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BLACKMIRRORFORCE|ƎƆЯOꟻЯOЯЯIMꓘƆA⅃ꓭ
Tier: D
Class:SEALED METAL VESSEL
Type: SUPPLEMENTARY
Range: LONG
Requirements/Drawbacks: [MUST BE USED AS SCALING]+[HAS NO SCALING]
Scaling: [INVALID]
Sustain:0
Cool Down:1
Cost:10
Description:

    THIS ABILITY UNLOCKS THE UNIQUE SCALING [BLACKMIRRORFORCEv1]
  • A black force engulfs an ability briefly as it activates
  • Black mirror force changes the direction of an ability it is scaled too.
  • The ability maintains speed and momentum.
  • Activates by responding to Jahanghirs will


[BLACKMIRRORFORCE|ƎƆЯOꟻЯOЯЯIMꓘƆA⅃ꓭ]v2
Tier: D
Class:SEALED METAL VESSEL
Type: SUPPLEMENTARY
Range: LONG
Requirements/Drawbacks: [MUST BE USED AS SCALING]+[HAS NO SCALING]
Scaling: [INVALID]
Sustain:0
Cool Down:1
Cost:10
Description:

    THIS ABILITY UNLOCKS THE UNIQUE SCALING [BLACKMIRRORFORCEv2]
  • A malicious black force makes it presence around an ability it is scaled too.
  • This force manifests a D tier vacuum with an effective range of 10 meters.
  • The vacuum pulls things in.
  • Activates by responding to Jahanghirs will



Last edited by Emperor JaJa on 12/05/18, 04:37 pm; edited 4 times in total (Reason for editing : m)


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[BLACKMIRRORFORCE|ƎƆЯOꟻЯOЯЯIMꓘƆA⅃ꓭ] 8ueXlz2
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Bump, this is done. pls grade


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[BLACKMIRRORFORCE|ƎƆЯOꟻЯOЯЯIMꓘƆA⅃ꓭ] 8ueXlz2
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Alright so, how the ability reads it is saying the ability has no scaling, yet you scale it to the ability to apply an effect on said target, the first spell seems to reflect the target.

For the first black mirrior force you'll neex to explain what exactly action yoire doing. If youre doing a unique scaling just list it as its scales to use increasw amount it can redirect with acaling.

The second ability seems a bit more confusing. While in the first you're using str magic to redirect an attack it says in this you're putting a vacuum around an object. Vacuums are mainly an effect of vacuul magic, creating one around an objext woild need explanation to how it works. Now the desired effect seems to be to create a pull. It would be alot simpler to explain that yoi could be using strength magic to increasw somethings gravitational force. Then you wouldn't need to scale for force. And if you do you'll still have to include that in scaling.

And for both of them they need some way to be cast, they can't be just done with a thought or will. He has to wave his sword, mutter some words or something to cast the spell.


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