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1Revamping Thread.~ Empty Revamping Thread.~ 07/02/21, 04:16 am

Neppy

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Replacing spell.
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Imaginary Friend
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[center][b]Imaginary Friend[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] He must tap his wand against his hand.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration: The amount of posts the ability can last for will increase by one for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 5 magoi | 5 sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
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Using light magic, the user would create one illusions where their is multiple images of him. Each illusion standing at 5ft 6in (167.64cm) having a good resemblance to Neph. The illusion has basic functions such as copying the creator motions, 'd-tier' basic attacks would cause them to vanish away, and it last 1 post.[/list]


Rune: Explosion
Tier: D-tier
Class:Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: It requires the user to write the Love Kanji with red rukh and speak the activation command ‘pop’ .
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 1 post
Cost: 10 magoi
Description:

    Neph writes red rukh into the ‘love kanji’, and places it in the surrounding environment within a 20m range. Commanding the red rukh to ‘pop’ activing the rukh to cause a miniature explosion to rise up to 5m, and spreading around 5m dealing D-tier fire damage. Rune lasts 1 post after placement.



Last edited by Neppy on 07/02/21, 12:50 pm; edited 1 time in total


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2Revamping Thread.~ Empty Re: Revamping Thread.~ 07/02/21, 12:24 pm

Diana Corvus

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Leave out the one post burn effect. I say this only because innately, fire does burn unless you say otherwise.

A D Tier ability should only have one function. Which in this case, would be your damage.

Other than that, this seems fine.


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3Revamping Thread.~ Empty Re: Revamping Thread.~ 07/02/21, 05:42 pm

Neppy

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edited


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Revamping Thread.~ 423-BF605-76-D0-4-D75-80-E7-B83-DB1711-D97
~[^vault^]~
Revamping Thread.~ 52-ADE66-B-93-D2-40-AC-9571-EF82-D3-DA78-D2
~Neph Axca~
Revamping Thread.~ 5-E8-D9772-5936-4-ECD-AC02-55939-A629576


4Revamping Thread.~ Empty Re: Revamping Thread.~ 07/02/21, 06:21 pm

Diana Corvus

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Approved 1/2


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5Revamping Thread.~ Empty Re: Revamping Thread.~ 07/02/21, 06:26 pm

Merrze

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approved


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