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1Ling Pao (done) Empty Ling Pao (done) on 25/03/18, 06:51 pm

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Name: Ling Pao
Country Affiliation: Wanderer
Race: Human
Tier: D
Class: Beast Tamer
Age + Birthdate: 21
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Bisexual
Personality: Even tho Ling Pao is a failure he still continues the way and life of the ninja. He goes as far to even resemble the personality and stature of a ninja. He will try to be quiet saying that ninja are noiseless but he will often start talking a lot when he is around people who help let his guard down. He also shows tendencies of toad behavior at times such as making croaking noises which can cause people to look at him strangely. He is also very porud of the fact that he is the Legendary Toad Ninja and will announce that fact quite a bit by abouncing himself as the great Toad Ninja and even making silly looking poses and a toad dance tho he will do it with a straight face which people will find even more ridiculous. He is very proud of his ninja self and will fight if someone even says the smallests of insults about himself or ninja in general despite the fact that he cannot hanndle himself in a fight. He is normally more talkative to toads if he ever finds one having full one sided conversations with him. He also sees himself as a hero of Justice and is appalled by all crime and will leap into action no matter how small the offense.
Likes: Toads: Since Toads are Considered a sacred and god-like creatures by his people, Ling Pao has a certain fondness towards them.

Sweets: Ling Pao has a large sweet tooth and will eat any kind of sweet that he sees.
Dislikes: frogs: Do to his beliefs Ling Pao despises and hates frogs. He believes that frogs are just some kind of creature trying to look like they are toads.

Alchohal: Ling is a very light wimeight drinker and gets drunk almost immediately so he tries to avoid the stuff.
Aspirations: Ling Pao's current apsiration is to track down Ging Maru, the man who soiled the Toad Ninja name and slaughter most of his village. He will find him through any way possible but would prefer help. He is also hoping that once he returns with Ging  that the village will finally veiw him as a ninja.

His other apsiration is to become a hreo, a true ninja. All his life he was seen as a failure so he wants to prove his village wrong and show him that he is a true ninja.
Phobias/fears: Predators of toads: since Ling Pao is the Toad Ninja and relates with toads he is terrified of every single thing that eats or kills toads, besides people of course. He will run screaming if he sees something like a snake or a hawk.

Failure: The great toad ninja is afraid that he may end up losing in his mission to avenge his killed allies and elders. He is even more afraid that he will end up losing or dyig before he ever even finds Ging or become a great Ninja.
Face-Claim: Leonardo/Log Horizon
Hair Color: dirty blonde
Eye Color: green
Height: 190 cm
Weight: 178 lb
Appearance: ling Pao is the Toad Ninja which means  he is always wearing a green toad ninja costume even though it so actually a frog ninja costume. He tends to leap occasionally while walking and does lots of various poses when he does stuff such as fighting or meeting people. When fighting he seems to be random and y orthodox since he has only been trained by himself and not by actual teachers. If he goes to punch someone it won't just be a regular punch, he would do a jumping punch shouting something like Flaming toad punch. He also doesn't ever sit down or stand normally. He will assume a position like a toad when doing either.The Great Toad Ninja's sacred garments that Ling Pao wears is a one peice leotard that is skin taight like most ninja outfits are. How he gets the costume on is a complete mystery. Even though it's a toad ninja outfit it is clear that the the outfit resembles a frog instead of a toad. His hair is long and a bit shaggy and a dirty blonde color. His eyes are a light green color that seems to match his costume perfectly. Despite Being a ninja his physique is less then most. Instead of a rip, muscular body everything is just kinda flat and normal. His face is angular and has edges on it as well as a clear cleft chin. Besides that his face has not real defining features, everything about him just screams plain Jane pretty much. His voice is pretty much average besides when . When fighting he makes a bunch of high pitch fighting noises like Fist of the North Star guy.
Rukh Alignment: white
Special Features: Never takes off his Toad Ninja Outfit
History:
Intro:
Intro
Known only to few and mostly as whispers, there exists a clan of ninja in a small country. These clans each represent an animal which their fighting styles are based off of. The clan is in a secluded area and have little to no contact with the outside world or each other.

The Clan this history is about is the Toad clan. Their fighting styles and their life styles revolve around toads, but not frogs, NEVER frogs. Some people go as far as living in the woods with toads. While the toad clan has an army of warriors one stands above all others, the Toad Ninja. The Toad Ninja is the best of the warriors and serves as protector of the clan. Toad Ninja is passed down every ten years to another warrior who will wear the special ninja outfit styled in the resemblance of a toad.

The Toad Clan has a prophecy as well that one day a great and powerful evil will rise in this world and that a great Ninja will rise from the toad clan and save the world from this evil.

This story is not about that great hero.
The Failure:
The Failure ninja:

No this story is not about some great hero it's the opposite. It is about a reject, a failure of a ninja who isn't even really worth mentioning. What's that? You've heard stories like this before where a failure ninja, a nobody becomes a great hero and saves the day. Well this isn't the case. Ling Pao is nothing special at all and never will be, which is why his story isn't even worth recording but it will be.

Ling Pao's life started off sub par at the ninja academy. It was clear right away that Ling was no good at fighting or even the most basic of ninja skills. The elders didn't think that it was wise to encourage this behavior so they quickly banned him from training with the threat of excilng him if he was caught training. This caused everyone in the village to shun Ling since they didn't have time to waste on a failure. And his parents even went as far to disown their failure of a son forcing him to live in an orphanage. This did not stop him though from going into the woods to train in secret.

One day while training in the woods he stumbled across a small sanctuary where the sacred gods of the toad clan lived, the great Ninja Toads. They varied from regular size to the size of a small elephant. Know one knew how but for some reason these toads knew the way of the night ja and how to fight. Even tho they couldn't talk to them they became his new family. He would train with them everyday till the day of the travesty.

One day for no reason the current Toad Ninja , Ging Pao also known as Lings father, slaughtered most of the clan, including Ling's mother, leaving less then a hundred villagers. They quickly needed a new guardian but all of the warriors we're dead. Ling took this chance to volunteer for it but the clan just scowled at him calling him a failure. This upset Ling and he decided the clan was wrong about him and he was going to prove them wrong. So in the middle of the night he stole the sacred Toad Ninja uniniform deciding to wear it as he left the village in the search of Ging Pao Planning to take him down and bring honor back to his clan along with revenge against his father.
Role-Play Sample:The red-headed warrior was currently walking through the bazaar that he softened visited whenever he was in the village. The bazaar was a great place to buy supplies such as food or weapons and fear, it was also a place where people came to chat and gossip or to find people to do a job for them. Hector came there mostly for the rumors as he was always in search of a new opponent or something that could make him stronger. He also liked to take an odd Job every now and then so he could earn money and build up a reputation.

While he was looking at a spear he was interested in buying he could hear a man nearby talking to whoever could hear him. He was several years older than Hector was, the warrior would assume that he was in his early to mid thirties. He dressed in robes so he must be rich to be wearing such garments. He seemed to be in a frantic hurry looking for someone to look after his kids while he did something else. "Hmm I am good with kids and I do need to get some more money if I was to buy better weapons and fear." he says quietly to himself as he tended to do often. He walks up to them gentlemen smiling and gets his attention by tapping him on the shoulder. The man turns around a bit annoyed when he noticed that the person who touched him was a Fanalis. "Ugh. What is it that you want yu red haired filth?" the man demanded from Hector. The warrior just smiled and ignored the comment from the rich man as he was used to such hatred from the rich to his people. "Greetings kind sir. I couldn't help but hear that you were looking for someone to do some work for you. I would be more than happy to work for you sir for some money of course." The man thinks for a few moments than sighs, "Well I guess getting help from one of you people is better than none help. I don't even like the ungrateful brats. Me and my wife are going to be at a show at the theatre and you will be taking care of our three kids. You will be payed at the end of the day. Follow me."

Hector followed the man to his home and was quickly introduced to his three children, two twin girls who were about the age of twelve and a little boy who was around the age of 4. The man gave him rules to keep them in the main room till they got back and than left for the theatre. Hector smiled at the kids hoping that the three little ones were not racists like thier father and mother were. He spends the next several hours with the kids by playing various games with them and even astounding them with amazing, and massively stretched, stories of his previous adventures and they ended up falling asleep before the parents arrived. When the man returned he snorted in disbelief that his children listened to a savage and quickly payed Hector qithout saying a word and kicked him out of his home.



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2Ling Pao (done) Empty Re: Ling Pao (done) on 26/03/18, 10:40 pm

Hey, Sessho! I love the work and the idea behind Ling Pao so far, but there are some words I need to say.


  • I like the idea for Ling Pao, but he seems to take a lot after his original inspiration. If you don't mind, I have some advice on how to make him more unique and to help flesh him out. Now, this isn't required but more along the lines of advice on how to help flesh out Ling Pao.

    • Add some more personality traits. Make him opinionated, prone to anger, intelligent but shy. You can also make him less goofy but a reserved talker who opens up easily to strangers who show him kindness. Maybe he's softer than he should be or he's meaner than he should be. Maybe he's somewhat of a weird oddball who tends to creep out people on their first impression of him. The world is your oyster.
    • You can also shake up his history quite a bit. Instead of having his parents die early, perhaps he's ashamed of himself because he's failing his parents' expectation. Maybe they're overly critical and harsh and they add to his inferiority complex. If you want, you could also go down the route of Ging Maru hurting his parents (either killing them or somehow disabling them) and that being a reason why Ling Pao wants to hunt him down.

  • The majority of your appearance is mostly his body language and less on how he physically looks. You should add more details, such as body stature, his hair, his eyes, other marks (such as beauty marks, freckles, scars, callouses, etc). You can also go into length about the suit (if it's tight-fighting, leather, stretchy, the texture, etc). You can also throw in wild details like his voice and even how he smells if you want to.


Don't let this grading get you down! I'm really excited to see Ling Pao in action and he's going to be a fantastic addition to our cast. You already have interesting and cool characters so I really want to approve him as soon as I can.

Please make sure to bump this thread when you're done with the necessary edits! Thank you <3


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3Ling Pao (done) Empty Re: Ling Pao (done) on 27/03/18, 02:29 am

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4Ling Pao (done) Empty Re: Ling Pao (done) on 27/03/18, 01:21 pm

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For his appearance try to describe his looks too, it includes their actual body type and shape along with facial features. I know he's a covered ninja but giving details for the characters looks besides their dress and actions is also important.


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[b]Name:[/b] Ling Pao
[b]Country Affiliation:[/b] Wanderer
[b]Race:[/b] Human
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Beast Tamer
[b]Age + Birthdate:[/b] 21
[b]Gender:[/b] Male
[b]Sexuality:[/b] Bisexual
[b]Personality:[/b] Even tho Ling Pao is a failure he still continues the way and life of the ninja. He goes as far to even resemble the personality and stature of a ninja. He will try to be quiet saying that ninja are noiseless but he will often start talking a lot when he is around people who help let his guard down. He also shows tendencies of toad behavior at times such as making croaking noises which can cause people to look at him strangely. He is also very porud of the fact that he is the Legendary Toad Ninja and will announce that fact quite a bit by abouncing himself as the great Toad Ninja and even making silly looking poses and a toad dance tho he will do it with a straight face which people will find even more ridiculous. He is very proud of his ninja self and will fight if someone even says the smallests of insults about himself or ninja in general despite the fact that he cannot hanndle himself in a fight. He is normally more talkative to toads if he ever finds one having full one sided conversations with him. He also sees himself as a hero of Justice and is appalled by all crime and will leap into action no matter how small the offense.
[b]Likes:[/b] Toads: Since Toads are Considered a sacred and god-like creatures by his people, Ling Pao has a certain fondness towards them.

Sweets: Ling Pao has a large sweet tooth and will eat any kind of sweet that he sees.
[b]Dislikes:[/b] frogs: Do to his beliefs Ling Pao despises and hates frogs. He believes that frogs are just some kind of creature trying to look like they are toads.

Alchohal: Ling is a very light wimeight drinker and gets drunk almost immediately so he tries to avoid the stuff.
[b]Aspirations:[/b] Ling Pao's current apsiration is to track down Ging Maru, the man who soiled the Toad Ninja name and slaughter most of his village. He will find him through any way possible but would prefer help. He is also hoping that once he returns with Ging  that the village will finally veiw him as a ninja.

His other apsiration is to become a hreo, a true ninja. All his life he was seen as a failure so he wants to prove his village wrong and show him that he is a true ninja.
[b]Phobias/fears:[/b] Predators of toads: since Ling Pao is the Toad Ninja and relates with toads he is terrified of every single thing that eats or kills toads, besides people of course. He will run screaming if he sees something like a snake or a hawk.

Failure: The great toad ninja is afraid that he may end up losing in his mission to avenge his killed allies and elders. He is even more afraid that he will end up losing or dyig before he ever even finds Ging or become a great Ninja.
[b]Face-Claim:[/b] Leonardo/Log Horizon
[b]Hair Color:[/b] dirty blonde
[b]Eye Color:[/b] green
[b]Height:[/b] 190 cm
[b]Weight:[/b] 178 lb
[b]Appearance:[/b] ling Pao is the Toad Ninja which means  he is always wearing a green toad ninja costume even though it so actually a frog ninja costume. He tends to leap occasionally while walking and does lots of various poses when he does stuff such as fighting or meeting people. When fighting he seems to be random and y orthodox since he has only been trained by himself and not by actual teachers. If he goes to punch someone it won't just be a regular punch, he would do a jumping punch shouting something like Flaming toad punch. He also doesn't ever sit down or stand normally. He will assume a position like a toad when doing either.The Great Toad Ninja's sacred garments that Ling Pao wears is a one peice leotard that is skin taight like most ninja outfits are. How he gets the costume on is a complete mystery. Even though it's a toad ninja outfit it is clear that the the outfit resembles a frog instead of a toad. His hair is long and a bit shaggy and a dirty blonde color. His eyes are a light green color that seems to match his costume perfectly. Despite Being a ninja his physique is less then most. Instead of a rip, muscular body everything is just kinda flat and normal. His face is angular and has edges on it as well as a clear cleft chin. Besides that his face has not real defining features, everything about him just screams plain Jane pretty much. His voice is pretty much average besides when . When fighting he makes a bunch of high pitch fighting noises like Fist of the North Star guy.
[b]Rukh Alignment:[/b] white
[b]Special Features:[/b] Never takes off his Toad Ninja Outfit
[b]History:[/b][spoiler="Intro"]Intro
Known only to few and mostly as whispers, there exists a clan of ninja in a small country. These clans each represent an animal which their fighting styles are based off of. The clan is in a secluded area and have little to no contact with the outside world or each other.

The Clan this history is about is the Toad clan. Their fighting styles and their life styles revolve around toads, but not frogs, NEVER frogs. Some people go as far as living in the woods with toads. While the toad clan has an army of warriors one stands above all others, the Toad Ninja. The Toad Ninja is the best of the warriors and serves as protector of the clan. Toad Ninja is passed down every ten years to another warrior who will wear the special ninja outfit styled in the resemblance of a toad.

The Toad Clan has a prophecy as well that one day a great and powerful evil will rise in this world and that a great Ninja will rise from the toad clan and save the world from this evil.

This story is not about that great hero.[/spoiler]
[spoiler="The Failure"]The Failure ninja:

No this story is not about some great hero it's the opposite. It is about a reject, a failure of a ninja who isn't even really worth mentioning. What's that? You've heard stories like this before where a failure ninja, a nobody becomes a great hero and saves the day. Well this isn't the case. Ling Pao is nothing special at all and never will be, which is why his story isn't even worth recording but it will be.

Ling Pao's life started off sub par at the ninja academy. It was clear right away that Ling was no good at fighting or even the most basic of ninja skills. The elders didn't think that it was wise to encourage this behavior so they quickly banned him from training with the threat of excilng him if he was caught training. This caused everyone in the village to shun Ling since they didn't have time to waste on a failure. And his parents even went as far to disown their failure of a son forcing him to live in an orphanage. This did not stop him though from going into the woods to train in secret.

One day while training in the woods he stumbled across a small sanctuary where the sacred gods of the toad clan lived, the great Ninja Toads. They varied from regular size to the size of a small elephant. Know one knew how but for some reason these toads knew the way of the night ja and how to fight. Even tho they couldn't talk to them they became his new family. He would train with them everyday till the day of the travesty.

One day for no reason the current Toad Ninja , Ging Pao also known as Lings father, slaughtered most of the clan, including Ling's mother, leaving less then a hundred villagers. They quickly needed a new guardian but all of the warriors we're dead. Ling took this chance to volunteer for it but the clan just scowled at him calling him a failure. This upset Ling and he decided the clan was wrong about him and he was going to prove them wrong. So in the middle of the night he stole the sacred Toad Ninja uniniform deciding to wear it as he left the village in the search of Ging Pao Planning to take him down and bring honor back to his clan along with revenge against his father. [/spoiler]
[b]Role-Play Sample:[/b]The red-headed warrior was currently walking through the bazaar that he softened visited whenever he was in the village. The bazaar was a great place to buy supplies such as food or weapons and fear, it was also a place where people came to chat and gossip or to find people to do a job for them. Hector came there mostly for the rumors as he was always in search of a new opponent or something that could make him stronger. He also liked to take an odd Job every now and then so he could earn money and build up a reputation.

While he was looking at a spear he was interested in buying he could hear a man nearby talking to whoever could hear him. He was several years older than Hector was, the warrior would assume that he was in his early to mid thirties. He dressed in robes so he must be rich to be wearing such garments. He seemed to be in a frantic hurry looking for someone to look after his kids while he did something else. "Hmm I am good with kids and I do need to get some more money if I was to buy better weapons and fear." he says quietly to himself as he tended to do often. He walks up to them gentlemen smiling and gets his attention by tapping him on the shoulder. The man turns around a bit annoyed when he noticed that the person who touched him was a Fanalis. "Ugh. What is it that you want yu red haired filth?" the man demanded from Hector. The warrior just smiled and ignored the comment from the rich man as he was used to such hatred from the rich to his people. "Greetings kind sir. I couldn't help but hear that you were looking for someone to do some work for you. I would be more than happy to work for you sir for some money of course." The man thinks for a few moments than sighs, "Well I guess getting help from one of you people is better than none help. I don't even like the ungrateful brats. Me and my wife are going to be at a show at the theatre and you will be taking care of our three kids. You will be payed at the end of the day. Follow me."

Hector followed the man to his home and was quickly introduced to his three children, two twin girls who were about the age of twelve and a little boy who was around the age of 4. The man gave him rules to keep them in the main room till they got back and than left for the theatre. Hector smiled at the kids hoping that the three little ones were not racists like thier father and mother were. He spends the next several hours with the kids by playing various games with them and even astounding them with amazing, and massively stretched, stories of his previous adventures and they ended up falling asleep before the parents arrived. When the man returned he snorted in disbelief that his children listened to a savage and quickly payed Hector qithout saying a word and kicked him out of his home.


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