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1Melody Magic Empty Melody Magic 07/03/22, 02:49 pm

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LESTACIA BACK WITH MORE COMBO MAGIC TO FUCK WITH STAFF ONCE AGAIN!


Melody Magic
[ Sound + Life ]

[ FOUNDER: Lestacia | PERMISSION: Restricted: Lestacia ]
Melody Magic Combines the Biological Properties of Life Magic and Fuses it into the waves of sound Magic to mesmerize anyone that hears their Song. Melody Magic focuses on creating songs instead of the discordance of pure Sound Magic. The Sound of Ones Physical and metaphorical Heart is the Base for the Melody thus making sure no 2 Melodies are ever the same.

Melody Magic when Cast Mesmerizes those that hear the song including the caster. When a Mesmerized ally is affected by a Melody Magic ability. The Mesmerized Status Becomes "Bardic Battlesong" and will invigorate the targets, applying a C-tier Speed Buff. Buff is active as long as the spell is active and the ally is in range.




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2Melody Magic Empty Re: Melody Magic 09/03/22, 01:10 am

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You have to work on this a little bit, has to have a concise paragraph about the nature of the magic and what it is capable of. every advanced magic gets (1) passive, a single one. An extra 3 post limit for a 2combo magic is already over the limit. Two post duration is a big ask. Looking at reanimation magic as an example, you can get an additional post of music play time outside of sustain and the duration of the spell.

but you would need to decide how that will work. So the offensive, defensive, supplementary you listed won't work out well. You made magic before like star magic, so you can clean this up a bit and resubmit it.


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3Melody Magic Empty Re: Melody Magic 13/03/22, 04:59 am

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I fixed it How you Like the New passsive.


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4Melody Magic Empty Re: Melody Magic 13/03/22, 04:49 pm

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you are making it do too much, you already want full immunity to the magic you cast no matter what.thats more than enough for a special effect. You are kind of wording this like some sort of ability and not describing the magic itself.




STAR MAGIC
[ WATER + HEAT+ STRENGTH + LIGHTNING]
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Star magic is made by using Water Magic to create a vast amount of water in an area, you then use Heat Magic to turn it into gas. Gravity Magic is then used to separates the hydrogen gas and condense it. As heat and pressure reach a critical point, the hydrogen gas ignites into plasma. Lightning Magic finally generates an electromagnetic field to stabilize and control the plasma. This dense star-like plasma can be molded using the electromagnetic field to suit any shape the user can imagine.

When A Star Magic spell is Cast, the star's gravitational pull sucks those within a 5 meter radius towards the spell. The People within 5 meters are pulled 3m towards the spell once per post.




do it like how you did it last.

also, you need to put it in creations review, I came across this on a whim.


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5Melody Magic Empty Re: Melody Magic 17/03/22, 05:37 am

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much better, but even if you have friendly fire turned on, its a free  status effect. simply hearing the melody doesn't necessarily mean that you got hit by the magic.

ill allow this to be the tail end effect if a target gets hit with the magic,  it would basically be a free status effect with every move even if it was offensive and mesmerized cant proc twice in a row. that's fair.

even if it was a supp like a song of healing, it'll proc.


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6Melody Magic Empty Re: Melody Magic 10/10/23, 02:34 pm

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Melody Magic
[ Sound + Life ]
[ FOUNDER: Lestacia | PERMISSION: Restricted: Lestacia ]
Melody Magic Combines the Biological Properties of Life Magic and Fuses it into the waves of sound Magic to mesmerize anyone that hears their Song. Melody Magic focuses on creating songs instead of the discordance of pure Sound Magic. The Sound of Ones Physical and metaphorical Heart is the Base for the Melody thus making sure no 2 Melodies are ever the same.

^ enough mumbo jumbo to explain what it does, now pick something. This magic doesn't seem very offensive, but in general, pick something.

Either> buff their speed tiers by +1 for 1 post.

Or> if they are hit with rhythm (that's what I'll call it) , they dance in place. its not exactly full immobility, they can move, still cast spells, but will be in that same spot. And like I said before, hearing the magic does not mean you got hit by the magic. You know what I mean by that.


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7Melody Magic Empty Re: Melody Magic 10/10/23, 06:49 pm

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1/2


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8Melody Magic Empty Re: Melody Magic 10/10/23, 08:07 pm

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Change the wording to "Applies C tier speed buff for two post" You can also add the buff is refreshed as along as the spell is active and allies are in range.


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9Melody Magic Empty Re: Melody Magic 13/10/23, 06:11 pm

Julius Plageuis

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2/2 approved will be added to the list tonight, you're good to use this magic

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LESTACIA BACK WITH MORE COMBO MAGIC TO FUCK WITH STAFF ONCE AGAIN!


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[ Sound + Life ][/font]
[ [size=12][font=Georgia][color=#000000][b]FOUNDER[/b][/color][/font]: Lestacia | [color=#000000][font=Georgia][b]PERMISSION[/b][/font][/color]: Restricted: Lestacia[/size] ]
[i]Melody Magic Combines the Biological Properties of Life Magic and Fuses it into the waves of sound Magic to mesmerize anyone who hears their Song. Melody Magic focuses on creating songs instead of the discordance of pure Sound Magic. The Sound of One's Physical and metaphorical Heart is the Base for the Melody thus making sure no 2 Melodies are ever the same.

Melody Magic when Cast Mesmerizes those that hear the song including the caster. When a Mesmerized ally is affected by a Melody Magic ability. The Mesmerized Status Becomes "Bardic Battlesong" and will invigorate the targets, applying a C-tier Speed Buff. Buff is active as long as the spell is active and the ally is in range.


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