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Erebris Exercitus: Shadow Extreme Magic

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Adrastos Thanatos

Adrastos Thanatos
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Name: Erebris Exercitus
Djinn: Erebus
Cost: 100 Magoi. No sustain.
Type: Shadow (Light + Strength)
Class: Offensive
Range: Long
Cool-Down: Once Per Topic
Description:


    Djinn of shadows, thou who gives power to the Fallen, bring forth the legion that engulfs the world in darkness.




    A 100m wide magic vessel circle appears on the ground beneath the castor. Darkness rises from the circle, slowly taking shape as the chant progresses, to reveal hundreds of shadow creatures. All the shadow creatures look the same: 183 cm tall, 15 cm talons protruding from their hands and feet, four empty white eyes mostly obscured by a shadowed hood, and a long tail capable of piercing flesh. They follow the commands of the vessel user and tear apart their enemies, dealing A-Tier damage each. This army can travel within 200m from the vessel user and lasts for five posts. As a separate function, these shadow creatures may go from corporeal to incorporeal and back once every other post. This incorporeal state lasts for twenty seconds. This will allow them to travel through solid objects (ex.: walls, buildings, etc) unimpeded/unhindered. Each creature in the shadow army has C-Tier item durability.



Last edited by Adrastos Thanatos on 05/01/20, 01:20 pm; edited 13 times in total

Adrastos Thanatos

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Trait Points: 4/11 | SoS: 1

Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
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Alright so Neo I will be grading you today!

I feel as if you're missing out. You have a single instance of A tier damage from whatever your soldiers hit. As of now it doesn't matter if 1 or 400 hit the same person it's A tier damage alone. I would also suggest putting a Durability in so we know as staff as much damage the Shadow Army can take.

You still have another A tier worth of affects to add, you can either use this to put a dome to protect your soldiers from outside things. You could make the soldiers come together an make a single Giant thing, just some ideas


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Adrastos Thanatos

Adrastos Thanatos
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Are you saying if one creature attacks, then the rest are unable to do anything? Is that scenario simultaneous or not?

30 Shadow Soldiers attack player A. Player A is only hit with one A-Tier despite there being 30 Shadow Soldiers attacking. Do the rest of the soldiers vanish? Unusable? What's the purpose of that ruling which defies logic?


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Trait Points: 4/11 | SoS: 1

Julius Plageuis

Julius Plageuis
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With Merrze's blessings I approve this Extreme Magic.  Go on a Rampage Neo! (With that WC LMAO)

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 [b]Name:[/b] Erebris Exercitus
[b]Djinn:[/b] Erebus
[b]Cost:[/b] 100 Magoi. No sustain.
[b]Type:[/b] Shadow (Light + Strength)
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] Once Per Topic
[b]Description:[/b]

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<i><center>Djinn of shadows, thou who gives power to the Fallen, bring forth the legion that engulfs the world in darkness.</center></i>[/list]


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A 100m wide magic vessel circle appears on the ground beneath the castor. Darkness rises from the circle, slowly taking shape as the chant progresses, to reveal hundreds of shadow creatures. All the shadow creatures look the same: 183 cm tall, 15 cm talons protruding from their hands and feet, four empty white eyes mostly obscured by a shadowed hood, and a long tail capable of piercing flesh. They follow the commands of the vessel user and tear apart their enemies, dealing A-Tier damage each. This army can travel within 200m from the vessel user and lasts for five posts. As a separate function, these shadow creatures may go from corporeal to incorporeal and back once every other post. This incorporeal state lasts for twenty seconds. This will allow them to travel through solid objects (ex.: walls, buildings, etc) unimpeded/unhindered. Each creature in the shadow army has C-Tier item durability.[/list]



Last edited by Julius Plageuis on 06/01/20, 05:53 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : added coding)


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Adrastos Thanatos

Adrastos Thanatos
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Erebris Exercitus: Shadow Extreme Magic AmCJaPN Erebris Exercitus: Shadow Extreme Magic Ltg0RVb Erebris Exercitus: Shadow Extreme Magic VjD0Py3

Trait Points: 4/11 | SoS: 1

Merrze

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Approved! I loved this read and can't wait to see how he moves forth with his know and plans.


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