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1Summer Forestanna [Beast] Empty Summer Forestanna [Beast] on 07/02/15, 03:11 pm

Kara Satel Bane

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Summer Forestanna [Beast] Demon_Warrior_by_Project_Hybrid
Name: Summer Forestanna
Tier: C
Type: Brute
Species: Undead
Speed: 7 m/s
Appearance: Summer's primary form is a 5 meter tall humanoid monster whose body is composed of black bone, aside from the skull of white bone that protects its one biological organ, the brain. Summer has two faint wings on her back with a span of 2.5 meters each (5 meters from tip of one wing to the other)that allow her to fly.
Passive Traits:

  • Inhuman Strength - Summer is capable of inflicting physical damage one tier higher than base.
  • Inhuman Speed - Summer is capable of flying at double her base speed.
  • Unlocked at Alpha Tier
  • Unlocked at Alpha Tier
  • Unlocked in Legendary Beast

Active Traits:

  • Blocking Sheild - Cost 5/5sustain
    Creates a black bone circle from its body to block attacks, size of circle can vary, though max is 5meter Diameter
    can block up to C rank Damage
  • Unlocked at Beta Tier
  • Unlocked at Alpha Tier
  • Unlocked if Legendary Beast



Last edited by Bianca Cordelia Brown on 08/02/15, 08:10 am; edited 9 times in total


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2Summer Forestanna [Beast] Empty Re: Summer Forestanna [Beast] on 07/02/15, 03:32 pm

Ariella Negri

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Any creature that falls under a "mythical" type creature or beast (angels, dragons, etc) can only be obtained as a Legend Beast. In order to obtain a Legend-type beast, your primary specialization must be Dominance and at least A-tier. While beasts may have human intelligence, they cannot be humans "cursed" or turned into a creature.


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3Summer Forestanna [Beast] Empty Re: Summer Forestanna [Beast] on 07/02/15, 03:49 pm

Kara Satel Bane

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simplified


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4Summer Forestanna [Beast] Empty Re: Summer Forestanna [Beast] on 07/02/15, 04:39 pm

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With the exception of fluid-based creatures, we aren't currently allowing transformations. This means that if you want it to have flight as well, you would need to give it wings in its normal form.

On a side note, since your beast is only made of black bones, I'm assuming there is no muscle/brain/heart or anything of the sort? This would put this in an 'undead' category, I think.

Generally speaking, we don't allow humanoids, but since we're assuming that this being isn't a human and its looks are different enough, we will consider this 'fine' for now.


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5Summer Forestanna [Beast] Empty Re: Summer Forestanna [Beast] on 07/02/15, 05:15 pm

Kara Satel Bane

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Fixed, gave it two faint wings on its back for when it gets its next passive. Though changed its first to Strength since i can't have the social form to make it easier to roleplay with.

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6Summer Forestanna [Beast] Empty Re: Summer Forestanna [Beast] on 07/02/15, 05:44 pm

Ariella Negri

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Speed: This should be the base movement speed (without the boost)
Description of appearance should include the size of the wings, as well.
You have no active trait listed (If you do not add it now, you will have to wait until you upgrade the beast to the next tier)
I assume you want her speed boost applied to flight? It can only apply to a single mode of transport, so if she can walk and fly, only one would be buffed.
Also, make sure you are using the full template for posting approvals.

I have made minor edits to what you have, such as spelling and size. If you would like to add an active, please do so now or you will have to wait. If you approve of the minor changes, please make the edits and bump for approval/pricing.


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[b]Name:[/b] Summer Forestanna
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Species:[/b] Undead
[b]Speed:[/b] 7 m/s
[b]Appearance:[/b] Summer's primary form is a 5 meter tall humanoid monsterwhose body is composed of black bone, aside from the skull of white bone that protects its one biological organ, the brain. Summer has two faint wings on her back with a span of 2.5 meters each (5 meters from tip of one wing to the other)that allow her to fly.
[b]Passive Traits:[/b]
[list]
[*]Inhuman Strength - Summer is capable of inflicting physical damage one tier higher than base.
[*]Inhuman Speed - Summer is capable of flying at double her base speed.
[*]Unlocked at Alpha Tier
[*]Unlocked at Alpha Tier
[*]Unlocked in Legendary Beast
[/list]
[b]Active Traits:[/b]
[list]
[*]Unlocked when first created
[*]Unlocked at Beta Tier
[*]Unlocked at Alpha Tier
[*]Unlocked if Legendary Beast
[/list]


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7Summer Forestanna [Beast] Empty Re: Summer Forestanna [Beast] on 08/02/15, 05:49 am

Kara Satel Bane

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Ok fixed / bump

Couldn't think of anything else for active skill, em small question i can teach it other abilities right? [Like spells for training?] Guessing it be limited to Strength with him being a brute.


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8Summer Forestanna [Beast] Empty Re: Summer Forestanna [Beast] on 08/02/15, 07:20 am

Ariella Negri

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For the active, you need to list the magoi cos (5 magoi, plus 5 to sustain if you want it sustainable) You also did not include the amount of damage it can block (in this case, up to C-tier damage)

And yes, you can make abilities for it, separate from the traits. Brutes make abilities based off the Strength guidelines.


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9Summer Forestanna [Beast] Empty Re: Summer Forestanna [Beast] on 08/02/15, 08:11 am

Kara Satel Bane

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Done i think


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10Summer Forestanna [Beast] Empty Re: Summer Forestanna [Beast] on 08/02/15, 10:13 am

Solomon's Proxy

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reworded things slightly to make it flow better...
Priced at 80,000 Huang (20,000 base + 20,000 for unique beast type, doubled for it being secondary spec)

Bump when ready to purchase~

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[b]Name:[/b] Summer Forestanna
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Type:[/b] Brute
[b]Species:[/b] Undead
[b]Speed:[/b] 7 m/s
[b]Appearance:[/b] Summer's primary form is a 5 meter tall humanoid monster whose body is composed of black bone, aside from the skull of white bone that protects its one biological organ, the brain. Summer has two faint wings on her back with a span of 2.5 meters each (5 meters from tip of one wing to the other)that allow her to fly.
[b]Passive Traits:[/b]
[list]
[*]Inhuman Strength - Summer is capable of inflicting physical damage one tier higher than base.
[*]Inhuman Speed - Summer is capable of flying at double her base speed.
[*]Unlocked at Alpha Tier
[*]Unlocked at Alpha Tier
[*]Unlocked in Legendary Beast
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[b]Active Traits:[/b]
[list]
[*]Blocking Sheild - Paying 5 magoi, Summer can create a black bone circle up to 5 meters across to block up to C-tier damage.
[*]Unlocked at Beta Tier
[*]Unlocked at Alpha Tier
[*]Unlocked if Legendary Beast
[/list]

11Summer Forestanna [Beast] Empty Re: Summer Forestanna [Beast] on 08/02/15, 11:00 am

Kara Satel Bane

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Em is their any tweaks i could make to nudge it out of the unique beast thing [Maybe make it a dinosaur bear or something]?


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12Summer Forestanna [Beast] Empty Re: Summer Forestanna [Beast] on 08/02/15, 11:58 am

Ariella Negri

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a basic beast is exactly what it sounds like... basic... its a tiger or giraffe or bear that is basic, not unique. A snake is basic, a snake with wings is not, that kind of thing. So you would need to find a basic creature type.


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13Summer Forestanna [Beast] Empty Re: Summer Forestanna [Beast] on 08/02/15, 12:53 pm

Kara Satel Bane

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Prize is a little steep though understandable, i would of liked to maybe try banter it down to like 60k, though that isn't going happen lol..

Ok id buy it for 80K, was tempted to make it D rank and then just upgrade it, making it come out slightly cheaper, but that seems somewhat cheap.


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14Summer Forestanna [Beast] Empty Re: Summer Forestanna [Beast] on 08/02/15, 01:08 pm

Ariella Negri

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approved, deducted, added to vault~


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