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1Ronove's Destruction - Extreme Magic Empty Ronove's Destruction - Extreme Magic on 01/03/18, 12:35 pm

Name: Ronove's Destruction
Djinn: Ronove
Cost: 50
Type: Lightning
Class: Offensive
Range: Long
Cool-Down: Once Per Topic
Description:

Ronove's Destruction - Extreme Magic Lightning_release_rasengan


Chanting:

    Pierce through the havens and earth, burn to dust those who oppose you, paralyze those that fear you, and burn brightly in those worthy of your strength like that of the sun.


Electricity coming off Solomon's body would surround him in a circle which he could make the circle be up to 450 cm wide and 450 cm tall once fully surrounded by this circle Solomon would be unable to leave but nothing could enter as well unless already in the circle before fully completed, and nothing could be damaged in this circle by this magic. The electricity would take on the form of a solid dark blue circle that could not be seen though but only by Solomon so he could watch the destruction but this circle would clearly be electricity. From the point of the circle it would explode instantaneously growing outwards, keeping its dense blue color and appearance expanding. It would continue to expand till it is 100 meters in diameter and the density of this circle would be enough to crush the earth beneath it and the environment around it as it grew also changing the environment around them by doing so.

As long as anything (objects, weapons, tools, creatures, buildings... anything) remained in the circle only excluding the space that Solomon stood in or area generated initially at the time casted, it would take A-tier burning damage in the form of lightning. Once the range as been fully grown it will then stay for a couple seconds still within one post showing off its sheer size that of like a blue sun before dissipating.

(Note: -As it grows it doesn't become hollow.)



Last edited by SolomonxKing on 29/03/18, 04:26 pm; edited 10 times in total


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  • Decrease the total diameter range to 200m (or 100m radius)


      There are a few combinations you can make in terms of  the sphere radius and the ring area:1.) 50m sphere radius and 50m outer ring radius2.) 60m sphere radius and 40m outer ring radius3.) 70m sphere radius and 30m outer ring radius4.) 75m sphere radius and 15m outer ring radius5.)etc


  • Delete Ω-tier speed as speed does not exist in abilities and Ω-tier speed doesn't exist.
  • Ω-tier damage does not exist.
  • This extreme magic is really classed as offensive/supplementary based on your current description. The burning damage applied would need to be decreased to B-Tier (since the max damage an Ω-tier spell can do is A-Tier). If you decided to make it purely offensive, all paralyzing effects would need to be taken out which allows the damage to increase to A-Tier. Same if you were to make it purely supplementary to keep the laralysis, but take out the damage.

    Side Note- Staff will be discussing Ω-tier abilities and how best to split the damage (either A/A or B/B if it's off/supp or supp/def), but right now this is the ruling.
  • The duration of the paralyzing is much too long in the sphere, and the paralyzing in the outer ring has no duration at all. Also, the duration of the entire extreme magic can't just be a "moment" seeing as how a moment to you wouldn't be like a moment to your opponent. So, the duration of the entire spell can be 1 post, the paralysis inside the sphere can be 5 posts, and the paralysis in the outer ring can be 2 or 3 posts.


If anything changes with the grading provided I will let you know, but for now, please make the requested changes.

If you have any questions, please PM me.


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Made current edits, left Supplementary even though took out paralysis as it still deals damage to anything in the circle which is included above still.


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  • Please change the type to Offensive since this only deals damage now.
  • You'd get hurt by your own Extreme Magic since you are in the center of it and do not mention a safe zone area or that the area first described is your "safe zone". Please clarifiy.


For now that's all I have. Sorry for the wait.


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  • Also if you use this, you'd technically plummet yourself into a deep crater if I'm visualizing how this spell works correctly. Feel free to correct my if I'm wrong on this.
  • The diameter will have to be reduced to 100m, maybe less, depending on the answer to the following question:


Can you move around in this Extreme Magic?


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Well as a djinn Solomon can fly, however as said can not  leave the safe zone once it is created till its over. So anything else would plummet yes. I guess I'll have to make a skill later to save my beast from plummeting.


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Okay, please reduce the diameter of the sphere to 100m in diameter for now.


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Why it being nerfed again lol?


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200m was deemed too big for a sphere, even if the original was much much larger. 100m is generally how big Extreme Magic AoEs are or how far a direct attack travels. Since this is a sphere with you at the center, 100m is a bit more appropriate in this situation.


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[b]Name:[/b] Ronove's Destruction
[b]Djinn:[/b] Ronove
[b]Cost:[/b] 50
[b]Type:[/b] Lightning
[b]Class:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Cool-Down:[/b] Once Per Topic
[b]Description:[/b]

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[b][u]Chanting:[/u][/b]
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Pierce through the havens and earth, burn to dust those who oppose you, paralyze those that fear you, and burn brightly in those worthy of your strength like that of the sun.[/list]

Electricity coming off Solomon's body would surround him in a circle which he could make the circle be [b][i]up to[/i][/b] 450 cm wide and 450 cm tall once fully surrounded by this circle Solomon would be unable to leave but nothing could enter as well unless already in the circle before fully completed, and nothing could be damaged in this circle by this magic. The electricity would take on the form of a solid dark blue circle that could not be seen though but only by Solomon so he could watch the destruction but this circle would clearly be electricity. From the point of the circle it would explode instantaneously growing outwards, keeping its dense blue color and appearance expanding. It would continue to expand till it is 100 meters in diameter and the density of this circle would be enough to crush the earth beneath it and the environment around it as it grew also changing the environment around them by doing so.

As long as anything (objects, weapons, tools, creatures, buildings... anything) remained in the circle only excluding the space that Solomon stood in or area generated initially at the time casted, it would take A-tier burning damage in the form of lightning. Once the range as been fully grown it will then stay for a couple seconds still within one post showing off its sheer size that of like a blue sun before dissipating.

(Note: -As it grows it doesn't become hollow.)

*Approved techniques are still subject to change if any issues arise in future threads concerning these abilities or if another staff member notices errors in the grader's grading. If such a scenario occurs, staff is welcome and allowed to look over them again and tweak them if necessary.


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