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Operation Resuce - Group A[C - Reserved]

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Ariella Negri

Ariella Negri
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

Job Name: Operation Rescue - Group A
Job Rank: C-Tier
Job Location: Reim
Job Rewards: 100 xp, 7000 huang
Job Overview: Given a quest from a strange magician, you have orders to attack the port city of Luna from the north. You are there to free slaves and take out any of the slavers involved. With the other group moving in from the south, a pincer attack will split up the slaver's forces. Draw out enough commotion to cause Sir Luc Jean Pierre to appear with his guards.

Enemies:

Marsun (C-Tier) and Safiya (D-Tier) are joining this one


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Marsun Vajra

Marsun Vajra
C-Tier
C-Tier


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Ariella Negri

Ariella Negri
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

I cannot approve this job, as you knocked people out with crates (unable to use the environment like that) and if you used any abilities, you did not specify them or account for them in stamina points. You also did not include the job details at the beginning of the thread. If you are simply hitting them and knocking them out, that is fine, but you can't use the crates to "defeat" any of them, you must use an attack or an ability.


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Marsun Vajra

Marsun Vajra
C-Tier
C-Tier

Edits made >.>


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Duquin

Duquin
A-Tier
A-Tier

You guys still use crates to attack two of the enemies. You could use the environment to try and hit someone, but it wouldn't deal any actual damage to them. You'll need to deal damage using physical attacks, weapons, or abilities.

Also, Safiya is still D-tier and as a halfling that means she doesn't have any physical strength bonuses yet.
https://magiworld.forumotion.com/t25-race-system#8023

So all the enemies she hit only too D-tier damage requiring an additional D-tier of damage before they could be defeated.

One final note is that it isn't required to add the job details at the start of a job. But it is a good thing to do as it lets you(and staff) quickly reference job requirements and enemy details.


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Thank you all, for everything.

Marsun Vajra

Marsun Vajra
C-Tier
C-Tier

Edited again ~.~


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Duquin

Duquin
A-Tier
A-Tier

Approved and Rewarded for Marsun~ Safiya still needs to meet word count(1000)


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Thank you all, for everything.

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