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1Seeker (Owl Companion) Empty Seeker (Owl Companion) on 31/12/17, 06:53 pm

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Seeker (Owl Companion) Ommu0QL
Name: Seeker
Tier: D
Type: Normal
Species: Owl - Snowy
Appearance: Weighing about 2.4 kilograms, Seekers is around 26 inches long with a 53 inch wingspan. The animals feathers is in a coloration designed to provide optimal camouflage within its natural environment or other wintery, icy and snowy climates. Its primary method of movement is through its silent flight and its main ability to strike comes from the creatures talons though seeker is primarily trained to drop a basic projectile from its talon's rather than engage in a melee.
Beast Traits: (See the Trait Systems for more info.)

Trait Name: Natural Camouflage
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement:
Trait Description: With Seekers adult plummage, Seeker now has a optimal camouflage for its natural environment. Be it on ground level pouncing prey or in the sky scouting out targets.
Trait Effect: Within Imuchakk and other similar Environments - Seeker is incredibly difficult to spot or locate. Making targetting or even attacking problematic. - Effectively making the small creature viable spottable from around 10 metres away when it is on the ground in its preferred territory.

Trait Name: Owl Sight
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement: Seeker/Owl
Trait Description: The owl's sight is highly adapted, its keen eyes allowing it to see out far.
Trait Effect: Seeker's eye sight allows the bird to see targets from far away allowing it to track prey from afar during day and night. (As per Owl RL)

Trait Name: Silent Flight
Trait Tier: D
Trait Requirement: Seeker/Owl
Trait Description: An Owl's feathers highly adapted to reduce the sound it makes in flight.
Trait Effect: Makes Seeker incredibly hard to hear while it is in flight.



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2Seeker (Owl Companion) Empty Re: Seeker (Owl Companion) on 02/03/18, 06:50 pm

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Seeker - Updated


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3Seeker (Owl Companion) Empty Re: Seeker (Owl Companion) on 11/06/19, 10:25 am

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4Seeker (Owl Companion) Empty Re: Seeker (Owl Companion) on 27/06/19, 03:25 pm

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Let us begin grading:

Natural Camouflage: We do not use percentages like that, so if can please remove that part that'll be great. Please change the actual camouflage effect to being able to be seen up to ten meters away, period. With it not needing to be on the ground to be seen. I think that is about it. Any other staff is free to come in to give their two cents if they wish.

Owl Sight: This is okay as long as it is based accurately on how far actual real life owls can see.

Silent Flight: Is a range really necessary? I do not know as a staff but I can say it seems like a nerf to yourself when similar traits can achieve the same but with no range limit.


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5Seeker (Owl Companion) Empty Re: Seeker (Owl Companion) on 01/07/19, 04:01 pm

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6Seeker (Owl Companion) Empty Re: Seeker (Owl Companion) on 01/07/19, 08:38 pm

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I approve of this, as it looks like requested edits were made.

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[center][img]https://i.imgur.com/ommu0QL.jpg?1[/img][/center]
[b]Name:[/b] Seeker
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Type:[/b] Normal
[b]Species:[/b] Owl - Snowy
[b]Appearance:[/b] Weighing about 2.4 kilograms, Seekers is around 26 inches long with a 53 inch wingspan. The animals feathers is in a coloration designed to provide optimal camouflage within its natural environment or other wintery, icy and snowy climates. Its primary method of movement is through its silent flight and its main ability to strike comes from the creatures talons though seeker is primarily trained to drop a basic projectile from its talon's rather than engage in a melee.
[b]Beast Traits:[/b] (See the [url=http://magiworld.forumotion.com/t6506-trait-template-systems][b]Trait Systems[/b][/url] for more info.)

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Natural Camouflage
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b]
[b]Trait Description:[/b] With Seekers adult plummage, Seeker now has a optimal camouflage for its natural environment. Be it on ground level pouncing prey or in the sky scouting out targets.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Within Imuchakk and other similar Environments - Seeker is incredibly difficult to spot or locate. Making targetting or even attacking problematic. - Effectively making the small creature viable spottable from around 10 metres away when it is on the ground in its preferred territory.

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Owl Sight
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Seeker/Owl
[b]Trait Description:[/b] The owl's sight is highly adapted, its keen eyes allowing it to see out far.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Seeker's eye sight allows the bird to see targets from far away allowing it to track prey from afar during day and night. (As per Owl RL)

[b]Trait Name:[/b] Silent Flight
[b]Trait Tier:[/b] D
[b]Trait Requirement:[/b] Seeker/Owl
[b]Trait Description:[/b] An Owl's feathers highly adapted to reduce the sound it makes in flight.
[b]Trait Effect:[/b] Makes Seeker incredibly hard to hear while it is in flight.


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