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1The Dark Hand Empty The Dark Hand on 18/02/18, 01:45 am

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The Dark Hand

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Affiliation: Other
Type: Social
Status: (Invite Only)
Requirements:

  • Entry: To join the Dark Hand, one must do a solo thread of getting inducted and receiving the dark hand tattoos on their body. Meeting Lagi to join can also fulfill the requirements. The tattoo markings is essentially a black rukh conversion.

    The way of receiving these tattoos is a special mixture that's indulged by dark hand members that cause extreme suffering and pain before simulating the instance of negative hallucinations. It can either be indulged or tatted on the body.  The pain and the negative hallucinations forces them to go through a dark wave of emotions, causing them to fall into depravity.


  • Departure: (Due to the fact that the cult shares plenty of secrets, in addition to the 1000 wc involving their departure, the member must also swear an oath of secrecy. )
  • Activity: Completing the monthly activity check. If you are unable to for personal reasons, please contact Lagi.


Description: The dark hand is a cult/criminal organization that centers around the worship of their god, which is only referenced as "The Master". The main idea of the dark hand is to have a hand in everything, politics, militaries, even business ventures. One of the things that they do is replace individuals with doppelgangers for the sake of the dark hand agenda.

- The primary goal is to bring back "The Master".
- The secondary goal is the salvation of humanity by allowing them to "Evolve".
- The third is to have a form of influence in as many ventures as they can.
- The fourth is to convert those to worship the master once resurrected.

Leader: The Master- Alma Torran Being?
Mazus Grim (NPC) - The Soothsayer
Members:  

The members are split between palms and fingers. The fingers of the hand are governed by a sin or a vice, which most of their acts are based on.  They are the leaders that are under the master.

These aspects are something the character must follow.

The Palms are regular members. However, Palms with aspects have the potential to be Fingers.

Fingers of The Hand
Lagi Ulifia/Requiem Jynx - Debauchery
Demien Villalobos (NPC) - The Bloodied

Palms Of The Hand
Zuzu Mansur -No Aspect Yet

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NPC Link
http://magiworld.forumotion.com/t9612-dark-hand-npc-s#52076



Last edited by Lagi on 27/02/18, 07:55 pm; edited 4 times in total


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2The Dark Hand Empty Re: The Dark Hand on 25/02/18, 01:12 pm

Hey, Lagi! I'm going to be grading your faction, so let's buckle up.


  • The tattoo markings is essentially a black rukh conversion." The tattoo conversion is a form of Curse Magic. Please explain this portion, including who gives the tattoos, if you can give the tattoos, and exactly how they work for further clarification.
  • "Leader: The Master- Alma Torran Being?" You'll need some sort of NPC head of the cult who gives everyone else his orders. I don't care if he gets them from the Master, but there should be some sort of humanoid leader for the faction.


Bump when you have the edits done! <3


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3The Dark Hand Empty Re: The Dark Hand on 25/02/18, 06:06 pm

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4The Dark Hand Empty Re: The Dark Hand on 25/02/18, 08:39 pm

We're almost done here! Thank you for the edits~ There's just some more stuff to be done:


  • For the curse tattoos, can you provide me with a link to where they were established?
  • All Magicians of the Dark Hand won't have access to a spell of a special, restrictive magic type. Based on how established the tattoos are and how they're linked to curse magic, we may require that only one Magician knows this spell.
  • Alright, I'm going to be frank with you: you can't trick the Rukh like that. It's like your spirit and if it leaves it's gone. It doesn't get replaced with Black Rukh, it turns into Black Rukh. So that plan isn't going to work. Instead, you can have it where the tattoo ink is made from a concoction that is hallucinogenic and extremely painful. Those who go through it witness immense pain and crazy hallucinations that force them to go through waves of dark thoughts and emotions. The end results is that they fall into depravity and therefore have Black Rukh. Also, I believe that this is a much better route for the tattoos causing Black Rukh/depravity.
  • I can't find any NPC info on the leader you provided, so I suggest that you create a NPC thing for him. Also, he would staff controlled. This is due to the fact that Lagi is technically just a "regular" member and therefore you won't have control of the Dark Hand's leader. However, if you wish to use him to do things such as dispatch Lagi on missions and similar uses, then that is completely alright.


Bump once you're done editing!


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5The Dark Hand Empty Re: The Dark Hand on 26/02/18, 04:51 pm

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- http://magiworld.forumotion.com/t9612-dark-hand-npc-s#52076
Here is ur npc list

- You got pms of the tattoo/marking origin

- only grim knows this spell

- took your suggestion on what it does


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6The Dark Hand Empty Re: The Dark Hand on 27/02/18, 07:42 pm

Official Grading:

After combing through what you had given me with the other staff members, we do not think that you have established the tattoos being made from Curse Magic. As stated before, it's a restricted, special magic type that has only been available to the Contractor. Having even a single member of the Dark Hand would have been a stretch, however, it may have been allowed if you had previously established the use of Curse Magic with the tattoos.

Within the four threads, you had a single instance of the tattoos being referred to (The Death of His Hope). After staying in a cesspool of a mixture of both El Drago's blood and an unknown liquid for an undetermined time (later revealed to be around six months?), the tube is drained and Lagi awakens and finds a tattoo. However, there is no mention of Curse Magic being used to create the tattoos. If the unknown liquid caused it, there's not even a hint of that liquid being made from Curse Magic. Additionally, we don't see a Magician of the Dark Hand casting a spell that creates the tattoo with Curse Magic or just using Curse Magic on Lagi in general.

Please remove any mention of the tattoos being made with Curse Magic. You are more than welcomed to have the Dark Hand require tattoos, but not from Curse Magic. Instead, you can just stick with the tattoos being made from a concoction. It would cause immense suffering and hallucinations, forcing those being tattooed with it to go through depravity. It's an alternative that fits better with the systems and the world while still achieving the effect you wanted with the tattoos.

Please bump the thread when you edited the thread above. If you have any questions, please ask either me or Merr. Please know that my grading has been agreed upon, so do not feel as if I am being too strict, harsh, or iffy with it.


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7The Dark Hand Empty Re: The Dark Hand on 27/02/18, 07:56 pm

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8The Dark Hand Empty Re: The Dark Hand on 27/02/18, 09:22 pm

"With that, the Dark Hand is officially approved! Thank you for your patience and cooperation, Lagi!

Due to the fact that the Dark Hand is a pre-established group, your initial fee has been waived. The 50,000 haung will still go into your faction's bank, however.

If you have any concerns, questions, or any other comment, then please feel free to ask! Without further ado, please post your faction into the vaults. I cannot wait to see the Dark Hand in action!"

Here is the code with the music in tack!
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[center][b]The Dark Hand[/b][/center]

[center][img]http://i.imgur.com/crChE3t.png[/img][/center]

[b]Affiliation[/b]: Other
[b]Type[/b]: Social
[b]Status[/b]: (Invite Only)
[b]Requirements[/b]:
[list]
[*][b]Entry[/b]: To join the Dark Hand, one must do a solo thread of getting inducted and receiving the dark hand tattoos on their body. Meeting Lagi to join can also fulfill the requirements. The tattoo markings is essentially a black rukh conversion.

The  way of receiving these tattoos is a special mixture that's indulged by dark hand members that cause extreme suffering and pain before simulating the instance of negative hallucinations. It can either be indulged or tatted on the body.  The pain and the negative hallucinations forces them to go through a dark wave of emotions, causing them to fall into depravity.


[*][b]Departure[/b]: (Due to the fact that the cult shares plenty of secrets, in addition to the 1000 wc involving their departure, the member must also swear an oath of secrecy. )
[*][b]Activity[/b]: Completing the monthly activity check. If you are unable to for personal reasons, please contact Lagi.

[/list]
[b]Description[/b]: The dark hand is a cult/criminal organization that centers around the worship of their god, which is only referenced as "The Master". The main idea of the dark hand is to have a hand in everything, politics, militaries, even business ventures. One of the things that they do is replace individuals with doppelgangers for the sake of the dark hand agenda.

- The primary goal is to bring back "The Master".
- The secondary goal is the salvation of humanity by allowing them to "Evolve".
- The third is to have a form of influence in as many ventures as they can.
- The fourth is to convert those to worship the master once resurrected.

[b]Leader[/b]: The Master- Alma Torran Being?
Mazus Grim (NPC) - The Soothsayer
[b]Members[/b]:  

The members are split between palms and fingers. The fingers of the hand are governed by a sin or a vice, which most of their acts are based on.  They are the leaders that are under the master.

These aspects are something the character must follow.

The Palms are regular members. However, Palms with aspects have the potential to be Fingers.

[b][u]Fingers of The Hand[/u][/b]
Lagi Ulifia/Requiem Jynx - Debauchery
Demien Villalobos (NPC) - The Bloodied

[b][u]Palms Of The Hand[/u][/b]
Zuzu Mansur -No Aspect Yet

[b]Threads[/b]:
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[*][url=http://magiworld.forumotion.com/t8612-a-drug-worthy-for-a-warrior-lagi-solo-b-rank#46607]A Drug Worthy For A Warrior[/url]
[*][url=http://magiworld.forumotion.com/t8626-el-ragu-the-nectar-of-the-gods-lagi-b-rank-solo#46686]El Ragu, The Nectar of the Gods[/url]
[*][url=http://magiworld.forumotion.com/t8628-out-with-the-old-lagi-solo-c-rank#46692]Out with the Old[/url]
[*][url=http://magiworld.forumotion.com/t8634-and-in-with-the-new-lagi-solo-b-rank#46718]And in with the new[/url]
[*][url=http://magiworld.forumotion.com/t8638-parade-away-solo-lagi-c-rank#46743]Parade Away[/url]
[*][url=http://magiworld.forumotion.com/t8640-a-city-of-debauchery-lagi-b-rank-solo#46749]A City of Debauchery[/url]
[/list]


[b][u]NPC Link[/u][/b]
http://magiworld.forumotion.com/t9612-dark-hand-npc-s#52076


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