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1Let it burn! Empty Let it burn! on 25/04/15, 12:38 am

Kaveh Issa

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Name: Salamandar's Breath
Tier: D
Cost: 10 | 5
Element: Heat
Class: Offensive
Range: 10 meters
Cool-Down: 2 Posts or Sustain +1
Description: Kaveh exhales, creating a cone of fire that reaches up to 10 meters in front of him and flares out to 5 meters wide.

Name: Salamandar's Breath Mk. II
Tier: C
Cost: 20 | 10
Element: Heat
Class: Offensive
Range: 20 Meters
Cool-Down: 3 Posts or Sustain +1
Description: Kaveh exhales, creating a cone of fire that reaches up to 20 meters in front of him and flares out to 10 meters wide.

Name: No Air
Tier: C
Cost: 20 | 10
Element: Heat
Class: Supplementary
Range: 20 Meters
Cool-Down: 3 Posts or Sustain +1
Description: Kaveh creates a sphere anywhere within 20 meters of his person, with a 5 meter diameter around his target. The flames burn the oxygen within the sphere and slowly suffocates objects within the sphere.

Name: Flaming Arm
Tier: D-Tier
Cost: 10 | 5
Element: Heat
Class: Supplementary
Range: 10 Meters
Cool-Down: 2 Posts or Sustain +1
Description: Kaveh creates an arm out of flames. The arm is five meters long and the palm is three meters wide. The arm is controlled by Kaveh as long as it is within 10 meters of him.

2Let it burn! Empty Re: Let it burn! on 25/04/15, 11:16 am

Vardreth

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A couple of things for the breath abilities. With the exhaling, that would mostly be for appearances sake. Keep in mind that your wand/staff is your magical conduit. Another thing is that since it is a cone ability, but you're using range, you still won't be able to get around the maximum 5 meter length/width/height, so after your 'breath' gets to the 5 meter mark it will begin to travel away from you and you would no longer be adding more flames to it. Same thing for the C-Tier ability, but at 10 meters instead of 5.


All abilities: You forgot to put the damage in all of your abilities. You forgot to put the speed in all of your abilities.

Flaming arm: Remember that the arm *is* made of flames. You won't be able to pick stuff up with it. You might want to consider making it offensive, unless you have some sort of supplementary ability in mind.

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[b]Name:[/b] Salamandar's Breath
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 | 5
[b]Element:[/b] Heat
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts or Sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] Kaveh exhales, creating a cone of fire at 10 m/s that reaches up to 10 meters in front of him and flares out to 5 meters wide. Contact with the flames imparts D-Tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Salamandar's Breath Mk. II
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 10
[b]Element:[/b] Heat
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 Meters
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts or Sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] Kaveh exhales, creating a cone of fire at 15 m/s that reaches up to 20 meters in front of him and flares out to 10 meters wide. Contact with the flames imparts C-Tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] No Air
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 10
[b]Element:[/b] Heat
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 20 Meters
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts or Sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] Kaveh creates a sphere anywhere within 20 meters of his person, with a 5 meter diameter around his target. His spell travels to this point and manifests at 15 m/s. Kaveh is able to continue to move this sphere after it has reached its point of manifestation. The flames burn the oxygen within the sphere and slowly suffocates those within the sphere.

[b]Name:[/b] Flaming Arm
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 | 5
[b]Element:[/b] Heat
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 Meters
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts or Sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] Kaveh creates an arm out of flames at 10 m/s. The arm is five meters long and the palm is three meters wide. The arm is controlled by Kaveh as long as it is within 10 meters of him.


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3Let it burn! Empty Re: Let it burn! on 26/04/15, 06:05 pm

Bahir

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The Bahir/Kaveh likes the changes made! :D


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4Let it burn! Empty Re: Let it burn! on 28/04/15, 02:17 am

Kaveh Issa

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5Let it burn! Empty Re: Let it burn! on 28/04/15, 09:37 am

Ariella Negri

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training approved, in the future, though make sure you bold the ability being used/trained :)

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[b]Name:[/b] Salamandar's Breath
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 | 5
[b]Element:[/b] Heat
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 10 meters
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts or Sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] Kaveh exhales, creating a cone of fire at 10 m/s that reaches up to 10 meters in front of him and flares out to 5 meters wide. Contact with the flames imparts D-Tier damage.


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6Let it burn! Empty Re: Let it burn! on 05/05/15, 01:16 pm

Kaveh Issa

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7Let it burn! Empty Re: Let it burn! on 05/05/15, 01:36 pm

Ariella Negri

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training approved, add to vault~

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[b]Name:[/b] No Air
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 10
[b]Element:[/b] Heat
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 20 Meters
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts or Sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] Kaveh creates a sphere anywhere within 20 meters of his person, with a 5 meter diameter around his target. His spell travels to this point and manifests at 15 m/s. Kaveh is able to continue to move this sphere after it has reached its point of manifestation. The flames burn the oxygen within the sphere and slowly suffocates those within the sphere.


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8Let it burn! Empty Re: Let it burn! on 11/05/15, 03:32 pm

Kaveh Issa

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9Let it burn! Empty Re: Let it burn! on 11/05/15, 04:20 pm

Ariella Negri

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training approved~

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[b]Name:[/b] Flaming Arm
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 | 5
[b]Element:[/b] Heat
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] 10 Meters
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts or Sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] Kaveh creates an arm out of flames at 10 m/s. The arm is five meters long and the palm is three meters wide. The arm is controlled by Kaveh as long as it is within 10 meters of him.


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10Let it burn! Empty Re: Let it burn! on 07/06/15, 03:12 pm

Kaveh Issa

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11Let it burn! Empty Re: Let it burn! on 07/06/15, 03:29 pm

Vardreth

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Salamander's Breath Mk II Approved:

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[b]Name:[/b] Salamandar's Breath Mk. II
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 10
[b]Element:[/b] Heat
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] 20 Meters
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts or Sustain +1
[b]Description:[/b] Kaveh exhales, creating a cone of fire at 15 m/s that reaches up to 20 meters in front of him and flares out to 10 meters wide. Contact with the flames imparts C-Tier damage.


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