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1 Kaneoi Deuio on 12/09/17, 09:04 pm

   Name: Kaneoi Deuio
   Country Affiliation: Wanderer
   Race: Fanalis
   Tier: D
   Class: Assassin
   Age + Birthdate: 21, Febuary 14
   Gender: Male
   Sexuality: Bisexual
   Personality: Kaneoi, Usually a quiet guy.He doesn't really seem to do anything whenever all the spotlight is on him, he doesn't freak out, he doesn't walk away, He just does nothing.That's basically the way he is.He'd rather just stay quiet, rather than being a loud person, as that would ruin lots of things for him, including his very dark secrets.He really doesn't show many emotions, he likes to keep a neutral face.Though deep down he does want to express his feelings, it's just hard for him to do it, as he's scared of anyone to judge him.It is especially hard for him to express sadness and happiness.Mostly due to the fact that his expressions never change.So it's hard for anyone to actually know if he is having fun, or if he's feeling depressed.However one good thing is that it is very hard to actually get him to be angered or sad.The only time that does ever happen is if something that was close to him was destroyed or someone very close to him was to be injured, hurt or killed.But it is hard for him to make any friends at all, and so he doesn't like to make many friends.But if someone does come up to him and actually becomes a friend of him, He will express happiness, but that would probably be the only time they would see him express any emotion at all, so Making friends for him is like an award.So he cherishes anyone who is a friends or becomes a friend of his.

Whenever he is angered however, everything changes.This is one of the only feelings he can actually express.Whenever he angered, He is very aggressive, But this is due to the fact that he doesn't get angered by any any normal stuff, he only gets mad whenever a comrade is hurt, or severely injured.During this is basically turns into a monster.This is really the only way he can express anger, his facial expression will change of course, and his behavior changes obviously.So whenever he is in battle, he is a dangerous being, especially due to his Race, He is a Fanalis which makes him naturally stronger, which makes him a monster in battle.

   Likes:
Books- Kaneoi Is A Person who doesn't really seem to be interested in anything.But one Thing he really is interested in is books, He was taught how to read at a very young age, So he pretty much grew up with books around him.Another reason he loves to read books is because, One of his past Mentor's he had as a child was cursed and turned into a book.And one of the books he cherishes so much is the book his mentor was turned into, of course he doesn't read it or do anything with it, but he does keep it with him for safekeeping.

Making New Friends
-Another thing That's hard for Kaneoi to do is make any new friends, He can't even make any new acquaintances easily.Mostly due to his quiet nature, Due to this no-one really talks to him, and whenever someone does talk to him, he really only says a couple words or even nothing.So if someone actually sticks around to talk with him, he'd be extremely happy, it would be like earning an award for him to make a new friend.

   Dislikes:
The Fact That He Can't Really Express Any Emotions- One thing he really hates, Is that he can't express any emotion whenever he wants to, the only thing he can express is anger, which is bad.Mostly because if the only thing he can express is anger, People might think something bad of him.They'll think of him as dangerous and shady, He can easily be confused as that.



Seeing Someone Innocent Get Inured
- Who would want to see anyone be hurt or die, especially if they did nothing wrong? If anyone were to be happy about that, Kaneoi would do anything to stop that person of doing anything.Especially if they're the one who hurts people as well.


   Aspirations:
Kaneoi has always been alone ever since his Elder sister and brother had passed away.It's one of the reasons why he isn't able to express any emotions at his will.Ever since that day he's always had a neutral expression, and such.But ever since that day he's had a dream to be able to find some other people to help him, so he will never be alone.

He wants to just wants to meet more and more people, so he'll be able to be comfortable with showing his emotions.He wants to feel stronger is all he wants.

   Phobias/fears:
Kaneoi has basically no fears at all, but one thing he is scared of, is being alone in complete darkness forever.All this means is that he's scared of being 'invisible', As in where he's ignored by everyone.He never wants to be alone, because it makes him feel as if there's something wrong with him.

Another fear of his is being led onto the dark side.He really is scared of turning dark, Mostly because that would ruin alot of his reputation, making him seem alot like a dangerous man.He never wants that, like really who would?

   Face-Claim: Sasori From Naruto
   Hair Color: Red
   Eye Color: Brownish Red
   Height: 195 cm (6'5")
   Weight: 89 Kilograms (198 Pounds)
   Appearance:
Kaneoi is quite the tall one, But it makes sense for his Race, Because he is a Fanalis after all.He wears a black and red outfit, It covers most of his torso, and his arms, It cover's most of his neck as well.One thing about his outfit is that there's red cloud looking signs arranged on his outfit.This is mostly to represent his race's natural color choices.Underneath it all he wears a white shirt and a white baggy bottom.It's a bit plain but it's alright for him.He wears black sandals, and his toenails and nails are painted black.He had crimson red hair, He really doesn't style in any way and just leaves it the way it is whenever he wakes up in the morning and all.He has a neutral expression, Almost all the time, Probably the only time he could make another expression is when he's sleeping or unconscious.He does have a deep dark voice, which sounds like it wouldn't fit him.Another thing that's a bit weird about him is his weight, He is quite heavy, but this is because that he trains everyday.He is quite muscular and is a proud owner of a hard earned six-pack.
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   Rukh Alignment: Pure White
   Special Features:
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   History:
Kaneoi was born on the day of Valentines day, Such a beautiful Holiday.Who wouldn't like a day about love, If there was anyone who didn't like Valentines day, there was probably something wrong with them, Or at least that's what Kaneoi thought.He grew up with a loving family, He had an elder sister and brother, and one soft, caring and gentle mother.He was born in a small village far away from most of the important countries.There was nothing that could ruin living in this village, he loved it so much, Many of the village folk would come to the family's home to see him, as he was a blessing to the whole village.They were told that Kaneoi would become a successful man whenever he grew up.He was 4 whenever he was able to have an education, which is quite young but it was alright, because it's better to be educated in the early years so in the later years you'll be able to  learn much quicker.

He was having the time of his life, being able to learn, living in a loving village, and growing up with many people who cared about him.But there was one thing that could stop this moment from being able to continue to go on, The village was being hunted down as slaves.If this were to happen it would be horrible, But Kaneoi knew nothing about this.Another thing that could happen to the village is the possibility of it being destroyed at any time, This is because there was a volcano nearby the village, about a mile away.If you think about it it's not very far away which was quite dangerous, If the Volcano were to erupt it would wipe out the existence of the village.

He was still happy, until he reached the age of 5, It was his birthday and the whole village was in the home of his family.There was a cake, and some activities to do for his birthday.However there was two things about to happen, the nearby volcano was going to be erupting in the next couple hours of his birthday celebration and a gang of bandits were going to capture the village.No-one knew what was going to be happening during all of this, and the results would be unpredictable.5 hours after Kaneoi's celebration, the volcano had smoke coming out of it.No-one had seen anything until the village chief noticed it.The village had to evacuate the area, or else the whole village would be extinct.The whole village panicked except for Deuio family and the village chief.This was because they knew what they had to do in order to preserve the village, They grabbed their belongings and started to evacuate the area with the rest of the village people.But it was too late, the volcano was starting to erupt, lava started to spurt around the area, Luckily it hadn't came close to the village or the village people yet.They started to run somewhere safe but they were stopped by the group of bandits.They were basically cornered, if they were to back up they would be in the radius of were the lava projectiles would land, and if they were to go forward they would end up being killed by the bandits.Kaneoi however walked forward without anyone stopping him, he walked up to a bandit and started to talk to the leader."Excuse me sir..? Can you leave us alone.. I don't want my family to die, so please leave us alone!" He asked the bandits and the leader, the bandits however laughed at him and threw him against a nearby tree.The village was angered and decided to fight against the large group of bandits, because of the bandit's strength and the villagefolks lack of strength, they were basically outnumbered.They were fighting, a forth of the bandits were defeated but half of the village folk were defeated as well.However one thing no-one even knew was the fact that the volcano was about to start shooting more lava out.They continued to fight one for about 20 minutes until a large amount of lava was about to hit the area of the battlezone.Kaneoi was just watching this all, in complete fear of his family or anymore village folk dying, until he saw the large amount of lava heading for them."E-Everyone! Run away!" He yelled, but no-one seemed to hear him.He ran away as he thought at least one person were to hear him.Next thing he knew everyone was hit by the lava projectile except him, He was infuriated by all of this and started to cry.He knew he had to do something to avenge all of the people he loved so much.He ran away to a village dozens of miles away, it took a 3 day walk in order to reach it, he was starving and had no hope for anything at all.He wallked through the village like a zombie, he had no food or water for 3 days he was basically on the verge of dying of dehydration.He passed out on the floor, until someone came to rescue him, A someone who would soon be his guardian.He woke up in the man's house, it was a small cramped house, but it was enough to hold the both of them.Kaneoi was confused to where he was the man walked up to him and introduced himself, and Kaneoi followed to introduce himself.The man's name was Hadept.A weird name it was but he had hope in the child who is Kaneoi.Kaneoi stayed with the man for a couple years til he was 19, that was the day he was going to go on his journey, and ever since that day he's become the strong man he is today.He's known around as the shadow assassin, to whoever know's him at least.

   Role-Play Sample:
The red haired man walked through a dry, sandy Cold Desert.He had no problem walking through this area as he was used to basically all types of weather at this point.He's a wanderer after all, He'd rather be able to explore the world, than to be imprisoned by countries rules and traditions.Well of course he could still travel to other countries as well, but so far he's stayed at a foreign country.There was almost no-one there except for the small amount of animals.But what would you expect from the desert, there was only some coyotes, rabbits and antelopes in the distance.It was a pretty area at least in Kaneoi's eyes, he wasn't necessarily happy, but he did like the area, there was peace and quiet, nothing to bother the quietness other than the sound of nature.



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2 Re: Kaneoi Deuio on 14/09/17, 12:15 am

Bumping this thread,It's ready to be approved ^^

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3 Re: Kaneoi Deuio on 14/09/17, 05:47 pm

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4 Re: Kaneoi Deuio on 14/09/17, 09:37 pm

Bump! Sorry for making it so long,I was having fun making the app,so i went a bit overboard

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5 Re: Kaneoi Deuio on 16/09/17, 12:08 am

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  [b]Name:[/b] Kaneoi Deuio
  [b]Country Affiliation:[/b] Wanderer
  [b]Race:[/b] Fanalis
  [b]Tier:[/b] D
  [b]Class:[/b] Assassin
  [b]Age + Birthdate:[/b] 21, Febuary 14
  [b]Gender:[/b] Male
  [b]Sexuality:[/b] Bisexual
  [b]Personality:[/b] Kaneoi, Usually a quiet guy.He doesn't really seem to do anything whenever all the spotlight is on him, he doesn't freak out, he doesn't walk away, He just does nothing.That's basically the way he is.He'd rather just stay quiet, rather than being a loud person, as that would ruin lots of things for him, including his very dark secrets.He really doesn't show many emotions, he likes to keep a neutral face.Though deep down he does want to express his feelings, it's just hard for him to do it, as he's scared of anyone to judge him.It is especially hard for him to express sadness and happiness.Mostly due to the fact that his expressions never change.So it's hard for anyone to actually know if he is having fun, or if he's feeling depressed.However one good thing is that it is very hard to actually get him to be angered or sad.The only time that does ever happen is if something that was close to him was destroyed or someone very close to him was to be injured, hurt or killed.But it is hard for him to make any friends at all, and so he doesn't like to make many friends.But if someone does come up to him and actually becomes a friend of him, He will express happiness, but that would probably be the only time they would see him express any emotion at all, so Making friends for him is like an award.So he cherishes anyone who is a friends or becomes a friend of his.

Whenever he is angered however, everything changes.This is one of the only feelings he can actually express.Whenever he angered, He is very aggressive, But this is due to the fact that he doesn't get angered by any any normal stuff, he only gets mad whenever a comrade is hurt, or severely injured.During this is basically turns into a monster.This is really the only way he can express anger, his facial expression will change of course, and his behavior changes obviously.So whenever he is in battle, he is a dangerous being, especially due to his Race, He is a Fanalis which makes him naturally stronger, which makes him a monster in battle.

  [b]Likes:[/b]
[i]Books[/i]- Kaneoi Is A Person who doesn't really seem to be interested in anything.But one Thing he really is interested in is books, He was taught how to read at a very young age, So he pretty much grew up with books around him.Another reason he loves to read books is because, One of his past Mentor's he had as a child was cursed and turned into a book.And one of the books he cherishes so much is the book his mentor was turned into, of course he doesn't read it or do anything with it, but he does keep it with him for safekeeping.
[i]
Making New Friends[/i]-Another thing That's hard for Kaneoi to do is make any new friends, He can't even make any new acquaintances easily.Mostly due to his quiet nature, Due to this no-one really talks to him, and whenever someone does talk to him, he really only says a couple words or even nothing.So if someone actually sticks around to talk with him, he'd be extremely happy, it would be like earning an award for him to make a new friend.

  [b]Dislikes:[/b]
[i]The Fact That He Can't Really Express Any Emotions[/i]- One thing he really hates, Is that he can't express any emotion whenever he wants to, the only thing he can express is anger, which is bad.Mostly because if the only thing he can express is anger, People might think something bad of him.They'll think of him as dangerous and shady, He can easily be confused as that.


[i]
Seeing Someone Innocent Get Inured[/i]- Who would want to see anyone be hurt or die, especially if they did nothing wrong? If anyone were to be happy about that, Kaneoi would do anything to stop that person of doing anything.Especially if they're the one who hurts people as well.


  [b]Aspirations:[/b]
Kaneoi has always been alone ever since his Elder sister and brother had passed away.It's one of the reasons why he isn't able to express any emotions at his will.Ever since that day he's always had a neutral expression, and such.But ever since that day he's had a dream to be able to find some other people to help him, so he will never be alone.

He wants to just wants to meet more and more people, so he'll be able to be comfortable with showing his emotions.He wants to feel stronger is all he wants.

  [b]Phobias/fears:[/b]
Kaneoi has basically no fears at all, but one thing he is scared of, is being alone in complete darkness forever.All this means is that he's scared of being 'invisible', As in where he's ignored by everyone.He never wants to be alone, because it makes him feel as if there's something wrong with him.

Another fear of his is being led onto the dark side.He really is scared of turning dark, Mostly because that would ruin alot of his reputation, making him seem alot like a dangerous man.He never wants that, like really who would?

  [b]Face-Claim:[/b] Sasori From Naruto
  [b]Hair Color:[/b] Red
  [b]Eye Color:[/b] Brownish Red
  [b]Height:[/b] 195 cm (6'5")
  [b]Weight:[/b] 89 Kilograms (198 Pounds)
  [b]Appearance:[/b]
Kaneoi is quite the tall one, But it makes sense for his Race, Because he is a Fanalis after all.He wears a black and red outfit, It covers most of his torso, and his arms, It cover's most of his neck as well.One thing about his outfit is that there's red cloud looking signs arranged on his outfit.This is mostly to represent his race's natural color choices.Underneath it all he wears a white shirt and a white baggy bottom.It's a bit plain but it's alright for him.He wears black sandals, and his toenails and nails are painted black.He had crimson red hair, He really doesn't style in any way and just leaves it the way it is whenever he wakes up in the morning and all.He has a neutral expression, Almost all the time, Probably the only time he could make another expression is when he's sleeping or unconscious.He does have a deep dark voice, which sounds like it wouldn't fit him.Another thing that's a bit weird about him is his weight, He is quite heavy, but this is because that he trains everyday.He is quite muscular and is a proud owner of a hard earned six-pack.
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  [b]Rukh Alignment:[/b] Pure White
  [b]Special Features:[/b]
N/A
  [b]History:[/b]
Kaneoi was born on the day of Valentines day, Such a beautiful Holiday.Who wouldn't like a day about love, If there was anyone who didn't like Valentines day, there was probably something wrong with them, Or at least that's what Kaneoi thought.He grew up with a loving family, He had an elder sister and brother, and one soft, caring and gentle mother.He was born in a small village far away from most of the important countries.There was nothing that could ruin living in this village, he loved it so much, Many of the village folk would come to the family's home to see him, as he was a blessing to the whole village.They were told that Kaneoi would become a successful man whenever he grew up.He was 4 whenever he was able to have an education, which is quite young but it was alright, because it's better to be educated in the early years so in the later years you'll be able to  learn much quicker.

He was having the time of his life, being able to learn, living in a loving village, and growing up with many people who cared about him.But there was one thing that could stop this moment from being able to continue to go on, The village was being hunted down as slaves.If this were to happen it would be horrible, But Kaneoi knew nothing about this.Another thing that could happen to the village is the possibility of it being destroyed at any time, This is because there was a volcano nearby the village, about a mile away.If you think about it it's not very far away which was quite dangerous, If the Volcano were to erupt it would wipe out the existence of the village.

He was still happy, until he reached the age of 5, It was his birthday and the whole village was in the home of his family.There was a cake, and some activities to do for his birthday.However there was two things about to happen, the nearby volcano was going to be erupting in the next couple hours of his birthday celebration and a gang of bandits were going to capture the village.No-one knew what was going to be happening during all of this, and the results would be unpredictable.5 hours after Kaneoi's celebration, the volcano had smoke coming out of it.No-one had seen anything until the village chief noticed it.The village had to evacuate the area, or else the whole village would be extinct.The whole village panicked except for Deuio family and the village chief.This was because they knew what they had to do in order to preserve the village, They grabbed their belongings and started to evacuate the area with the rest of the village people.But it was too late, the volcano was starting to erupt, lava started to spurt around the area, Luckily it hadn't came close to the village or the village people yet.They started to run somewhere safe but they were stopped by the group of bandits.They were basically cornered, if they were to back up they would be in the radius of were the lava projectiles would land, and if they were to go forward they would end up being killed by the bandits.Kaneoi however walked forward without anyone stopping him, he walked up to a bandit and started to talk to the leader.[color=#ff0000]"Excuse me sir..? Can you leave us alone.. I don't want my family to die, so please leave us alone!"[/color] He asked the bandits and the leader, the bandits however laughed at him and threw him against a nearby tree.The village was angered and decided to fight against the large group of bandits, because of the bandit's strength and the villagefolks lack of strength, they were basically outnumbered.They were fighting, a forth of the bandits were defeated but half of the village folk were defeated as well.However one thing no-one even knew was the fact that the volcano was about to start shooting more lava out.They continued to fight one for about 20 minutes until a large amount of lava was about to hit the area of the battlezone.Kaneoi was just watching this all, in complete fear of his family or anymore village folk dying, until he saw the large amount of lava heading for them.[color=#ff0000]"E-Everyone! Run away!"[/color] He yelled, but no-one seemed to hear him.He ran away as he thought at least one person were to hear him.Next thing he knew everyone was hit by the lava projectile except him, He was infuriated by all of this and started to cry.He knew he had to do something to avenge all of the people he loved so much.He ran away to a village dozens of miles away, it took a 3 day walk in order to reach it, he was starving and had no hope for anything at all.He wallked through the village like a zombie, he had no food or water for 3 days he was basically on the verge of dying of dehydration.He passed out on the floor, until someone came to rescue him, A someone who would soon be his guardian.He woke up in the man's house, it was a small cramped house, but it was enough to hold the both of them.Kaneoi was confused to where he was the man walked up to him and introduced himself, and Kaneoi followed to introduce himself.The man's name was Hadept.A weird name it was but he had hope in the child who is Kaneoi.Kaneoi stayed with the man for a couple years til he was 19, that was the day he was going to go on his journey, and ever since that day he's become the strong man he is today.He's known around as the shadow assassin, to whoever know's him at least.

  [b]Role-Play Sample:[/b]
The red haired man walked through a dry, sandy Cold Desert.He had no problem walking through this area as he was used to basically all types of weather at this point.He's a wanderer after all, He'd rather be able to explore the world, than to be imprisoned by countries rules and traditions.Well of course he could still travel to other countries as well, but so far he's stayed at a foreign country.There was almost no-one there except for the small amount of animals.But what would you expect from the desert, there was only some coyotes, rabbits and antelopes in the distance.It was a pretty area at least in Kaneoi's eyes, he wasn't necessarily happy, but he did like the area, there was peace and quiet, nothing to bother the quietness other than the sound of nature.


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