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1 Menat's Starting Abilities on 17/04/18, 02:46 am

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Defend
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Defensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Free movement of her arms, access to a polearm-like weapon and the room to move it around.
Scaling: Number of attacks blocked
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 post
Cost: 20 stamina + 10 stamina to sustain
Description:

    Typically used with her own personal spear, Menat takes a polearm-type weapon and proceeds to swing it around her. Using the weapon's general length she creates a kind of protective shell around her as she swings it around, allowing it to do things like roll across her body. With this she can block up to C-tier level attacks.



Stall
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Defensive
Range: Close to medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: A polearm-type weapon, ability to move her arms
Scaling: Duration
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 stamina + 5 to sustain
Description:

    Using the shaft of her spear, or any polearm-type weapon Menat is able to get her hands on, Menat proceeds to strike at her target in the form of either smashing the shaft against her target or driving the bottom end of the weapon into them, or an oncoming attack, allowing her to cancel an oncoming attack of D-tier or lower.



Impale
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Short to medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: A spear-like weapon and the ability to thrust it forward
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 9
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 stamina + 5 to sustain
Description:

    A basic technique of any spear user. Menat takes her spear and thrusts it forward to stab her target with the weapon's point to deal D-tier piercing damage.


Slash
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: A bladed weapon, the ability to swing it
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 stamina + 5 to sustain
Description:

    Typically used with her spear Menat performs a slashing movement focused on the bladed tip in order to cut her target and deal D-tier slashing damage. As a generic type of attack Menat is able to use this with any bladed weapon she can get her hands on should she be unable to use her spear.


Wall
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Defensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: A polearm type weapon, the ability to spin it
Scaling: Damage absorbed
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 stamina + 5 to sustain
Description:

    Using her spear, or any other polearm Menat happens to be able to use at the moment, she preceeds to rotate the weapon in her hands. Spinning the weapon in front, at her side or above her in order to create a temporary wall in order to block or parry an oncoming attack of D-tier or lower.



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2 Re: Menat's Starting Abilities on 19/04/18, 07:30 am

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3 Re: Menat's Starting Abilities on 22/04/18, 05:24 pm

Hello, Menat! I'm going to be the one handling your abilities, and I only see a few issues that need to be addressed before they can receive my stamp of approval.


  • Defend: you need to state how much damage this ability protects her from. Additionally, I would add fluff that the rotation of the spear generates small amounts of wind so that way you can use it to blow away things like flames, needles, etc (that are D-tier).
  • Shatter: there's too much going on with this ability at once. Firstly, if it's blocking damage then you need to state how much. Secondly, if it's blocking damage, then it can't have a knockback or stun effect at D-tier. If you want this sort of effect, then Shatter would be better off as a parry - it defends against an attack by redirecting something, which naturally moves it somewhat. Regardless, you wouldn't be able to have a stun unless the ability was C-tier or if it was its own ability.
  • Imaple: how much damage does this ability do? I would also suggest adding a little bit of fluff, such as the forward drive creates a small cone of air pressure. But this is up to you and isn't necessary.
  • Slash: how much damage does this ability do?
  • Wall: how much damage does this ability defend Menat from? Additionally, you can turn this into a parry since Menat is a warrior.


Please bump once you've edited! Thank you <3


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4 Re: Menat's Starting Abilities on 23/04/18, 05:45 am

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5 Re: Menat's Starting Abilities on 30/04/18, 07:37 pm

Thank you for the edits, Menat!


  • Shatter: your wording on this ability is weird. If it's a parry, then it's redirecting something, not blocking it. Is it a parry or a block? Additionally, abilities can or can't do something. If it stuns, then it doesn't parry (unless you increase the ability's tier). I would suggest splitting it into two abilities: a parry and a stun.


Please bump when you make the edits!


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6 Re: Menat's Starting Abilities on 06/05/18, 05:25 am

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7 Re: Menat's Starting Abilities on 06/05/18, 05:26 pm

I should have been more clear:

Can you please clarify that you hit an incoming opponent in order to disrupt their attack?


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8 Re: Menat's Starting Abilities on 13/05/18, 02:50 pm

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Um it actually does state that in the ability description.

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9 Re: Menat's Starting Abilities on 13/05/18, 06:39 pm

When staff discussed earlier, it's not clear enough on what Menat is doing. For example, hitting someone's forehead with the butt of the spear would not count as a parry. Would you mind clarifying Shatter?


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10 Re: Menat's Starting Abilities on 19/05/18, 03:08 am

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11 Re: Menat's Starting Abilities on 29/05/18, 01:30 am

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Stall: For this you would just need to make sure it's supplementary as it's a D-tier ability. You could word it as a simple interrupt to cancel out basic actions or move, attacks of the same tier if it hits. It would allow you to get advantage in combat mainly against other warriors.


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12 Re: Menat's Starting Abilities on 05/06/18, 08:02 pm

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13 Re: Menat's Starting Abilities on 06/06/18, 10:26 pm

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Starters approved

Code:
[center][b]Defend[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Free movement of her arms, access to a polearm-like weapon and the room to move itaround.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Number of attacks blocked
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stamina + 10 stamina to sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Typically used with her own personal spear, Menat takes a polearm-type weapon and proceeds to swing it around her. Using the weapon's general length she creates a kind of protective shell around her as she swings it around, allowing it to do things like roll across her body. With this she can block up to C-tier level attacks.[/list]


[center][b]Stall[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close to medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] A polearm-type weapon, ability to move her arms
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 stamina + 5 to sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Using the shaft of her spear, or any polearm-type weapon Menat is able to get her hands on, Menat proceeds to strike at her target in the form of either smashing the shaft against her target or driving the bottom end of the weapon into them, or an oncoming attack, allowing her to cancel an oncoming attack of D-tier or lower. [/list]


[center][b]Impale[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short to medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] A spear-like weapon and the ability to thrust it forward
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 9
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 stamina + 5 to sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
A basic technique of any spear user. Menat takes her spear and thrusts it forward to stab her target with the weapon's point to deal D-tier piercing damage.[/list]

[center][b]Slash[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] A bladed weapon, the ability to swing it
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 stamina + 5 to sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Typically used with her spear Menat performs a slashing movement focused on the bladed tip in order to cut her target and deal D-tier slashing damage. As a generic type of attack Menat is able to use this with any bladed weapon she can get her hands on should she be unable to use her spear.[/list]

[center][b]Wall[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] A polearm type weapon, the ability to spin it
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage absorbed
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 stamina + 5 to sustain
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Using her spear, or any other polearm Menat happens to be able to use at the moment, she preceeds to rotate the weapon in her hands. Spinning the weapon in front, at her side or above her in order to create a temporary wall in order to block or parry an oncoming attack of D-tier or lower.[/list]


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