Safiya al Thalia's Starter Abilities

Name: Spiral back fist
   Tier: D
   Cost: 10 Stamina
   Weapon Type: Fist
   Class: Offensive
   Range: Melee
   Duration: Instant
   Cool-Down: 2 Posts
   Description: Safiya spins around once delivering an attack with the back of her fist moving 10 meters a second and dealing D tier damage. Only can hit one target.

   Name: Spiral Kick
   Tier: D
   Cost: 10 Stamina
   Weapon Type: Feet
   Class: Offensive
   Range: Melee
   Duration: Instant
   Cool-Down: 2 Posts
   Description: Safiya spins around once delivering an attack with her foot moving 10 meters a second and dealing D tier damage. Only hitting one target.

   Name: Sidewinder
   Tier: D
   Cost: 10 Stamina
   Weapon Type: None
   Class: Supplementary
   Range: Self
   Duration: Instantaneous
   Cool-Down: 2 posts
   Description: Safiya does 3 spiral side steps that carry her 3 m in a chosen direction, which looks like a dance in an attempt to dodge 1 D rank worth of attacks. This ability moves at 10 m/s.

   Name: Cloud Step
   Tier: D
   Cost: 10 Stamina
   Weapon Type: None
   Class: Supplementary
   Range: Self
   Duration: Instantaneous
   Cool-Down: 2 Posts
   Description: Safiya leaps up to five meters in any direction at a sped of 10 m/s.

   Name: Tiger's Fury
   Tier: C
   Cost: 20 Stamina
   Weapon Type: Fists and Feet
   Class: Offensive
   Range: Melee
   Duration: Instantaneous
   Cool-Down: 5 posts
   Description: Safiya unleashes a barrage of 10 punches and kicks where each individual (Up to 5 people) attack deals D tier damage unless all hit the same target, which adds it up to a C tier damage.  The attacks move at 15 m/s.

Spiral Backfist:
-Is there a limit to how much she spins, or a minimum requirement for the spin in order to execute this technique?
-Does this technique hit multiple targets, or does it stop at just the 1?

Spiral Kick:
-Same as above

Sidewinder:
-This should be Supplementary, simply because it isn't really a defensive technique (defensive techniques receive a 1 tier bonus, and are either a parry technique or a blocking technique with a shield)
-I really don't see anything wrong with this technique being made to dodge another D tier technique, but keep in mind that it should still make sense in character. A dance will not make a happy dodge for a 5 meter diameter slab of ice striking your body. Of course, things like sword strikes, thrusts and arrow attacks would make sense.


Cloud Step:
-You may remove your thing that says 'to dodge attacks that move slower'. Depending on how far you are away from your opponent, you might actually be able to use it to dodge an attack that moves faster than your ability.

Tiger's Fury:
-Magoi Manipulation is available at B tier with 1 technique. At A tier, it can be used in 3 techniques. This increases again at Omega tier, but I can't recall how many techniques get it.
-You can buff this technique so that it says each individual attack deals D tier damage unless all hit the same target, which adds it up to a C tier damage.


^_^ Just let me know when it's ready.

Made a few changes and did a Few of your suggestions, waiting for your reply Garret or any other Mod

Tiger's Fury: Again, remove the "charges her weapons with Magoi" as this is not possible at your level. Please also state if this is for a single target or how many targets can be hit.

Sidewinder
-You can't automatically dodge D-rank attacks with this ability. But you can use it to attempt to dodge them. Please just change the wording a bit so it doesn't sound like you are always going to dodge D-tier abilities with this move. A sweeping horizontal attack for example could potentially still hit you.
-Please note how far these spinning steps carry you.
-You may also want to note that you can step in any direction, not just to the side. That way you would be able to potentially dodge the aforementioned sweeping horizontal attacks.

Tiger's Fury
-Only edits required here are that you remove the mention of charging magoi and a "weapon" since you are just using your hands and feet.

Okay guys I think I got it.

approved~

Since Ari forgot to add it, here is the code for your abilities! Be sure to add them to your vault!

Code:

[b]Name:[/b] Spiral back fist
   [b]Tier:[/b] D
   [b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
   [b]Weapon Type:[/b] Fist
   [b]Class:[/b] Offensive
   [b]Range:[/b] Melee
   [b]Duration:[/b] Instant
   [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts
   [b]Description:[/b] Safiya spins around once delivering an attack with the back of her fist moving 10 meters a second and dealing D tier damage. Only can hit one target.

   [b]Name:[/b] Spiral Kick
   [b]Tier:[/b] D
   [b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
   [b]Weapon Type:[/b] Feet
   [b]Class:[/b] Offensive
   [b]Range:[/b] Melee
   [b]Duration:[/b] Instant
   [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts
   [b]Description:[/b] Safiya spins around once delivering an attack with her foot moving 10 meters a second and dealing D tier damage. Only hitting one target.

   [b]Name:[/b] Sidewinder
   [b]Tier:[/b] D
   [b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
   [b]Weapon Type:[/b] None
   [b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
   [b]Range:[/b] Self
   [b]Duration:[/b] Instantaneous
   [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 posts
   [b]Description:[/b] Safiya does 3 spiral side steps that carry her 3 m in a chosen direction, which looks like a dance in an attempt to dodge 1 D rank worth of attacks. This ability moves at 10 m/s.

   [b]Name:[/b] Cloud Step
   [b]Tier:[/b] D
   [b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
   [b]Weapon Type:[/b] None
   [b]Class:[/b] Supplementary
   [b]Range:[/b] Self
   [b]Duration:[/b] Instantaneous
   [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 2 Posts
   [b]Description:[/b] Safiya leaps up to five meters in any direction at a sped of 10 m/s.

   [b]Name:[/b] Tiger's Fury
   [b]Tier:[/b] C
   [b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
   [b]Weapon Type:[/b] Fists and Feet
   [b]Class:[/b] Offensive
   [b]Range:[/b] Melee
   [b]Duration:[/b] Instantaneous
   [b]Cool-Down:[/b] 5 posts
   [b]Description:[/b] Safiya unleashes a barrage of 10 punches and kicks where each individual (Up to 5 people) attack deals D tier damage unless all hit the same target, which adds it up to a C tier damage.  The attacks move at 15 m/s.