Joseph's Starter Abilities [WIP]

Name: RataTatTatTat!
Tier: Tier C
Cost: 20 Stamina
Weapon Type: Brass Knuckles
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 3 Posts
Description: Joseph gets up close to his opponent and bombards their torso with 10 punches moving at 15 m/s and inflicting up to C-tier damage. If less than all ten punches hits, D-tier damage is dealt.

Name: Hook and Sinker
Tier: Tier D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Brass Knuckles
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description: Joseph throws an uppercut punch at 10 m/s from underneath his opponent's jaw, forcing their head up on impact. As his arm is thrown up in the air, he forces his arm downward, slamming his elbow at 10 m/s into the opponent's face, dealing a total of D-tier damage.

Name: Trip Kick
Tier: Tier D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Foot
Class: Supplementary
Range: Close
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description: Joseph drops down to swing his right or left leg out at 10 m/s to hit the back of his opponent's leg(s), forcing them to trip and fall.

Name: Butterfly
Tier: Tier D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Arms
Class: Defensive
Range: Close
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description: Joseph throws his arms up in front of his face, floating around the space. His arms guard his face and can move around his body to block an incoming attack from his opponent. The dimensions of this tech only take up the size of his two arms put together, which would be equivalent to the width of his face and the height of his arms. There would be no damage caused from this attack. The speed in which he raises his arms is 10 m/s.

Name: Reverse Roundhouse
Tier: Tier D
Cost: 10 Stamina
Weapon Type: Foot/Heel
Class: Offensive
Range: Close
Duration: Instant
Cool-Down: 2 Posts
Description: Joseph throws his foot up from behind at his opponent at 10 m/s, using the back of his foot (his heel) to hit the opponent to inflict D-tier damage.

please do not alter the provided templates for things like items or abilities, as these as standardized across all players. You used the Beast ability template instead of the Strength ability template.

Rata- Tat Tat Tat!: Cool-down would be 3 posts, not four. Please state damage in terms of tier, in this case, total damage would be C-tier. Damage is also divided by the amount, so you need to include that if all 10 punches do not land, only D-tier damage is dealt.

Hook and Sinker: Please state damage in terms of tier, in this case, total damage would be D-tier. This would also be TWO hits, not one (first the hit to the jaw, then the elbow to their head). You also indicate the punch knocks their head UP, so how are you going to immediately follow-up with an elbow to the BACK of their head?

Ariella Negri wrote:please do not alter the provided templates for things like items or abilities, as these as standardized across all players. You used the Beast ability template instead of the Strength ability template.

Rata- Tat Tat Tat!: Cool-down would be 3 posts, not four. Please state damage in terms of tier, in this case, total damage would be C-tier. Damage is also divided by the amount, so you need to include that if all 10 punches do not land, only D-tier damage is dealt.

Hook and Sinker: Please state damage in terms of tier, in this case, total damage would be D-tier. This would also be TWO hits, not one (first the hit to the jaw, then the elbow to their head). You also indicate the punch knocks their head UP, so how are you going to immediately follow-up with an elbow to the BACK of their head?

Fixed and added three more techniques.

Thanks. :)

Please use this template for all of your abilities and do not alter the names (Such as replacing class with role):

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RataTatTatTat!: Remove Amount and Speed from the template. Consider rewording the description to:

Joseph gets up close to his opponent and bombards their torso with 10 punches moving at 15 m/s and inflicting up to C-tier damage. If less than all ten punches hits, D-tier damage is dealt.

Hook and Sinker: Remove Amount and Speed from the template. Consider rewording the description to:

Joseph throws an uppercut punch at 10 m/s from underneath his opponent's jaw, forcing their head up on impact. As his arm is thrown up in the air, he forces his arm downward, slamming his elbow at 10 m/s into the opponent's face, dealing a total of D-tier damage.

Trip Kick: Remove Speed from the template, this goes in the description. Consider rewording the description to:

Joseph drops down at 10 m/s to dodge at the same time swinging his right or left leg out at 10 m/s to hit the back of his opponent's leg(s), forcing them to trip and fall.

Butterfly: This ability is being discussed by staff, as there are no guidelines on "body-blocking" as strength, it is typically reserved for body manipulation unless you have aesthetic armor that could be used to explain why a sword being blocked by an arm would not be cut.

Reverse Roundhouse: Remove Speed from the template, this goes in the description. Consider rewording the description to:

Joseph throws his foot up from behind at his opponent at 10 m/s, using the back of his foot (his heel) to hit the opponent to inflict D-tier damage.

Most of the suggested descriptions were to remove flavor/RP text. The description should be a bare-bones explanation.

Fixed.

Fixed a couple formatting issues. If this looks good, edit and bump~

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[b]Name:[/b] RataTatTatTat!
[b]Tier:[/b] Tier C
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Brass Knuckles
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 3 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Joseph gets up close to his opponent and bombards their torso with 10 punches moving at 15 m/s and inflicting up to C-tier damage. If less than all ten punches hits, D-tier damage is dealt.

[b]Name:[/b] Hook and Sinker
[b]Tier:[/b] Tier D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b]  Brass Knuckles
[b]Class:[/b]  Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Joseph throws an uppercut punch at 10 m/s from underneath his opponent's jaw, forcing their head up on impact. As his arm is thrown up in the air, he forces his arm downward, slamming his elbow at 10 m/s into the opponent's face, dealing a total of D-tier damage.

[b]Name:[/b] Trip Kick
[b]Tier:[/b] Tier D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Foot
[b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Joseph drops down to swing his right or left leg out at 10 m/s to hit the back of his opponent's leg(s), forcing them to trip and fall.

[b]Name:[/b] Butterfly
[b]Tier:[/b] Tier D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Arms
[b]Class:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Joseph throws his arms up in front of his face, floating around the space.  His arms guard his face and can move around his body to block an incoming attack from his opponent.  The dimensions of this tech only take up the size of his two arms put together, which would be equivalent to the width of his face and the height of his arms.  There would be no damage caused from this attack.  The speed in which he raises his arms is 10 m/s.

[b]Name:[/b] Reverse Roundhouse
[b]Tier:[/b] Tier D
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Weapon Type:[/b] Foot/Heel
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Duration:[/b] Instant
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Description:[/b] Joseph throws his foot up from behind at his opponent at 10 m/s, using the back of his foot (his heel) to hit the opponent to inflict D-tier damage.

Done and Done.

Looks good, add to your vault~