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1Diego's Jerb Empty Diego's Jerb 12/10/14, 11:19 am

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Job Name: Jagang's Trail
Job Rank: B
Job Location: Heliohapt
Job Rewards: 200 XP and 15,000 Huang
Job Overview:
After hearing rumors that Jagang is at the desert port city, the gang decides to set out to catch him. Instead of Jagang, however, the gang finds magical tools being loaded onto the ship. Defeat the sailors who are guarding the ship and disrupt whatever it is Jagang is doing.



Enemy Name: Sailor x2
Rank: D
Needed damage to take down: C
Abilities:
Sailor moves at a speed of up to 9 m/s.
Sailor uses his mop as a weapon to deliver D tier damage.
Scrubbing the Poop Deck: Sailor uses a thrusting motion with his mop to deflect against an attack that would deliver C-Tier damage at 15 m/s.


Enemy Name: First Mate
Rank: C
Needed damage to take down: B
Abilities:
First Mate moves at a speed of up to 10 m/s.
First Mate uses a cutlas to impart C-Tier damage at 15 m/s.
Lecherous Lunge: The First Mate winks at his opponent before leveling his sword towards them. Walking forward in a strange manner while doing multiple pelvic thrusts, the First Mate pulls back his blade and suddenly lunges forward, imparting C-Tier piercing damage at 15 m/s.


Enemy Name: Captain Handsome
Rank: B
Needed damage to take down: A
Abilities:
Captain Handsome moves at a speed of up to 12 m/s.
Captain Handsome uses his cutlas, Loving Touch, to impart B-Tier damage.
Lecherous Suplex: Captain Handsome grasps his opponent and performs a suplex, dealing C-Tier damage to his opponent. When his opponent hits the ground, he thrusts his hip forward to send that opponent flying 3 meters away at 15 m/s.
Playing Hard to Get: Captain Handsome enters a strange stance, with his left hand bent and his fingers touching his face. His right hand, holding his Loving Touch is held out horizontally. While saying "Oh you!" he flicks his right wrist down with such force that it deflects up to C-Tier damage from an attack at 10 m/s.
Loving Touch of the Captain: Captain Handome cuts deeply into his opponent, dealing B-Tier damage at 15 m/s.



Last edited by Garret on 12/10/14, 04:13 pm; edited 1 time in total


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2Diego's Jerb Empty Re: Diego's Jerb 12/10/14, 03:48 pm

Duquin

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All the abilities are missing movement speeds~


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Thank you all, for everything.

3Diego's Jerb Empty Re: Diego's Jerb 12/10/14, 04:25 pm

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Added movement speeds in~ I normally don't have movement speeds on NPC abilities, so it was kind of weird to see it required.

Speaking of what's required to write in for abilities and the like (since I normally keep them bare-bone if possible), what exactly is required for an NPC to be written? There have been tons of jobs that haven't required ability speeds and such, so I just want to get it out of the way so I know how to grade a job appropriately while also being able to create a job that doesn't require edits.


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4Diego's Jerb Empty Re: Diego's Jerb 12/10/14, 04:40 pm

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Just grade them with the same standards that you grade player stuff. Event NPCs and Dungeon beasts are exceptions for plot reasons, but aside from that job NPC abilities should be no different from player stuff. If you had past jobs approved differently then curse complacency.

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[b]Job Name:[/b] Jagang's Trail
[b]Job Rank:[/b] B
[b]Job Location:[/b] Heliohapt
[b]Job Rewards:[/b] 200 XP and 15,000 Huang
[b]Job Overview:[/b]
After hearing rumors that Jagang is at the desert port city, the gang decides to set out to catch him. Instead of Jagang, however, the gang finds magical tools being loaded onto the ship. Defeat the sailors who are guarding the ship and disrupt whatever it is Jagang is doing.



[b]Enemy Name:[/b] Sailor x2
[b]Rank:[/b] D
[b]Needed damage to take down:[/b] C
[b]Abilities:[/b]
Sailor moves at a speed of up to 9 m/s.
Sailor uses his mop as a weapon to deliver D tier damage.
[u]Scrubbing the Poop Deck:[/u] Sailor uses a thrusting motion with his mop to deflect against an attack that would deliver C-Tier damage at 15 m/s.


[b]Enemy Name:[/b] First Mate
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Needed damage to take down:[/b] B
[b]Abilities:[/b]
First Mate moves at a speed of up to 10 m/s.
First Mate uses a cutlas to impart C-Tier damage at 15 m/s.
[u]Lecherous Lunge:[/u] The First Mate winks at his opponent before leveling his sword towards them. Walking forward in a strange manner while doing multiple pelvic thrusts, the First Mate pulls back his blade and suddenly lunges forward, imparting C-Tier piercing damage at 15 m/s.


[b]Enemy Name:[/b] Captain Handsome
[b]Rank:[/b] B
[b]Needed damage to take down:[/b] A
[b]Abilities:[/b]
Captain Handsome moves at a speed of up to 12 m/s.
Captain Handsome uses his cutlas, [b]Loving Touch[/b], to impart B-Tier damage.
[u]Lecherous Suplex:[/u] Captain Handsome grasps his opponent and performs a suplex, dealing C-Tier damage to his opponent. When his opponent hits the ground, he thrusts his hip forward to send that opponent flying 3 meters away at 15 m/s.
[u]Playing Hard to Get:[/u] Captain Handsome enters a strange stance, with his left hand bent and his fingers touching his face. His right hand, holding his [b]Loving Touch[/b] is held out horizontally. While saying "Oh you!" he flicks his right wrist down with such force that it deflects up to C-Tier damage from an attack at 10 m/s.
[u]Loving Touch of the Captain:[/u] Captain Handome cuts deeply into his opponent, dealing B-Tier damage at 15 m/s.


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Thank you all, for everything.

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