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1 Manipulate My Body II on 15/02/18, 02:19 pm



A Hunter's Trill
Tier: D
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must manipulate their throat and inhale a deep breath before roaring. If the object is moving, this ability may only detect the location it is currently at when the ability is used. The user must cancel any other body manipulator abilities applied to their torso.
Scaling: Range
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 stamina | 5 stamina
Description:

    The user changes the structure of their vocal cords to allow them to reach a pitch inaudible to the normal ear. After manipulating their throat and taking a deep breath, the user lets out a series of sounds and vibrations that bounce off of their surroundings, returning back to them. This allows the user to pinpoint the static location, at the time of use, of all solid objects around them within a 5m radius.



Blades of Blood
Tier: C
Class: Body Manipulator
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must swipe their arm in the direction they want the ability to go. They must cancel any other body manipulator abilities applied to the hand used.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 2
Cost: 20 stamina | 15 stamina
Description:

    The user manipulates their fingertips and alters their muscles to allow them to create a high pressure environment that shoots out an altered form of their blood that hardens upon contact with the air. They swipe their arm in the direction of the target to release two 2m long blades that travel up to 15m. These deal D tier damage each on impact.




Last edited by Diana Corvus on 16/11/18, 12:29 am; edited 1 time in total


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2 Re: Manipulate My Body II on 15/11/18, 09:18 pm

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A Hunter's Trill - Approved cause you are a fanalis, any other race would need a trait to hear it.(For reference in case a human tries to make something identical)

Blades of Blood - The span covered by a sweep of your arm would probably be closer to 1.5 to 2m so I'd like to ask if you can reduce the size of the blades. In exchange you can bump the range up a bit to compensate. Maybe add a line that the blood is released at high pressure due to muscle contractions?

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3 Re: Manipulate My Body II on 16/11/18, 12:31 am

I edited it. Is that fine? I can lower the range if it is too much. I just like the number 5.


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4 Re: Manipulate My Body II on 16/11/18, 02:00 pm

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[center][b]A Hunter's Trill[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must manipulate their throat and inhale a deep breath before roaring. If the object is moving, this ability may only detect the location it is currently at when the ability is used. The user must cancel any other body manipulator abilities applied to their torso.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 stamina | 5 stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
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The user changes the structure of their vocal cords to allow them to reach a pitch inaudible to the normal ear. After manipulating their throat and taking a deep breath, the user lets out a series of sounds and vibrations that bounce off of their surroundings, returning back to them. This allows the user to pinpoint the static location, at the time of use, of all solid objects around them within a 5m radius.[/list]
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[center][b]Blades of Blood[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Body Manipulator
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must swipe their arm in the direction they want the ability to go. They must cancel any other body manipulator abilities applied to the hand used.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stamina | 15 stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
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The user manipulates their fingertips and alters their muscles to allow them to create a high pressure environment that shoots out an altered form of their blood that hardens upon contact with the air. They swipe their arm in the direction of the target to release two 2m long blades that travel up to 15m. These deal D tier damage each on impact.[/list]
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5 Re: Manipulate My Body II on 16/11/18, 05:27 pm


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6 Re: Manipulate My Body II on 16/11/18, 05:32 pm

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Approved! Remember to add these to your vault~


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