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1Barratiti's abilities Empty Barratiti's abilities on 10/07/18, 05:49 pm

Barratiti

Barratiti
D-Tier
D-Tier
Crashing wave
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Defensive/Offensive
Range:Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Ability requires firmly planted feet, a shield and an incoming attack.
Scaling:Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: 20 Stamina
Description:

    As an enemy attacks with a melee weapon, the warrior uses his shield to block the incoming attack. He follows up by grabbing the opponent by the attacking wrist and lifting them into the air. The opponent is then whipped into the ground back first.This ability blocks D-tier attacks, and hit with D-tier damage.


Sealing Hold
Tier: D-tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Suplementary
Range: Close.
Requirements/Drawbacks: User has to be empty handed to perform the skill and has to be in a close range with the target.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 stamina
Description:

    User grabs the attacking wrist and pulling it towards user while applying pressure the opponent's shoulder on the same side. This hold will be uncomfortable but harmless unless an attack is made. The hold will last for 1 post unless the enemy use D-tier strength to break out from the hold



Shield bash
Tier: D-tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close.
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must have a shield equipped and raised. Target must be within 1m of user.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

    User slams shield into target's face. Target is stunned for 1 post


Shield toss
Tier: D-tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Supplementary
Range: Close.
Requirements/Drawbacks: Shield must be equipped and raised. Either target or user must be in forward movement, can be from attacks or movement as long as there is forward momentum.
Scaling: Distance thrown
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

    User slams shield into target and lifts shield above his head in one motion using the momentum of either party. Throwing the target 5m behind him.


Battering Ram
Tier: D-tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close.
Requirements/Drawbacks: Shield must be equipped. Target must be in clear view. Shield must be raised.
Scaling: Damage.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

    User charges forward with shield raised and collides with target, dealing D-tier damage.



Last edited by Barratiti on 16/07/18, 08:37 pm; edited 6 times in total (Reason for editing : Adding water motiv)

2Barratiti's abilities Empty Re: Barratiti's abilities on 14/07/18, 12:26 pm

Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
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Crashing wave: You cant use magoi manipulation unless you are B-tier. Also, only shield can block against attacks, while swords/etc can only parry or deflect, so choose one :)

Sealing Hold:
Since this has 2 functions (sidesteps and holding), it would be a combo type skill and you cant make D-tier combo skill. Id suggest to drop the sidesteps and just RP it out ICly.
Put stuff like "user has to be empty handed to perform the skill and has to be in a close range with the target." as the req/drawbacks.
Remove this part too: "User drops his weapons as an attack comes in.".
Type will be "supplementary" since it's binding and at the end of the description, put suff like "the hold will last for 1 post unless the enemy use D-tier strength to break out from the hold".

River's run:
Req/DB has to be something like "User readies his fist and has to be in a close range with the target". Also, disabling the limb works like supplementary movement,D-tier skill cant have combo type.
You dont have to mention displacing water, but just mention the punch will deal D-tier damage. Oh yeah, D-tier skill can only have 1 amount of punch, not series of punches, so please reword it.

Sending blow: Knocking back is supplementary function and you also want to deal damage, D-tier skill cant have combo type. If you want to make it as supplementary (knocking back) with a punch, i dont think like... with one D-tier punch you can send them back for maximum 20meters away, so might wanna think about some other scaling.


Whirlpool: I think the target can just easily swim out from the rotation of water...? While i understand what you want, but I am not sure about how you are going to use it in actual RP. Ill ask other staff about this one though.

Please BUMP after edits :)


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3Barratiti's abilities Empty Re: Barratiti's abilities on 15/07/18, 12:08 pm

Barratiti

Barratiti
D-Tier
D-Tier
Made some extensive changes. Bump


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4Barratiti's abilities Empty Re: Barratiti's abilities on 15/07/18, 01:11 pm

Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
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I edited these two for a bit, if you are okay with them please bump :)

The rest of your skills are okay though

Code:
[center][b]Shield bash[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close.
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must have a shield equipped and raised. Target must be within 1m of user.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
User slams shield into target's fact. Target is stunned for 1 post[/list]

[center][b]Shield toss[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close.
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Shield must be equipped and raised. Either target or user must be in forward movement, can be from attacks or movement as long as there is forward momentum.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Distance thrown
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
User slams shield into target and lifts shield above his head in one motion using the momentum of either party. Throwing the target 5m behind him. [/list]


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5Barratiti's abilities Empty Re: Barratiti's abilities on 15/07/18, 01:27 pm

Barratiti

Barratiti
D-Tier
D-Tier
Looks good


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6Barratiti's abilities Empty Re: Barratiti's abilities on 18/07/18, 10:40 am

Noir Ecryola

Noir Ecryola
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Barratiti's abilities ZXVROtQ

Approved, add to your vault ^^

Code:
[center][b]Crashing wave[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive/Offensive
[b]Range:[/b]Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Ability requires firmly planted feet, a shield and an incoming attack.
[b]Scaling:[/b]Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
As an enemy attacks with a melee weapon, the warrior uses his shield to block the incoming attack. He follows up by grabbing the opponent by the attacking wrist and lifting them into the air. The opponent is then whipped into the ground back first.This ability blocks D-tier attacks, and hit with D-tier damage. [/list]

[center][b]Sealing Hold[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Suplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close.
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User has to be empty handed to perform the skill and has to be in a close range with the target.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
User grabs the attacking wrist and pulling it towards user while applying pressure the opponent's shoulder on the same side. This hold will be uncomfortable but harmless unless an attack is made. The hold will last for 1 post unless the enemy use D-tier strength to break out from the hold[/list]


[center][b]Shield bash[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close.
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must have a shield equipped and raised. Target must be within 1m of user.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
User slams shield into target's fact. Target is stunned for 1 post[/list]

[center][b]Shield toss[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close.
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Shield must be equipped and raised. Either target or user must be in forward movement, can be from attacks or movement as long as there is forward momentum.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Distance thrown
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
User slams shield into target and lifts shield above his head in one motion using the momentum of either party. Throwing the target 5m behind him. [/list]

[center][b]Battering Ram[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close.
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Shield must be equipped. Target must be in clear view. Shield must be raised.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
User charges forward with shield raised and collides with target, dealing D-tier damage.[/list]


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