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1Merrze'z next legend beast Empty Merrze'z next legend beast 17/01/21, 12:54 am

Merrze

Merrze
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Ω-Tier

Diana should be making the legend Trait, expecting main weakness of the parasite to be included in that but most of my drawbacks I think should be good. Feel free to use the description for ideas. Gonna buy upon turning in my training, just wanted to get it worked out since I'm fighting it in my training.

Name: Prometheus
Tier: A-tier
Type: Legendary Parasite
Species:Titan Parasite
Appearance:Taking the forming of gold blood tis parasite inhabits the person's bloodstream, rebuilding organs and cells to either control or work with them if able to come across a symbiotic agreement. Heavily drains on the user making them a great titan, with a great and shifting body and the force to scorch the air it creates a powerful monster or potential hero.
Beast Traits:
Trait Name: Energy Sponge
Trait Tier: A
Trait Requirement: Titan Parasite
Trait Description: By using its capabilities the user rewrites a person's DNA so that their cells absorb energy a lot more in order to provide the host with life but also as a form of self-defense, reproducing concussive forces, being able to produce so much force as to ignite the air.
Trait Effect: The user can register abilities using kinetic/concussive shockwaves.  After their cells have stored up to A-Tier in damage dealt or taken, their basic attacks to be naturally extended up to 30m, taking D Tier damage for each hit. After five instances of A-Tier damage, they begin to produce intense heat, igniting on impact and applying a burn that deals D-Tier damage until the flames are put out. If the user is unable to continuously replenish the kinetic energy within their cells, they will be unable to store kinetic energy into their cells for one post.

Trait Name: Titan's Vigor
Trait Tier: A
Trait Requirement: Titan Parasite
Trait Description: Utilizing its connection and control over a host through its cells and hypothalamus it communicates with the user and their cells in order to cause their metabolisms and cells to use extra energy in order to heal them.
Trait Effect: The user can register healing abilities. The user is capable of healing themselves up to A-Tier damage at the equivalent ability cost in stamina.

Trait Name: Primordial Cell Chain
Trait Tier: A
Trait Requirement: Titan Parasite
Trait Description: The parasite has produced a powerful network throughout the user's body, bonding their cells together making them hard to separate.
Trait Effect: The entire body of the user has A Tier armor durability, resistant to all damage sources until the defensive power is depleted. Any self-inflicted damage caused by the parasite will deplete the durability.

Trait Name: Ichor Arsenal
Trait Tier: B
Trait Requirement: Titan Parasite
Trait Description:  The user's blood which is now a golden substance filling most of their body along with their cells is capable of taking shape and hardening upon leaving a person's body.
Trait Effect: For B-tier damage to the user's body in the form of a cut the user can drain some of the ichor from their body, it takes shape upon their command, up to twice the player's size spread out in shape. It is treated as a B-tier weapon/item in terms of damage. The user can register abilities utilizing the shape-forming blood.

Trait Name: Ichor of the Titans
Trait Tier: Ω
Trait Requirement: Titan Parasite
Trait Description: Prometheus gives the user the ability to utilize their own energy to supercharge their cells and promote a boost of strength and growth. While incredibly taxing for the user, it allows them to ascend to that of a true titan.
Trait Effect:

In order to activate this form, the user must bite or cut into themselves and consume the golden ichor that runs through their veins. This slight act of auto-cannibalism triggers the parasite to go into a frenzy. The user begins to grow and transform, their height growing to 9 meters tall and their body remaining proportionate as it were before. All of the parasite's traits are able to be utilized and Energy Sponge does not need to be replenished for the duration.

Using the excess kinetic energy generated in this form, the user is able to destroy entire castles with a single punch. As well as, lifting extremely large structures and creatures with ease. This counts as A-Tier damage dealt in basic attacks.

In this form, any loss of limbs is able to be regenerated and the growth of new, temporary limbs may be created through the use of abilities. Due to the energy, the parasite must drain from the user, they are only able to regenerate a single missing limb over the course of 4 posts for 40 stamina and may not regenerate another one until the duration is over.



Last edited by Merrze on 29/01/21, 08:15 pm; edited 2 times in total


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2Merrze'z next legend beast Empty Re: Merrze'z next legend beast 27/01/21, 09:21 pm

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
A-Tier
A-Tier

So, I looked over the beast as a whole and made some edits in conjunction with the trait I've made you to go along with what we had discussed prior.

The main issue with this beast is that being A-Tier, it can not have an Ω-Tier trait aside from the Legend Beast trait. At A-Tier, it has 15 trait points. Each A-Tier trait costs 4 points and would total up to 12 points as of right now. You have 3 points to spare if you wish to use them on another trait.

I'll explain the changes I've made below:

For Energy Sponge, I made a slight buff along with a slight nerf. The attacks extended should be limited to basic attacks since you can add the range onto abilities without limitation regardless. This shouldn't freely extend any abilities, in my opinion.

I changed the wording around a little bit and made it so that this trait needs to be activated. Since it didn't make any sense for me that the cells without energy could start with kinetic blasts right away. Which doesn't really affect you too much given you deal A-Tier damage to begin with. All you'd need to do is clap or something.

I felt that the trait needed to have upkeep for the kinetic energy stored. If you don't supply the cells with the energy required to utilize the trait, they go into a cooling period for 1 post.

These changes made it feel more organic to me in the way you described it to work. Feel free to debate any of the changes above. I don't mind working on a middle ground.



For Titan's Vigor, I think there is a better way to go about this. I've made an edit that allows you to register healing abilities. This is something that is always nice to have.

However, just being able to heal as you please with no cooldown seems a tad unbalanced for a symbiote to me. Even if it does have a cost tied to it. So, I went ahead and edited in a suggestion as to how it works.

I've removed the limb regeneration as I worked it into your legend trait.



For Primordial Cell Chain, I knocked this down to A Tier item durability for now and instead of an item, I changed it to armor which has a larger durability pool.



click to expand:
Name: Prometheus
Tier: A-Tier
Type: Legendary Parasite
Species: Titan Parasite
Appearance: Taking the form of gold blood, its parasite inhabits the person's bloodstream, rebuilding organs and cells to either control or work with them if able to come across a symbiotic agreement. This heavily drains on the user making them a great titan, with a great and shifting body and the force to scorch the air it creates a powerful monster or potential hero.
Beast Traits:

Trait Name: Energy Sponge
Trait Tier: A
Trait Requirement: Titan Parasite
Trait Description: By using its capabilities the user rewrites a person's DNA so that their cells absorb energy a lot more in order to provide the host with life but also as a form of self-defense, reproducing concussive forces, being able to produce so much force as to ignite the air.
Trait Effect: The user can register abilities using kinetic/concussive shockwaves.  After their cells have stored up to A-Tier in damage dealt or taken, their basic attacks to be naturally extended up to 30m, taking D Tier damage for each hit. After five instances of A-Tier damage, they begin to produce intense heat, igniting on impact and applying a burn that deals D-Tier damage until the flames are put out. If the user is unable to continuously replenish the kinetic energy within their cells, they will be unable to store kinetic energy into their cells for one post.

Trait Name: Titan's Vigor
Trait Tier: A
Trait Requirement: Titan Parasite
Trait Description: Utilizing its connection and control over a host through its cells and hypothalamus it communicates with the user and their cells in order to cause their metabolisms and cells to use extra energy in order to heal them.
Trait Effect: The user can register healing abilities. The user is capable of healing themselves up to A-Tier damage at the equivalent ability cost in stamina.

Trait Name: Primordial Cell Chain
Trait Tier: A
Trait Requirement: Titan Parasite
Trait Description: The parasite has produced a powerful network throughout the user's body, bonding their cells together making them hard to separate.
Trait Effect: The entire body of the user has A Tier armor durability, resistant to all damage sources until the defensive power is depleted. Any self-inflicted damage caused by the parasite will deplete the durability.

As for the Legend Trait itself:

Trait Name: Ichor of the Titans
Trait Tier: Ω
Trait Requirement: Titan Parasite
Trait Description: Prometheus gives the user the ability to utilize their own energy to supercharge their cells and promote a boost of strength and growth. While incredibly taxing for the user, it allows them to ascend to that of a true titan.
Trait Effect:

In order to activate this form, the user must bite or cut into themselves and consume the golden ichor that runs through their veins. This slight act of auto-cannibalism triggers the parasite to go into a frenzy. The user begins to grow and transform, their height growing to 9 meters tall and their body remaining proportionate as it were before. All of the parasite's traits are able to be utilized and Energy Sponge does not need to be replenished for the duration.

Using the excess kinetic energy generated in this form, the user is able to destroy entire castles with a single punch. As well as, lifting extremely large structures and creatures with ease. This counts as A Tier damage dealt in basic attacks.

In this form, any loss of limbs is able to be regenerated. Due to the energy, the parasite must drain from the user, they are only able to regenerate a single missing limb over the course of 4 posts for 40 stamina and may not regenerate another one until the duration is over.

Code:
[b]Trait Name:[/b] Ichor of the Titans
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] Ω
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Titan Parasite
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Prometheus gives the user the ability to utilize their own energy to supercharge their cells and promote a boost of strength and growth. While incredibly taxing for the user, it allows them to ascend to that of a true titan.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b]

In order to activate this form, the user must bite or cut into themselves and consume the golden ichor that runs through their veins. This slight act of auto-cannibalism triggers the parasite to go into a frenzy. The user begins to grow and transform, their height growing to 9 meters tall and their body remaining proportionate as it were before. All of the parasite's traits are able to be utilized and Energy Sponge does not need to be replenished for the duration.

Using the excess kinetic energy generated in this form, the user is able to destroy entire castles with a single punch. As well as, lifting extremely large structures and creatures with ease. This counts as A-Tier damage dealt in basic attacks.

In this form, any loss of limbs is able to be regenerated. Due to the energy, the parasite must drain from the user, they are only able to regenerate a single missing limb over the course of 4 posts for 40 stamina and may not regenerate another one until the duration is over.

Feel free to throw any suggestions you may have in regards to the Legend Trait. I want to make sure it's good for what you were envisioning. : )


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3Merrze'z next legend beast Empty Re: Merrze'z next legend beast 29/01/21, 01:00 am

Merrze

Merrze
Ω-Tier
Ω-Tier

Edited, this can be ignored, but however, I'd also like for the option for the beast to generate temporary limbs of degrading flesh as apart of the omega trait. Part of the idea was that it would mutate skeletal or flesh structures like it did in the thread. I get if you find it unreasonable, I just wanted some of the more creative aspects. If possible it could be done as abilities only not sure the opinions.


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4Merrze'z next legend beast Empty Re: Merrze'z next legend beast 29/01/21, 07:45 pm

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
A-Tier
A-Tier

Here is a revised version with your suggestion:

Code:
[b]Trait Name:[/b] Ichor of the Titans
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] Ω
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Titan Parasite
[b]Trait Description:[/b] Prometheus gives the user the ability to utilize their own energy to supercharge their cells and promote a boost of strength and growth. While incredibly taxing for the user, it allows them to ascend to that of a true titan.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b]

In order to activate this form, the user must bite or cut into themselves and consume the golden ichor that runs through their veins. This slight act of auto-cannibalism triggers the parasite to go into a frenzy. The user begins to grow and transform, their height growing to 9 meters tall and their body remaining proportionate as it were before. All of the parasite's traits are able to be utilized and Energy Sponge does not need to be replenished for the duration.

Using the excess kinetic energy generated in this form, the user is able to destroy entire castles with a single punch. As well as, lifting extremely large structures and creatures with ease. This counts as A-Tier damage dealt in basic attacks.

In this form, any loss of limbs is able to be regenerated and the growth of new, temporary limbs may be created through the use of abilities. Due to the energy, the parasite must drain from the user, they are only able to regenerate a single missing limb over the course of 4 posts for 40 stamina and may not regenerate another one until the duration is over.


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5Merrze'z next legend beast Empty Re: Merrze'z next legend beast 30/01/21, 07:44 pm

Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
A-Tier
A-Tier

2/2 I guess, we will see how this goes. I have concerns but we can see if I'm overthinking it once we see it used.


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