,no matter their rank in society. He is very loyal to those who have earned his trust and would do anything for them.
   His past pain drives him to want to make those close to him happy and when they are sad he does whatever he can to try and cheer them up,wanting to keep people from feeling pain even though he knows its a natural thing he tries his hardest to keep all people happy.

Likes:
Hunting-Luca enjoys the hunting a tracking of animals,even if he doesn’t kill it he just enjoys honing his skills
Reading- Luca strives for more knowledge and loves reading about anything,even if he has read it thousands of times before.


Dislikes:
Arrogance- He hates those that believe they are better than anyone.
Losing-He hate to lose and will often drive himself to near death before he admits he can’t do it
Killing for no reason-He despises those that kill anything without reason,believing life should not be wasted

     Aspirations:Luca aspires to leave a mark on the world to be remembered for something great,it is what drives him to when all others fails,other times it affects him too much driving him to rash things without thinking.He developed this dream from an early age as people had often no idea who he was as he was a mystery to the village and no matter how hard he tried he always sunk into the groups of people,rarely ever being noticed as his peers accomplished feats that he could only hope to achieve.
     He also strives for knowledge he wants to learn and know all the things of the world learning and witnessing all aspects of the world.Luca wants to travel to all the places of the world to see if he can survive the harshest of places.
Phobias/fears:
Fear of Insects-Luca has an irrational fear of Insects,the smaller they are the more terrifying they are to him.When he sees them he starts to get twitchy and unfocused and often starts running his hands up and down his arms for fear the bug has somehow got onto him.
Fear of Amounting to Nothing-Luca has fear of being lost in the endless faces of people, his name having nothing behind it.He doesn't want to be just another person controlled by like a puppet by those “better” than him.

Face-Claim: Chrom-Fire Emblem

Hair Color: Blue

Eye Color: Originally Green but occasionally change to Blue or Purple

Height: 209 cm

Weight:86kg

Appearance: Luca is well built but has a smaller frame than most giving him a look that make him seem frail,but he still carries more strength than what his frame would lead people to believe. His hair is a dark blue that comes down to eye level.His normal attire consists of a dark black cloak with white trim,weighted wraps around his arms,legs, and chest and normal boots.When he is out on the tundra he normally wears a covering over his mouth and nose. He wears 3 rings on his right hand and a wristband on his left all share the same intricate markings and designs.
Rukh Alignment: White

Special Traits: His eyes change color from time to time.Thought to reflect his mood but it's very erratic.

History:   Luca grew up as an orphan, he had been found near a village the day after a horrid snowstorm, abandoned wrapped in blankets and sheltered in a cave. His parents or any living being no where to be found,no trace that they had left or even had been there at all. The group that had found the child took him back to the village. He was raised just as a normal child but nobody wanted to claim him as their own, for fear they would disappear as well.So he was passed around his village as a mysterious child, untill he was old enough to take care of himself.
  As a small child he was taught how do the basic necessities to take care of himself and taught by those who could offer their time.He often couldn't grasp the concepts and ended up failing quite often but he would always try until he perfected a way to do it himself. At the age of 6 he had learned the power of reading, he would spend hours at a time reading books about many other places,when he wasn’t training himself or hunting.It was a pastime that would make him forget his troubles,they would  tell him about places where  warriors adventured and protected the innocent and fought off evil.
   At the age of 10 as those older than him completed their tasks to become proper adults and he began doubting himself,he had no one to train him like they had could barely even do half of what they could and people already had their suspicions about him how he brought curses to those who fostered him.He had heard the whispers and saw how the adults watched him carefully around the others as if he would do something horrible.Fed up with the doubt he set out to prove to himself he could be competent. He wandered the Tundra for 3 months before coming back, he had done nothing special but barely survived and that didn't really matter he had proven that he had potential and was more confident.
      At the age of 17 Luca had faced the coming of age tradition of facing a Rampaging Unicorn.He fought the beast and won with skill rivaling that of his peers which to others didn't seem like a big deal but to Luca he had emerged proud and earned his name for he had proven himself, and he vowed to travel the world and train until he could come back and prove his full potential

Role-Play Sample: Luca walked through the tundra the snow crunching beneath his feet,the wind whipped around him bringing a cold sting to the air. He pulled his mask over his face a pushed through the storm.As he moved his eyes scanned the barren landscape looking for any sign of his prey. He came to the entrance of a small cave. He stood there and looked inside of the cave waiting for something to jump out,but nothing ever did. As he peered inside of the cave he noticed a glowing light inside and continued in,captivated by the light.As he walked the cave howling of the wind faded and the cave grew and eerie silence,yet in his head heard nothing but sound the light an undistguishable voice calling him promising him a gift. He finally came to the blinding light and reached out to touch it,his hand trembling and then nothing but darkness came over him.
   His eyes snapped open and he sat up in his bed his head pounding and his breathing labored.When he caught his breath he sighed,chuckled, and went back to sleep.



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2Luca Rinascita Empty Re: Luca Rinascita on 10/05/15, 08:50 pm

Vardreth

Vardreth
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Just a couple of things about your application. The first of which is the mention of Magi; on this iteration/on the board, there are no books written about Magi, so that mention will have to be removed.

The second thing I would like to mention would be the character's age when he fought and killed a Rampaging Unicorn. That fight is supposed to be the mark of adulthood, so it is extremely strange that a 10 year old is able to do it. 18 year-olds, it is expected. Anything 12-15 years old would imply that the person is particularly skilled at combat on the level of being a genius (Your character's bio describes the character being the opposite. Hard working and eventually obtaining his goals). I would expect your character's growth to be more along the lines of fighting the creature between the ages of 14-18, rather than 10, but the lowest we'll accept is 12 years of age.


Other than that, very nice app ^_^. Once the changes have been made, you will be all set~


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3Luca Rinascita Empty Re: Luca Rinascita on 10/05/15, 09:13 pm

Luca Rinascita

Luca Rinascita
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Sorry about that, should have made it clear that more time had passed. Is that better?


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4Luca Rinascita Empty Re: Luca Rinascita on 10/05/15, 11:08 pm

Vardreth

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Looks great ^_^. It's approved.

app approved~
Don't Forget to create your vault: https://magiworld.forumotion.com/f10-vault

Post your starting abilities and weapon for approval:
https://magiworld.forumotion.com/f8-abilities
https://magiworld.forumotion.com/f39-old-wizard-s-arcane-shop

Welcome to the site, I hope you have fun RPing here!

Any questions don't hesitate to ask!

P.S.

Azix finds it handy to keep these two links bookmarked for quick reference:
https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t2486-ability-guidelines-important
https://magiworld.forumotion.com/f1-rules-and-systems


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[b]Name:[/b] Luca Rinascita
[b]Country Affiliation:[/b] Immuchakk
[b]Race:[/b] Immuchakk

[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier

[b]Specialization:[/b] Intelligence-Lightning

[b]Age + Birthdate:[/b] 19 + 9/19

[b]Gender:[/b] Male

[b]Sexuality:[/b] Hetrosexual

[b]Personality:[/b] Luca is normally very cheerful and curious, he will very rarely think about negatives for very long often changing the subject before it gets too dark or depressing.He is very stubborn when it comes down to it, but in arguments he normally tries to look on both sides before he makes judgement.He has a very strong moral compass,always wanting to help those that he can,protect the innocent and be there for those he calls friends.

He is not often quiet about how he feels expressing how he feels about everything without thinking,he gets easily upset when it comes to little things but when it's something important he is often collected and calm. His passion for knowledge drive him to extremely curious about everything he comes across.

 When it comes to meeting people he treats everyone with the same amount of respect,no matter their rank in society. He is very loyal to those who have earned his trust and would do anything for them.

   His past pain drives him to want to make those close to him happy and when they are sad he does whatever he can to try and cheer them up,wanting to keep people from feeling pain even though he knows its a natural thing he tries his hardest to keep all people happy.

[b]Likes:[/b]
Hunting-Luca enjoys the hunting a tracking of animals,even if he doesn’t kill it he just enjoys honing his skills
Reading- Luca strives for more knowledge and loves reading about anything,even if he has read it thousands of times before.

[b]Dislikes:[/b]
Arrogance- He hates those that believe they are better than anyone.
Losing-He hate to lose and will often drive himself to near death before he admits he can’t do it
Killing for no reason-He despises those that kill anything without reason,believing life should not be wasted

[b]Aspirations:[/b] Luca aspires to leave a mark on the world to be remembered for something great,it is what drives him to when all others fails,other times it affects him too much driving him to rash things without thinking.He developed this dream from an early age as people had often no idea who he was as he was a mystery to the village and no matter how hard he tried he always sunk into the groups of people,rarely ever being noticed as his peers accomplished feats that he could only hope to achieve.

     He also strives for knowledge he wants to learn and know all the things of the world learning and witnessing all aspects of the world.Luca wants to travel to all the places of the world to see if he can survive the harshest of places.

[b]Phobias/fears:[/b]

Fear of Insects-Luca has an irrational fear of Insects,the smaller they are the more terrifying they are to him.When he sees them he starts to get twitchy and unfocused and often starts running his hands up and down his arms for fear the bug has somehow got onto him.

Fear of Amounting to Nothing-Luca has fear of being lost in the endless faces of people, his name having nothing behind it.He doesn't want to be just another person controlled by like a puppet by those “better” than him.

[b]Face-Claim:[/b] Chrom-Fire Emblem

[b]Hair Color:[/b] Blue

[b]Eye Color:[/b] Originally Green but occasionally change to Blue or Purple

[b]Height:[/b] 209 cm

[b]Weight:[/b] 86kg

[b]Appearance:[/b] Luca is well built but has a smaller frame than most giving him a look that make him seem frail,but he still carries more strength than what his frame would lead people to believe. His hair is a dark blue that comes down to eye level.His normal attire consists of a dark black cloak with white trim,weighted wraps around his arms,legs, and chest and normal boots.When he is out on the tundra he normally wears a covering over his mouth and nose. He wears 3 rings on his right hand and a wristband on his left all share the same intricate markings and designs.

[b]Rukh Alignment:[/b] White

[b]Special Traits:[/b] His eyes change color from time to time.Thought to reflect his mood but it's very erratic.

[b]History:[/b]   Luca grew up as an orphan, he had been found near a village the day after a horrid snowstorm, abandoned wrapped in blankets and sheltered in a cave. His parents or any living being no where to be found,no trace that they had left or even had been there at all. The group that had found the child took him back to the village. He was raised just as a normal child but nobody wanted to claim him as their own, for fear they would disappear as well.So he was passed around his village as a mysterious child, until he was old enough to take care of himself.

  As a small child he was taught how do the basic necessities to take care of himself and taught by those who could offer their time.He often couldn't grasp the concepts and ended up failing quite often but he would always try until he perfected a way to do it himself. At the age of 6 he had learned the power of reading, he would spend hours at a time reading books about many other places,when he wasn’t training himself or hunting.It was a pastime that would make him forget his troubles,they would  tell him about places where warriors adventured and protected the innocent and fought off evil.

   At the age of 10 as those older than him completed their tasks to become proper adults and he began doubting himself,he had no one to train him like they had could barely even do half of what they could and people already had their suspicions about him how he brought curses to those who fostered him.He had heard the whispers and saw how the adults watched him carefully around the others as if he would do something horrible. Fed up with the doubt he set out to prove to himself he could be competent. He wandered the Tundra for 3 months before coming back, he had done nothing special but barely survived and that didn't really matter he had proven that he had potential and was more confident.

      At the age of 17 Luca had faced the coming of age tradition of facing a Rampaging Unicorn.He fought the beast and won with skill rivaling that of his peers which to others didn't seem like a big deal but to Luca he had emerged proud and earned his name for he had proven himself, and he vowed to travel the world and train until he could come back and prove his full potential

[b]Role-Play Sample:[/b] Luca walked through the tundra the snow crunching beneath his feet,the wind whipped around him bringing a cold sting to the air. He pulled his mask over his face a pushed through the storm.As he moved his eyes scanned the barren landscape looking for any sign of his prey. He came to the entrance of a small cave. He stood there and looked inside of the cave waiting for something to jump out,but nothing ever did. As he peered inside of the cave he noticed a glowing light inside and continued in,captivated by the light. As he walked the cave howling of the wind faded and the cave grew and eerie silence,yet in his head heard nothing but sound the light an indistinguishable voice calling him promising him a gift. He finally came to the blinding light and reached out to touch it,his hand trembling and then nothing but darkness came over him.

   His eyes snapped open and he sat up in his bed his head pounding and his breathing labored.When he caught his breath he sighed,chuckled, and went back to sleep.


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