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1 Farrah's Assembly Line Mk. I on 15/07/17, 02:23 am

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[size=10][center][b]Aim: Pain[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Ranger
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must notch arrow into crossbow and fire
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Farrah releases a normal bolt from her crossbow from 10m to cause harm to an enemy for D tier damage.[/list][/size]

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[size=10][center][b]Aim: Maim[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Ranger
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must load bolt into crossbow and fire
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Farrah loads a bolt laced with paralytics into her crossbow and fires it at an opponent from up to 10m away, temporarily slowing down the movements of an opponent's limb for one turn.[/list][/size]

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[size=10][center][b]Knife: Throw[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Ranger
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must hold and release knife from arm; throw
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage+
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Farah grabs her knife by the blade and throws it at an opponent up to 10m away, causing D tier damage. To reuse this ability, Farrah must retrieve her knife from where it was thrown.[/list][/size]

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[size=10]
[center][b]Knife: Maim[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Ranger
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Farrah must draw dagger from boot sheath; limited skill with knives
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage+
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Farrah slices at a enemy's tendons in melee range, temporarily slowing down the limbs of an opponent for one turn.[/list][/size]

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[size=10][center][b]Aim: Venom[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Ranger
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must load bolt into crossbow and fire
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage+
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Farrah loads a bolt laced with homebrew venom and fires it off at a foe, inflicting venom that slowly harms the user for D-tier damage per post, for two(2) turns.[/list][/size]



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2 Re: Farrah's Assembly Line Mk. I on 24/07/17, 09:52 pm

Fixed to reflect Ranger class~


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3 Re: Farrah's Assembly Line Mk. I on 25/07/17, 03:18 pm

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Aim: Maim - I'm a tad bit iffy on full limb paralysis on a D-Tier ability. I'd say it would need to be at least C-Tier to do so.

Aim: Spread - To fire two bolts at the same time that deal D-Tier damage, this too would need to be a C-Tier ability.

Knife: Maim - Immobilize? Like completely stun them? If so, definitely too much for a D-Tier ability. Generally D-Tier abilities are going to be super minor, and nothing that could be of too much threat, unless scaled.

Aim: Venom - You can have this deal D-Tier damage for two posts, instead of just one! :D


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4 Re: Farrah's Assembly Line Mk. I on 25/07/17, 05:53 pm

Fixed~


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5 Re: Farrah's Assembly Line Mk. I on 25/07/17, 06:09 pm

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Knife: Maim - This isn't really something you *have* to change, but I'd recommend changing "leg" to "limb", just so you're not limited


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6 Re: Farrah's Assembly Line Mk. I on 09/08/17, 05:24 pm

Fixed ~


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7 Re: Farrah's Assembly Line Mk. I on 09/08/17, 06:07 pm

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Knife: Throw - I suppose you should specify on this ability, that you'd need to go and retrieve the knife (if possible), I completely forgot about that.

Knife: Maim - This ability doesn't really need a range now that I think about it, as it's supposed to just be "melee". It's not like the dagger will somehow hit something out of its range/your positioning.

Aim: Venom
- The base D-Tier damage is okay to have, but what exactly does this poison do? Does it inflict damage to people as it runs its course, or perhaps it numbs them or something?


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8 Re: Farrah's Assembly Line Mk. I on 09/08/17, 07:44 pm

Edited~


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9 Re: Farrah's Assembly Line Mk. I on 09/08/17, 08:20 pm

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Alright! So, these are looking good. However, Aim: Venom is still giving me a little bit of trouble. Mainly because as it is now, it would *technically* be dealing C 1/2-Tier damage in total. TBH, I would recommend simply changing the damage to the poison alone. The shot alone doesn't do any damage, but for the next 2 posts, they will take D-Tier damage.


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10 Re: Farrah's Assembly Line Mk. I on 09/08/17, 08:30 pm

All set!


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11 Re: Farrah's Assembly Line Mk. I on 10/08/17, 09:53 am

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Oop, sorry but we'll need to fix Aim: Venom really quick. Instead of just saying that it'll harm the user for two posts, make sure to specify it does D-Tier damage per turn as well. ^.^


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12 Re: Farrah's Assembly Line Mk. I on 12/08/17, 04:36 pm

Bingo!

All set.


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13 Re: Farrah's Assembly Line Mk. I on 12/08/17, 05:42 pm

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Aghh, okay sorry for this taking so long. LOL but, I think we're going to still need to work on Aim: Venom's wording. As it is right now, it kind of sounds like they're taking D-Tier damage over a total of two posts. However, it should sound more like...they are taking D-Tier damage per post, for 2 posts in total.


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14 Re: Farrah's Assembly Line Mk. I on 30/08/17, 07:51 pm

All gucci~


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15 Re: Farrah's Assembly Line Mk. I on 30/08/17, 10:51 pm

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Approved!

Code:
[size=10][center][b]Aim: Pain[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Ranger
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must notch arrow into crossbow and fire
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Farrah releases a normal bolt from her crossbow from 10m to cause harm to an enemy for D tier damage.[/list][/size]

Code:
[size=10][center][b]Aim: Maim[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Ranger
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must load bolt into crossbow and fire
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Farrah loads a bolt laced with paralytics into her crossbow and fires it at an opponent from up to 10m away, temporarily slowing down the movements of an opponent's limb for one turn.[/list][/size]

Code:
[size=10][center][b]Knife: Throw[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Ranger
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must hold and release knife from arm; throw
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage+
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Farah grabs her knife by the blade and throws it at an opponent up to 10m away, causing D tier damage. To reuse this ability, Farrah must retrieve her knife from where it was thrown.[/list][/size]

Code:
[size=10]
[center][b]Knife: Maim[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Ranger
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Farrah must draw dagger from boot sheath; limited skill with knives
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage+
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Farrah slices at a enemy's tendons in melee range, temporarily slowing down the limbs of an opponent for one turn.[/list][/size]

Code:

[size=10][center][b]Aim: Venom[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Ranger
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must load bolt into crossbow and fire
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage+
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Farrah loads a bolt laced with homebrew venom and fires it off at a foe, inflicting venom that slowly harms the user for D-tier damage per post, for two(2) turns.[/list][/size]


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