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Down with Yoshiro [D - Repeatable]

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Solomon's Proxy
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Solomon's Proxy

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Job Name: Down With Yoshiro
Job Rank: D
Job Location: Kou
Job Rewards: 50 XP/3,000 Huang
Job Prerequisites: N/A
Job Overview: Emperor Yoshiro has taken control after the death of his father and siblings. Many people are nervous about his new ideals for the country. Help to organize a secret meeting for these dissenters and stoke the flames of rebellion.

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Thank you all, for everything.

Azix Niraj

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Approved and Rewarded~


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Hohotaro

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Oh wow Kab and Cap has some hot scenes in there... Down with Yoshiro [D - Repeatable] TVc8OPA

Anyway... job looks good for me, you did the meeting even though cap almost slept through it Down with Yoshiro [D - Repeatable] QJjQ6cX

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Vardreth

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There are a couple of things to talk about for this job. The primary part of the job is to spur on a rebellion;

I note that Kab was recruiting the people of the rebellion. The only way we can approve this job is if you intend on using them for a rebellion down the line, which wasn't clear in the last post. It looked like you were recruiting them to Yoshiro's side.

I also want to make mention that Country leader NPCs should mostly only be RPed by staff members, unless permission is given. Normally a trusted adviser or other member of the country would directly interact with others. I personally don't mind that the route you two are taking is to get in good with the government... But changing country-leader NPC policies without discussing it with staff first is not something that we consider 'canon.'


Once these two things are cleared up, we should be set I think.


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Kabutop

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Fixed [We changed all the Yoshrio to Overseer]

Added a new post, so despite us not directly stroke the rebellion our actions would cause the rebellion to gain motivation.



Don't need to read this bit, but does contain bit of insight. 

As far as the recruitment; At this point it's not really for either side since "Eye Dea" pictures itself as a bit independent of the Kou Empire even though still sort of under their thumb. Since the Village had lost pretty much its soul and innovation, which Kabuto gave back and started things of.  Kabuto is an outsider and a different kind of well Psycho.

So far we have become somewhat friendlier with Yoshiro side due to actually meeting the overseer. While we haven't really met the true rebels.  It would require a sort of trigger of sorts for Eye Dea to Join either.   At the same time, our actions have technically been more in tune with what the Rebels see in Kou.

We don't really plan much ahead/


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Ariella Negri

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Unfortunately, you must directly complete the objective of the job. In this case, you must organize a meeting for rebels and increase their desire to rebel. From the last post, the only thing that indicates the rebellion is growing is this line:

Additionally the leaders in meeting with the overseer would lose all faith in what was said, since a strike would already be in the motion as they spoke, adding even more heat to the rebellion

This isn't showing how YOU increased the heat of the rebellion, just that it is happening. Please meet the requirements of the job by pushing the rebellion forward yourself, not just alluding to a strike in another location that isn't being showed.


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Kabutop

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Em alright. Id try think of a way to fix it. 

The strike i was on about was Kabuto attacking the rebels, while cap was in talks.  And from a Rebel perspective that could easily be seen as a linked situation. And Kabuto was being watched by that guy. 
Would maybe some forum of rebel leaders following us to Eye Dea and having a meeting that way count?


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Ariella Negri

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this is being reviewed by staff, please wait for final judgement call~


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Ariel

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Approved~


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Ariel

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Approved.
6k added.


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Jingyi Hou

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Ariel

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approved !


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Diana Corvus

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Approved and rewarded.


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Diana Corvus

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You need to include the total word count at the bottom next time. You can use our build in word counter for a rough estimate since I believe you're on mobile?

However, for now, I'll approve this. Make sure you create your D Tier EXP Reward thread and post a link to this thread in your first post. The place where you create those is located in the Job Center under XP Rewards and you'll want to look for D Tier.


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