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1Eve Will [4c's For training] Empty Eve Will [4c's For training] on 09/05/15, 08:05 pm

Eve Will

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Name: Rook
Tier: C
Cost: 20/10
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Offensive
Range: 10 meters
Cool-Down: 3/sustain + 1
Description:Peirce's forward in a lunge with entire body moving 15m/s inflicting to C rank damage to everything the sword passes through. Can be sustained for a second Rook



Name: Bishop
Tier: C
Cost: 20/10
Weapon Type: Sword
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 3 posts/sustain + 1
Description: Does the splits lowering self down low at 15m/s swinging sword Horizontally for piecing Damage. Deals C rank Damage to everything it passes through. [Sword swings at 15m/s. Can be sustained in next post



Name: Pawn
Tier: C
Cost: 20/10
Weapon Type: Sheild
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 3/sustain +1
Description: Using a shield bashing it into, someone's face Disorienting them for 2 posts. Shield moves at 15m/s



Name: Knight
Tier: C
Cost: 20/10
Weapon Type: Sheild
Class: Defensive
Range: Close
Cool-Down: 3/sustain+1
Description: Does a twilling spin jump moving digionaliy forward while turning 90 degrees with shield covering head at all times, blocking up to 1 B rank of damage or equivalent [2c, 4d] moving at 15m/s for a max of 10meters. Can stop explosive attacks


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2Eve Will [4c's For training] Empty Re: Eve Will [4c's For training] on 09/05/15, 08:38 pm

Azix Niraj

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Edit the abilities some to fit the guidelines. Rock needs to state the distance the lunge travels. I put in ten meters. If that sounds good, all is approved for training~

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[b]Name:[/b] Rock
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3/sustain + 1
[b]Description:[/b]Pierces forward in a lunge with entire body over 10 meters, moving 15m/s inflicting to C rank damage to everything the sword passes through.
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[b]Name:[/b] Bishop
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts/sustain + 1
[b]Description:[/b] Does the splits lowering self down low at 15m/s swinging sword horizontally for C-Tier Damage to anything it hits.
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[b]Name:[/b] Pawn
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Shield
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3/sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] Using a shield, the user bashes it into someone's face disorienting them for 2 posts. The shield moves at 15m/s.
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[b]Name:[/b] Knight
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Shield
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3/sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] Does a twirling spin jump, moving diagonally forward while turning 90 degrees with shield covering head at all times, blocking up to 1 B rank of damage or equivalent [2c, 4d] moving at 15m/s for a max of 10 meters.
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3Eve Will [4c's For training] Empty Re: Eve Will [4c's For training] on 10/05/15, 01:32 pm

Eve Will

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Two spells Completed]
Same Topic Different Posts.


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4Eve Will [4c's For training] Empty Re: Eve Will [4c's For training] on 10/05/15, 02:42 pm

Vardreth

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Training approved~

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[b]Name:[/b] Bishop
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 posts/sustain + 1
[b]Description:[/b] Does the splits lowering self down low at 15m/s swinging sword horizontally for C-Tier damage to anything it hits.

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[b]Name:[/b] Knight
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Shield
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3/sustain+1
[b]Description:[/b] Does a twirling spin jump, moving diagonally forward while turning 90 degrees with shield covering head at all times, blocking up to 1 B rank of damage or equivalent [2c, 4d] moving at 15m/s for a max of 10 meters.


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5Eve Will [4c's For training] Empty Re: Eve Will [4c's For training] on 10/05/15, 04:57 pm

Eve Will

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Finished the other two
same topic different posts


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6Eve Will [4c's For training] Empty Re: Eve Will [4c's For training] on 10/05/15, 05:53 pm

Vardreth

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Both are approved, however Azix made a minor mistake when grading Rock (*Also, changed the ability's name to Rook as per your latest post).

You may chose one of the following for Rook:

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[b]Name:[/b] Rook
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3/sustain + 1
[b]Description:[/b]Pierces forward in a lunge with entire body over 5 meters, moving 15m/s inflicting to D rank damage to everything the sword passes through.

This above change is made because the lunge is a supplementary ability equivalent to a dash (you are getting a speed boost over a scale of distance), which would decrease the effectiveness of each portion of the ability by 1 tier. I changed the range to 'close' because your weapon never leaves your body, so it isn't a ranged attack.

Otherwise, the below is fine as well:

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[b]Name:[/b] Rook
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Sword
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3/sustain + 1
[b]Description:[/b] Lunging forward, the blade pierces everything in its path at 15m/s, inflicting C rank damage to everything the sword passes through.

The lunge is limited to your basic movement guidelines (1/3/6 m/s, I think?), but that wouldn't be included in the ability itself. So it would be good for a single second of lunge based on the speed you were going when you lunged.


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[b]Name:[/b] Pawn
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20/10
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Shield
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3/sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] Using a shield, the user bashes it into someone's face disorienting them for 2 posts. The shield moves at 15m/s.


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