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1Kára Fox Empty Kára Fox on Thu 6 Mar - 15:26

Kára Fox

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Name: Kára Fox
Tier: D
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight>+Bi-curios  (Kinky+Romantic)
Age + Birthdate: 19
Nationality: Wanderer
Race: Fanalis
Specialization: Strength


Kára Fox Aladdin_Tab_zps506e3ebb
Personality:Kára tends to be very influential, often without making any conscious efforts to increase her influence. Kára IN genuinely interested in other people and radiate authenticity, concern and altruism – not surprisingly, those who surround the Kára usually find them very inspiring and likeable.
Kára is usually very charismatic and eloquent, finding it natural and easy to communicate her ideas and opinions, especially in person. It does not really matter whether they are presenting cold facts or expressing raging emotions, Kára will not be afraid to stand up and speak, regardless of the audience.
This is one of the reasons why Kára can be so convincing and mesmerizing when she speaks – she instinctively know how to combine passion and rational arguments, drawing the audience’s attention and reaching every mind. Kára could be great leaders if she wised.
Kára IS very intuitive. She find it easy to sense other people’s motives and find connections between seemingly unrelated events. Kára also tends to be quite good at analyzing her own feelings and questioning them if necessary.
On the other hand, such intuitiveness and sensitivity can also cause significant difficulties for Kára, she may be too altruistic and emphatic, getting too involved in other people’s problems, and then finding it difficult to detach and stop worrying. In extreme cases this can even affect Kára perception of herself.
Kára is an optimistic idealists, often trusting other people more than she should – although this usually turns out to be a self-fulfilling prophecy. As already mentioned above, Kára can be very convincing and inspiring. People are drawn towards her strong personality and her charisma can often be a uniting and motivating factor.

Now yes she has a great personality but also has her
other side to her Due to her Fanalis genetics which can cause her to get very emotional with personal matters that catch her off guard, causing her to be more offensive in battle using her emotions to fight over her Brain.

When it comes to lovers : Very Kinky, Romantic and even classed as a nympho behind close doors.

Likes:
Like relaxing / sleeping in the tops of fruit trees when bored specifically apple Fruit tress because she finds it externally relaxing along with the unexpected visitors you come across sleeping in a apply tree.
Making sure those who she cares about are doing ok and happy[self explains]

Fighting: Kára Fox loves fighting, sparing and generally everything in this area though this is most likely due to her Fanalis blood, she is known to be very ruff, offensive and partly barbaric when it comes to fighting though she does have a strong morel code which helps her control herself and prevent herself becoming a monster in battle.
Dislikes:
Dislikes the following type of people , Arrogant , Mean people, Trolls, Hot-Headed(ironic) Eyes wide open but can't see there own nose and similar, Because she doesn't like people she loves ,or even innocent strangers being depressed or struggling just to live and these types of people cause this. [Can lead to violent outbursts]
Depression either in herself or in others and really can go out of her way to lift someone up.
Being Rushed to do things and can get a little up tight if woken out of bed and forced to rush about.
anything Gloomy that brings people down such as hunger, death, pain and all negative things like that

Phobias:
Watching people suffer without being able to do anything about it.
Being trapped underwater because this is just plan scary and makes Kara feel powerless. In situations like this Kara would potentially panic into a heart attack, if she knew no help was coming.

Dieing unnaturally and not being able to save a life in the process.
Finally she also fears being trapped in a position to save 2 peoples lives but can only save one since this is the sort of thing that would cause her to never forgive her self either-way.
Aspirations:
Kára Fox wan'ts to become a ruler of a nation as queen so she could protect it and banish as much darkness as she possibility could so not even 1 person would have there fate determined at birth ,or be bound to be a slave. Though mainly this is so she could find a place she calls Home.

Additionally she wants to become extremely powerful so she could fight and save those she loves so no one would die pointlessly.
She also strives to be a singer and make everyone dance in happiness at least once because she has a bit of groovy sense of life.
Kára Fox Aladdin_Tab_zps506e3ebb2
Face-Claim: Ignis [Jingai Makyou]
Weight: 99lbs / 45kg
Hair Color: Red [To Waist
Eye Color: Purple
Height: 5 foot 9
Rukh Alignment: White
Special Traits:
Appearance:
Kara is a light skin toned woman with a fairly fit body type. She stands at about 5"2 and weighs about 125 pounds. Kara is rather skinny but also had a sort of muscled build. Kara has scarlet red hair in which the majority is tied in a pony tail and the rest flowing freely flowing all the way down to about her ankles. She has purple-grayish colored eyes. Kara likes to wear a medieval dress garment that is pink and black. Along with it she wears two sleeves that are both black in color that reach all the way up to her biceps. All this along with two black boots that come up to her calves that are medieval inspired.

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History:

Kára Fox has had a long journey in her life, not having a home, not knowing her family, not even knowing where she specifically came from, though one thing she was a Fanalis and she was significantly stronger and faster than most people well in fact everyone she had ever met. This lead her to be hunted by Hunters, perverts, and towns, military forces all trying to get Kára for one reason or another often leading in Kára knocking them out and moving to the next town hoping to find people who wanted to get to know her for her not because she was a Fanalis. During these battles Kára had learned how to defend herself and use her abilities decently and learning to wield weapons effectively.
Though often being an outcast due to the hunters in the world generally she was welcomed into towns and was able to bring people happiness with her positive attitude and strong will, she even helped allot of people along the way using her Fanalis skills for Farming ,Blacksmith, Mining, saving people and even leading the odd rebellion in towns lead by tyrants though would always need to leave shortly later.
This has been her life style all her life at least the parts she can remember causing her to have no nationality forcing her to wander from town to town, nation to nation. This journey caused her to see both the Brightness of Good and the Darkness of Evil, depression and more and she made it her Goal to one day form a nation so people could be happy and not have to worry about the darkness though for now that was a long way off and she continued to wander though recently when she turned 19 she ended up losing her cool when a random hunter decided to kill a kid after Kara stopped him from causing trouble in a bar this put Kára Fox In a major rage that she launched for the guy and using 2 short blades literally cutting out his heart and crushing it killing him, this caused a chain reaction causing less hunters of any types from approaching her in future.
Role-Play Sample:
Kára Fox was walking down the street, looking for a good shop to eat when suddenly a puppy ran across her path nearly tripping her up in the process as she tried to avoid it. She instantly felt her emotions lift falling in love with the puppy picking it up and hugging him naming him Joey and started to look around for an owner which was for naught since no one would claim him. Kára took the puppy with her to her tavern ordering a take out, and puppy out while she done some research for a local newspaper to see if anyone had lost a puppy with no luck.[The Hunter Killed the kid for no reason, just out of rage for not getting what he wanted due to being of Evil nature]

Yesterday Kara had found herself in the most advanced city she had ever seen, Reim with a flourishing feel , thousands of people wandering around the street. Kara found it no trouble getting someone to, give her directions to the nearest Tavern so she could get some rest.
Once she had reached the Tavern she got herself a piece of paper and a pen since she had decided to write her goals for the future while she was in Reim.

Make at least 2 friends in the City of REIM
Work out if this city was going to be her home
Yes- get own place
No - Travel again.
yes-Establish her Full Goals for future: Get stronger, become someone important, and ...........your find out if you stick around MagiWorld.  :D  



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2Kára Fox Empty Re: Kára Fox on Thu 6 Mar - 15:38

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Kára Fox AladdinTab_zps506e3ebb
Name: Kára Fox
Tier: D
Gender: Female
Sexuality: Straight>+Bi-curios  (Kinky+Romantic)
Age + Birthdate: 19
Nationality: Wanderer
Race: Fanalis
Specialization: Strength


Kára Fox Aladdin_Tab_zps506e3ebb
Personality:Kára tends to be very influential, often without making any conscious efforts to increase her influence. Kára IN genuinely interested in other people and radiate authenticity, concern and altruism – not surprisingly, those who surround the Kára usually find them very inspiring and likeable.
Kára is usually very charismatic and eloquent, finding it natural and easy to communicate her ideas and opinions, especially in person. It does not really matter whether they are presenting cold facts or expressing raging emotions, Kára will not be afraid to stand up and speak, regardless of the audience.
This is one of the reasons why Kára can be so convincing and mesmerizing when she speaks – she instinctively know how to combine passion and rational arguments, drawing the audience’s attention and reaching every mind. Kára could be great leaders if she wised.
Kára IS very intuitive. She find it easy to sense other people’s motives and find connections between seemingly unrelated events. Kára also tends to be quite good at analyzing her own feelings and questioning them if necessary.
On the other hand, such intuitiveness and sensitivity can also cause significant difficulties for Kára, she may be too altruistic and emphatic, getting too involved in other people’s problems, and then finding it difficult to detach and stop worrying. In extreme cases this can even affect Kára perception of herself.
Kára is an optimistic idealists, often trusting other people more than she should – although this usually turns out to be a self-fulfilling prophecy. As already mentioned above, Kára can be very convincing and inspiring. People are drawn towards her strong personality and her charisma can often be a uniting and motivating factor.

Now yes she has a great personality but she also has her
She also as second side to her Due to her Fanalis genetics which can cause her to get very emotional with personal matters that catch her off guard, causing her to be more offensive in battle using her emotions to fight over her Brain.

When it comes to lovers : Very Kinky, Romantic and even classed as a nympho behind close doors.

Likes:
Like relaxing / sleeping in the tops of fruit trees when bored specifically apple Fruit tress because she finds it externally relaxing along with the unexpected visitors you come across sleeping in a apply tree.
Making sure those who she cares about are doing ok and happy[self explains]

Fighting: Kára Fox loves fighting, sparing and generally everything in this area though this is most likely due to her Fanalis blood, she is known to be very ruff, offensive and partly bararic when it comes to fighting though she does have a strong morel code which helps her control herself and prevent herself becoming a monster in battle.
Dislikes:
Dislikes the following type of people , Arrogant , Assholes, Dipshits, Hot-Headed(ironic) Eyes wide open but can't see there own nose and similar, Because she doesn't like people she loves ,or even innocent strangers being depressed or struggling just to live and these types of people cause this. [Can lead to violent outbursts]
Depression either in herself or in others and really can go out of her way to lift someone up.
Being Rushed to do things and can get a little up tight if woken out of bed and forced to rush about.
anything Gloomy that brings people down such as hunger, death, pain and all negative things like that

Define dipshits. Also, seeing as though there are/can be younger people on the site, please refrain from using such profanity in applications and RP, not to mention the chatbox.

Phobias:
Watching people suffer without being able to do anything about it.
Being trapped underwater cos this is just plan scary *, Because this is just plain scary.

Dieing unnaturally and not being able to save a life in the process.
Finally she also fears being trapped in a position to save 2 peoples lives but can only save one since this is the sort of thing that would cause her to never forgive her self either-way.
Aspirations:
Kára Fox wan'ts to become a ruler of a nation as queen so she could protect it and banish as much darkness as she possibility could so not even 1 person would have there fate determined at birth ,or be bound to be a slave. Though mainly this is so she could find a place she calls Home.

Additionally she wants to become extremely powerful so she could fight and save those she loves so no one would die pointlessly.
She also strives to be a singer and make everyone dance in happiness at least once because she has a bit of groovy sense of life.
Kára Fox Aladdin_Tab_zps506e3ebb2
Face-Claim: Ignis [Jingai Makyou]
Weight: 99lbs / 45kg
Hair Color: Red [To Waist
Eye Color: Purple
Height: 5 foot 9
Rukh Alignment: White
Special Traits:
Appearance:
Kara is a light skin toned woman with a fairly fit body type. She stands at about 5"2 and weighs about 125 pounds. Kara is rather skinny but also had a sort of muscled build. Kara has scarlet red hair in which the majority is tied in a pony tail and the rest flowing freely flowing all the way down to about her ankles. She has purple-greyish colored eyes. Kara likes to wear a medieval dress garment that is pink and black. Along with it she wears two sleeves that are both black in color that reach all the way up to her biceps. All this along with two black boots that come up to her calves that are medieval inspired.

Kára Fox Aladdin_Tab_zps506e3ebb3
History:

Kára Fox has had a long journey in her life, not having a home, not knowing her family, not even knowing where she specifically came from, though one thing she was a Fanalis and she was significantly stronger and faster than most people well in fact everyone she had ever met. This lead her to be hunted by Hunters, perverts, and towns, military forces all trying to get Kára for one reason or another often leading in Kára knocking them out and moving to the next town hoping to find people who wanted to get to know her for her not because she was a Fanalis. During these battles Kára had learned how to defend herself and use her abilities decently and learning to wield weapons effectively.
Though often being an outcast due to the hunters in the world generally she was welcomed into towns and was able to bring people happiness with her positive attitude and strong will, she even helped allot of people along the way using her Fanalis skills for Farming , blacksmith  ,mining , saving people and even leading the odd rebellion in towns lead by tyrants though would always need to leave shortly later.
This has been her life style all her life at least the parts she can remember causing her to have no nationality forcing her to wander from town to town, nation to nation. This journey caused her to see both the Brightness of Good and the Darkness of Evil, depression and more and she made it her Goal to one day form a nation so people could be happy and not have to worry about the darkness though for now that was a long way off and she continued to wander though recently when she turned 19 she ended up losing her cool when a random hunter decided to kill a kid after Kara stopped him from causing trouble in a bar this put Kára Fox In a major rage that she launched for the guy and using 2 short blades literally cutting out his heart and crushing it killing him, this caued a chain reaction causing less hunters of any types from approaching her in future. Why did the hunter want to kill the kid? Also, check grammar and spelling in some aspects.
Role-Play Sample:
Kára Fox was walking down the street, looking for a good shop to eat when suddenly a puppy ran across her path nearly tripping her up in the process as she tried to avoid it. She instantly felt her emotions lift falling in love with the puppy picking it up and hugging him naming him Joey and started to look around for an owner which was for naught since no one would claim him. Kára took the puppy with her to her tavern ordering a take out, and puppy out while she done some research for a local newspaper to see if anyone had lost a puppy with no luck.

3Kára Fox Empty Re: Kára Fox on Thu 6 Mar - 15:57

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Cursing: You can ignore that as your use of curse words was not excessive and thus doesn't exceed what is allowed here. But keep in mind that you shouldn't make obscenities a large part of your vocabulary here.

Spelling & Grammar: You should run this through some kind of checking software and re-read it a few times. You have a lot of typos and errors all over the place. It doesn't have to be perfect, but things like the following should be fixed:

Now yes she has a great personality but she also has her
She also as second side
to her Due to her Fanalis genetics which can cause her to get very emotional with personal matters that catch her off guard, causing her to be more offensive in battle using her emotions to fight over her Brain.

Phobias: You are at a 73 word count. The character template asks for 75 words.

Aside from that I think you did a great job on your personality and then did the bare minimum for everything else, but that's ok! You can't start higher ranked if you put more effort in anyways so I can see why there isn't much incentive to do so. I agree with Adam's comments about your history, flesh the scene with the hunter out a bit more.

This is just a personal request and not required, but I'd like you to signature the end of her history just explaining what location she's at present day and what her current goals or tasks are as they may not exactly be fulfilling your aspirations right away. It will give people reading your app a better idea of what your starting situation and circumstances are like.


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4Kára Fox Empty Re: Kára Fox on Thu 6 Mar - 16:55

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5Kára Fox Empty Re: Kára Fox on Thu 6 Mar - 17:03

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