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Ghost

Ghost
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Ghost, you edited those 14 times, I'm a try to get you out of here buddy. I'll do you a solid and clean it up/edit for you but in the future, use these abilities as examples to make new ones.  I can't do this again so, meet me halfway next time.

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Bolt Of Ghost: Zeus
Tier: A
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range:  Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must summon the lightning within his right or left hand via using his wand.
Scaling:Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down:4
Cost: 40/20
Description:

    The user creates a single powerful lightning bolt from their fingertips by using lightning magic. The lightning Bolt itself is  30 meters long and 15 meters wide, dealing A-tier ability damage. When sustained,  the user can use either hand to fire again.



Speed Of Ghost:Mercury
Tier: A
Class: Magician
Type: supplementary
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: The User must have some form of electricity.
Scaling: Duration
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4
Cost: 40/20
Description:

    The user will engulf himself with lightning magic. This magical lightning coat will allow him to move at A-tier Fanalis speed so long as he is covered within this coat of lightning. After sustain, this ability lasts for 4 posts.



Force Of Ghost:Ark
Tier: A
Class: Borg
Type:  Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must draw a cube made of light magic within his wand
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4
Cost: 40
Description:

    The user infuses their borg with light magic, creating an extended layer of light magic in the form of a cube. The distance of this ability can reach as far as 40 meters, contact with this cube can deal with A-tier burning ability damage. This ability is indiscrimate and only the borg user will be safe from harm.



Shield Of Ghost:Athena
Tier: A
Class: Magician
Type: supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Holy Magic and the user must have the stave placed on his chest. Discernable targets must be considered as allies or neutral to the user for targeting.
Scaling: Healing
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 4
Cost: 40/20
Description:

    The user will engulf the area up to 30 meters in width and length with holy magic, standing at the diameter of this zone. In this holy area, the user has discretion as to who they choose to bless with their holy magic. The user can either target up to two targets in the zone to heal up to B-tier damage, or one target up to A-tier damage with holy magic. If sustained, the user can choose new targets within their field.



Last edited by Ghost on 16/01/22, 10:48 pm; edited 14 times in total


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Let your love be stronger than your hate or anger. Learn the wisdom of compromise, for it is better to bend a little than to break." -H.G. Wells

Never judge someone by the opinion of others.”
“Don't let your opinion sway your judgment.”-

Be Bless Be Fill With Bliss And Well Wishes

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Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
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A-Tier

For the first spell pick hits or damage, also what's life magic doing

For the second if you want two buffs u must split the power of the ability

For the Borg how does that even work?

The last one is just a no.


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Ghost

Ghost
A-Tier
A-Tier

I changed it up a bit and changed the last one..


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Let your love be stronger than your hate or anger. Learn the wisdom of compromise, for it is better to bend a little than to break." -H.G. Wells

Never judge someone by the opinion of others.”
“Don't let your opinion sway your judgment.”-

Be Bless Be Fill With Bliss And Well Wishes

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Lagi

Lagi
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

Bolt of ghost -Wording matters so for the description, you should write that you create a single lignthing bolt instead of putting the (s) in there, we can't foreshadow that you have a sum of lightning bolts set to the ability without scaling the technique. Just fix that and it's ok.




Speed of ghost: Revised - "The user will engulf himself with a lightning magic-based cloak. This will allow him to move at A-tier Fanalis speeds so long as he is covered within this coat of lightning. This speed also carries over in a magician's capability of flight"

*Scratch out the mention of a combo, it goes without saying if the combination of the abilities makes sense and has synergy with each other. But if the paring ability doesn't make sense to do so, it wont operate in that manner. *




Force Of Ghost: Not going to patronize you or anything but you need to understand the main rules for making borg spells. Borg spells cannot be sustained at all. They can still be scaled. Plus, if you are infusing magic into your borg, it would take on the spell properties of the magic type. For Lighting "reflect" isn't one of them. Also, be mindful. They don't absorb magic-based attacks, they soak. That's why they can take an x amount of damage before breaking. So the scaling has to change, and charging your borg with lightning magic doesn't equate to life magic. You can stick with a primary or an advanced magic type that you know.

Here's the rules on borg spells
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The borg is a protective barrier formed by the rukh in order to defend a magician against harm with ill intent. The borg will activate on its own, but can also be activated and controlled at will or even suppressed to prevent its activation. Each magician will receive the basic borg ability which ranks up as their class does. A Magician may create spells for their borg starting at A Tier. These could be utilized to detect ill intent in others, amplify its defensive capabilities, or even manipulate it to use offensively. The guidelines for these are as follows:
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[*]A borg will retain its ability to defend against equivalent damage to the tier of their class. The spell exists to further enhance it by manipulating it in different ways and the additional effects it grants are equivalent to the tier of the ability.
[*]If a Magician's borg is broken or unable to activate under any circumstance, the spell is unable to be used. The spell may not be cast if the borg is not active.
[*]While the borg spell may be scaled, it can not be sustained. The cooldown and cost of the spell follows basic ability rules




Shield of ghost: Want to know why Knux said no, similar to above. No sort of justification of the magic types you are attempting to double cast, that's why the advanced magic types exist (like holy magic) that can justify the multitude of functions. But right now, it can't operate with you using lightning and life like this. Don't mention the combos anymore, remember what I said earlier about ability interactions. Scaling makes no sense, It'll recharge when you sustain it anyway so maybe have the scaling do something else. It's also not a shield, it's a "magic coating". Honestly, the easiest fix for you is to pick a magic type like holy magic as an offensive/supplementary ability." it covers you in a layer of holy magic that can not only deal B-tier ability damage but can heal you for B-tier damage once per round. " See? You just have to try, ya know?




Make the corrections and then resubmit.


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Ghost

Ghost
A-Tier
A-Tier

I fixed it up


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Let your love be stronger than your hate or anger. Learn the wisdom of compromise, for it is better to bend a little than to break." -H.G. Wells

Never judge someone by the opinion of others.”
“Don't let your opinion sway your judgment.”-

Be Bless Be Fill With Bliss And Well Wishes

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Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
A-Tier
A-Tier

Bolt Of Ghost:Zeus - this is written like an offensive spell only
Speed Of Ghost:Mercur- We don't have speed by tiers besides Fanalis speeds. You also need to list how many post this last.
Force Of Ghost:Ark- this is written as an offensive spell, defense spells do not deal damage
For the last one how does one scale heals?


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Ghost

Ghost
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A-Tier

The bolt of Zeus an offensive spell or I misunderstood what you meant.

Speed if mercury I just added the post count and fanail speed.

Force of ark is an offensive spell as at this level of power a Borg can be used to make offense, base spells

The last one I believe I explained it better. As each person can be heal for a tier more per magoi invested.


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Let your love be stronger than your hate or anger. Learn the wisdom of compromise, for it is better to bend a little than to break." -H.G. Wells

Never judge someone by the opinion of others.”
“Don't let your opinion sway your judgment.”-

Be Bless Be Fill With Bliss And Well Wishes

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Merrze

Merrze
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

2/2 approved for training, I edited speed of Ghost, what they meant is only fanalis have exact speed at tiers, A-tier fanalis have access to the flash step which is not their exact speed, what they have access to is speed like this "The character can now move like a blur across short distances and move fast enough to run along walls." When making speed buffing its better to consider the fluffy aspect and to compare it to traits

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[center][b]Bolt Of Ghost: Zeus[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b]  Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must summon the lightning within his right or left hand via using his wand.
[b]Scaling:[/b]Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b]4
[b]Cost:[/b] 40/20
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user creates a single powerful lightning bolt from their fingertips by using lightning magic. The lightning Bolt itself is  30 meters long and 15 meters wide, dealing A-tier ability damage. When sustained,  the user can use either hand to fire again.[/list]


[center][b]Speed Of Ghost:Mercury[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The User must have some form of electricity.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4
[b]Cost:[/b] 40/20
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user will engulf himself with lightning magic. This magical lightning coat will allow him to move at A-tier speed comparable to that of a Fanalis, The character can now move like a blur across short distances and move fast enough to run along walls. so long as he is covered within this coat of lightning. This ability lasts for 4 posts.[/list]


[center][b]Force Of Ghost:Ark[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Class:[/b] Borg
[b]Type:[/b]  Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must draw a cube made of light magic within his wand
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4
[b]Cost:[/b] 40
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user infuses their borg with light magic, creating an extended layer of light magic in the form of a cube. The distance of this ability can reach as far as 40 meters, contact with this cube can deal with A-tier burning ability damage. This ability is indiscrimate and only the borg user will be safe from harm. [/list]


[center][b]Shield Of Ghost:Athena[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Holy Magic and the user must have the stave placed on his chest. Discernable targets must be considered as allies or neutral to the user for targeting.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Healing
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4
[b]Cost:[/b] 40/20
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user will engulf the area up to 30 meters in width and length with holy magic, standing at the diameter of this zone. In this holy area, the user has discretion as to who they choose to bless with their holy magic. The user can either target up to two targets in the zone to heal up to B-tier damage, or one target up to A-tier damage with holy magic. If sustained, the user can choose new targets within their field. [/list]


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