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1Fist of the Raioni [Ability] Empty Fist of the Raioni [Ability] on 01/09/19, 02:53 pm

Trently

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Fist of the Raioni
Tier: B-Tier
Class: Warrior/Body Manipulator
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must be in Stance of the Raioni mode, have appropriate room to cock back their arm.
Scaling: Layers double per scale.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

    The user punches a target while in Stance of Raioni with Lion's Pride, and through the Stance of Raioni ability, Fist of Raioni will create a thin layer of high tension and high current electricity from some of Stance of Raioni's electricity around Lion's Pride that will terribly burn and electrictrify anything it touches with B-Tier damage.



Last edited by Trently on 03/09/19, 06:15 am; edited 3 times in total


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2Fist of the Raioni [Ability] Empty Re: Fist of the Raioni [Ability] on 03/09/19, 02:08 am

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Alot of the description text is filler and seems unnecessary. You can cut down on that by just make the requirement that activating it requires you to hit someone with the the first, that's what it seems like you're going for anyway and can cut down in possible confusion. Lions pride will sti obviously deal damage it's just theres not need to explain that. Overall a nice ability however tho.


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3Fist of the Raioni [Ability] Empty Re: Fist of the Raioni [Ability] on 03/09/19, 06:17 am

Trently

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I made edits. I don't want to cut out too much cause there is no intended filler in the description.


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4Fist of the Raioni [Ability] Empty Re: Fist of the Raioni [Ability] on 07/09/19, 01:21 am

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Approved for training

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[center][b]Fist of the Raioni[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior/Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must be in Stance of the Raioni mode, have appropriate room to cock back their arm.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Layers double per scale.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
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The user punches a target while in Stance of Raioni with Lion's Pride, and through the Stance of Raioni ability, Fist of Raioni will create a thin layer of high tension and high current electricity from some of Stance of Raioni's electricity around Lion's Pride that will terribly burn and electrictrify anything it touches with B-Tier damage.[/list]


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