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1 Revamped Abilities on 17/06/17, 11:56 am

I'm trying to see if it's fine if I rework my abilities into something a little bit more useful. I understand if some of them will require me to retrain them. Some of them I just edited anything from the name to changing them completely >>

Former Ability:

Mamushi: Iridescent Petal
Tier: D
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Short (1m-3m)
Requirements/Drawbacks: Users must grip their sword outstretched with both hands and stand with their knees bent (Mamushi Stance). The user must shift into the Mamushi Stance before use of the attack.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 1 posts
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

    Jingyi shifts into the Mamushi Stance before starting to weave and bob around her opponent while making use of the red tassel/cloth on her sword to distract the enemy from her blade. She then lunges 1m forward and swings her sword in a diagonal slash that deals D-tier damage before jumping back to her original spot.


Former Ability:

Mamushi: Gladiolus
Tier: D
Class: Warrior
Type: Defensive
Range: Close (0m-1m)
Requirements/Drawbacks: User must grip their sword outstretched with both hands and stand with their knees bent (Mamushi Stance). The user muse shift into the Mamushi Stance before the use of the ability and they must have unimpaired vision of the incoming attack.
Scaling: Damage blocked
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 1 post
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

    Jingyi shifts into the Mamushi Stance and raises their sword in front of them, bracing herself for the incoming attack. Any incoming attack is then parried and knocked aside, redirecting any tangible attack 45 degrees away from Jingyi. Mamushi: Gladiolus is only able to block up to D-tier damage damage unless scaled.


Completely Changed from Jumping Snake:

Mamushi: Sandy Day
Tier: D
Class: Warrior
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium (3m)
Requirements/Drawbacks: Users must grip their sword outstretched and tilted to the side with both hands and stand with their knees bent (Mamushi Stance). The user must have enough space to spin around.
Scaling: Duration
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 1 post
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

    Jingyi shifts into the Mamushi Stance, but with their sword held to the side. She then swirls around, and during that spin she drags her sword through the dirt and throws it in front of her. Her sword throws up a cloud of sand in front of her, impairing vision for those 3m in front of her. Unless dispersed by wind, the sand cloud remains for 1 post.


Completely Changed from Striking Cobra:

Mamushi: Windy Day
Tier: D
Class: Warrior
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short (1m-3m)
Requirements: The users must grip their sword outstretched with both hands and stand with their knees bent (Mamushi Stance). In order to preform Mamushi: Windy Day, Jingyi must have enough room to spin.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 1 post
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

    Jingyi shifts into the Mamushi Stance, but with her sword held to the side. She then swirls around, causing a small updrift of wind that clears up gasses and clouds around her, clearing the air. The ability is capable of blowing away up to D-tier clouds/gasses unless scaled.


Former Ability:

Mamushi: Cutting Grass
Tier: C
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short 1m-3m
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must grip their sword outstretched with both hands and stand with their knees bent (Mamushi Stance). A sword must be equipped and she must have unimpaired view of her enemy.
Scaling: Duration
Sustain: 0
Cooldown: 2 post
Cost: 20 Stamina
Description:

    Jingyi shifts into the Mamushi Stance and plants her feet into the ground while raising her sword. She then swings it in a downward arc that targets her foe’s knee, dealing C-tier damage to it. For one post afterward, their knee impairs them from running, dodging, and any general use of their leg for one post.


Completely changed from Close Kick:

Mamushi: Ringing Bones
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Supplementary
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must grip their sword outstretched with both hands and stand with their knees bent (Mamushi Stance). Jingyi must have an unimpaired view of her enemy.
Range: Close
Scaling: Duration
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: 20 stamina
Description:

    Jingyi shifts into the Mamushi Stance, but with her sword held to the side. As an enemy comes into range, she swings the sword, hitting their hand and sending vibrations up their arm. They drop their weapon as they are rendered unable to use the hit limb for two posts.


Former Ability:

Used to be Spinning Tassel

Mamushi: Spinning Tassel
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must know and take the time to shift in the Mamushi Stance and must have wide enough space to spin around.
Range: Close
Scaling: Duration of daze
Sustain: 0
Cool Down:
Cost: 20 stamina
Description:

    The user shifts into the Mamushi Stance (sword held in both hands, their knees bent and their feet held shoulder-width apart) before pivoting on their heel and spinning in a 360-degree circle. They swing their sword, the weapon outstretched while the tassel is a red blur that catches the attention of any eye. Foes are dazed by the red blur for 2 posts and are dealt D-tier damage.


Former Ability:

Used to be Hitoshirenu Kyoda

Knock-out Hit
Tier: C-Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must know from which direction their foe is coming from and need to prepare themselves for the attack.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: 20 stamina
Description:

    The user turns on their heel to face their opponent and gain momentum before taking a step forward, their non-dominant hand swinging out and sucker punching their foe, dealing D-Tier damage. The punch is quickly followed by a horizontal slash from the user's sword, dealing D-Tier damage. Together the two attacks deal C-tier damage.


Former Ability:

Used to be Magoi Iidrab

Magoi Strike
Tier: B
Class: Warriors
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must be equipped with a weapon that has a blade (such as a spear or a sword); the user must take a deep breath, take a stance and concentrate on channeling their magoi.
Scaling: Duration
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Magoi
Description:

    Jingyi takes a stance as she takes a deep breath, channeling her Magoi into her weapon. The Magoi has a golden shimmer to it as it covers the blade of her weapon, and for a single post her attacks with the blade deal A-tier damage due to the B-tier Magoi Manipulation.


Former Ability:

Used to be Sabin Balawk

Spinning Block
Tier: B
Class: Warriors
Type: Defensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Jingyi must be equipped with a blade and she must have unimpaired view of an incoming attack. She must brace herself and dig her heels down in preparation for the attack.
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

    Jingyi digs her heels into the ground and moves her sword in front of her as an attack approaches. She spins her weapon, catching the incoming attack and knocking it 90 degrees away, leaving her enemy open for attack. This move can parry up to B-tier damage.


Former Ability:

Used to be Arbe Najah

Jingyi Style… Exploding Implosion!
Tier: B
Class: Warriors
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Jingyi must shift into the Jingyi Stance (feet shoulder-width apart, her hand on her sword’s hilt (which is sheathed)) and she must have the trait: Perfect Balance.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 Stamina
Description:

    Jingyi shifts into her stance as an enemy approaches her. Once within range, she performs a preemptive strike, drawing her sword and striking them in a blow that deals D-tier damage. She then quickly flips once, her weapon outstretched and following her motion, the following strike dealing D-tier damage. Jingyi then lands on her feet and steps forwards, turning on her heel and spinning around, dealing D-tier damage to anything within her range. After the spin, Jingyi takes a step back and digs her heels into the ground before lunging forwards.She swings her weapon upward in a Skyward Strike, dealing D-tier damage. The strikes altogether deal B-tier damage. Afterward, Jingyi either sheaths her sword or keeps it drawn.



Former Ability:

Used to be Fury of Fists

Jingyi Style… Whirlwind Fury!
Tier: B
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive/Supportive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Jingyi must have Perfect Balance and she must be standing in the Jingyi Style (feet shoulder-width apart, her hand on the sword’s hilt (which is sheathed)).
Scaling: Damage
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3 posts
Cost: 30 stamina
Description:

    Jingyi stands in the Jingyi Stance with her feet planted into the ground, her hand on the hilt of her sword that’s sheathed. Once the enemy comes within range she draws the sword and lunges forwards, swinging the blade and dealing them D-tier damage. She then steps onto her next leg, pivoting her body and slashing once more, dealing an additional D-tier damage. After the strike, she switches to her next foot, pivoting her body again and swinging out her free leg, kicking her opponent’s weapon out of his hands and sending it 2 meters away. Finally, she does the pivote motions again and kicks once more, kicking her foe away from her (the kick does no damage). The attacks are rapid-fire, with the ability forcing her foe to retrieve their weapon and dealing them C-tier damage.



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2 Re: Revamped Abilities on 17/06/17, 04:03 pm

Mamushi: Iridescent Petal - Approved. Since you only changed the name, there is no reason to train it again.
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[center][b]Mamushi: Iridescent Petal[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short (1m-3m)
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Users must grip their sword outstretched with both hands and stand with their knees bent (Mamushi Stance). The user must shift into the Mamushi Stance before use of the attack.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Jingyi shifts into the Mamushi Stance before starting to weave and bob around her opponent while making use of the red tassel/cloth on her sword to distract the enemy from her blade. She then lunges 1m forward and swings her sword in a diagonal slash that deals D-tier damage before jumping back to her original spot.[/list]


Mamushi: Gladiolus - Approved. You will need to train this again, but it's only 250 words so it shouldn't be too much ^V^.
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[center][b]Mamushi: Gladiolus[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close (0m-1m)
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User must grip their sword outstretched with both hands and stand with their knees bent (Mamushi Stance). The user must shift into the Mamushi Stance before the use of the ability and they must have an unimpaired vision of the incoming attack.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage blocked
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Jingyi shifts into the Mamushi Stance and raises their sword in front of them, bracing herself for the incoming attack. Any incoming attack is then parried and knocked aside, redirecting any tangible attack 45 degrees away from Jingyi. Mamushi: Gladiolus is only able to block up to D-tier damage unless scaled.[/list]


Mamushi: Sandy Day - Approved. Clearly, you'll need to train it again. Have fun~
Code:
[center][b]Mamushi: Sandy Day[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium (3m)
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Users must grip their sword outstretched and tilted to the side with both hands and stand with their knees bent (Mamushi Stance). The user must have enough space to spin around.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Jingyi shifts into the Mamushi Stance, but with their sword held to the side. She then swirls around, and during that spin, she drags her sword through the dirt and throws it in front of her. Her sword throws up a cloud of sand in front of her, impairing vision for those 3m in front of her. Unless dispersed by wind, the sand cloud remains for 1 post.[/list]


Mashumi: Windy Days - If you're in a cloud of dust or gasses, you probably can't see your enemy. Anyway, I'm pretty sure the target is not the enemy. For these reasons, I recommend you take out that last line in your requirements. You need to specify the area of effect.

Edit: I talked to a couple of the staff members, and they both agreed there should be a limit to how thick of clouds you can blow away. As a D-Tier ability, I don't expect it to be able to blow an extremely thick cloud of gasses away.

Mamushi: Cutting Grass - Approved. You'll need to train it or buy a voucher.
Code:
[center][b]Mamushi: Cutting Grass[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Short 1m-3m
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must grip their sword outstretched with both hands and stand with their knees bent (Mamushi Stance). A sword must be equipped and she must have an unimpaired view of her enemy.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Jingyi shifts into the Mamushi Stance and plants her feet into the ground while raising her sword. She then swings it in a downward arc that targets her foe’s knee, dealing D-tier damage to it. For one post afterward, their knee impairs them from running, dodging, and any general use of their leg for one post.[/list]


Mamushi: Ringing Bones - Approved. Enjoy training!
Code:
[center][b]Mamushi: Ringing Bones[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must grip their sword outstretched with both hands and stand with their knees bent (Mamushi Stance). Jingyi must have an unimpaired view of her enemy.
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Jingyi shifts into the Mamushi Stance, but with her sword held to the side. As an enemy comes into range, she swings the sword, hitting their hand and sending vibrations up their arm. They drop their weapon as they are rendered unable to use the hit limb for two posts.[/list]




I'll grade half and half. Once you get Mashumi: Windy Days fixed, I'll move on to your other six abilities ^^


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3 Re: Revamped Abilities on 17/06/17, 06:39 pm

I'm sorry x.x
I completely forgot to change the requirement for Mamushi: Windy Day. Hopefully it's fixed now. Thank you!


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4 Re: Revamped Abilities on 18/06/17, 06:14 pm

Mashumi: Windy Days - Do you mind being more specific about how much the gale increases when scaled?

Mashumi: Cutting Grass - I'm not sure how D-Tier force would be able to debilitate someone like this. You would probably be able to argue for C-Tier damage.


Mashumi: Ringing Bones - Approved. Have fun training~
Code:
[center][b]Mamushi: Ringing Bones[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must grip their sword outstretched with both hands and stand with their knees bent (Mamushi Stance). Jingyi must have an unimpaired view of her enemy.
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Jingyi shifts into the Mamushi Stance, but with her sword held to the side. As an enemy comes into range, she swings the sword, hitting their hand and sending vibrations up their arm. They drop their weapon as they are rendered unable to use the hit limb for two posts.[/list]


Mashumi: Spinning Tassel - You can make the duration 2 posts.


Knock-out Hit - Approved! You seem to have only changed the name so you don't need to train it again ^^.
Code:
[center][b]Knock-out Hit[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must know from which direction their foe is coming from and need to prepare themselves for the attack.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user turns on their heel to face their opponent and gain momentum before taking a step forward, their non-dominant hand swinging out and sucker punching their foe, dealing D-Tier damage. The punch is quickly followed by a horizontal slash from the user's sword, dealing D-Tier damage. Together the two attacks deal C-tier damage.[/list]


Magoi Strike - Approved. I don't see much of a reason to train it again since you only added a small and fairly unimportant detail.
Code:
[center][b]Magoi Strike[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Warriors
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Self
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must be equipped with a weapon that has a blade (such as a spear or a sword); the user must take a deep breath, take a stance and concentrate on channeling their magoi.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Jingyi takes a stance as she takes a deep breath, channeling her Magoi into her weapon. The Magoi has a golden shimmer to it as it covers the blade of her weapon, and for a single post her attacks with the blade deal A-tier damage due to the B-tier Magoi Manipulation.[/list]


Spinning Block - Approved. You did change the requirements of your ability in a way besides just rewording it, so you will need to train it again.
Code:
[center][b]Spinning Block[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Warriors
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Jingyi must be equipped with a blade and she must have an unimpaired view of an incoming attack. She must brace herself and dig her heels down in preparation for the attack.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Jingyi digs her heels into the ground and moves her sword in front of her as an attack approaches. She spins her weapon, catching the incoming attack and knocking it 90 degrees away, leaving her enemy open for attack. This move can parry up to B-tier damage.[/list]


Jingyi Style... Exploding Implosion! - Approved. Have fun training!
Code:
[center][b]Jingyi Style… Exploding Implosion![/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Warriors
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Jingyi must shift into the Jingyi Stance (feet shoulder-width apart, her hand on her sword’s hilt (which is sheathed)) and she must have the trait: Perfect Balance.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Jingyi shifts into her stance as an enemy approaches her. Once within range, she performs a preemptive strike, drawing her sword and striking them in a blow that deals D-tier damage. She then quickly flips once, her weapon outstretched and following her motion, the following strike dealing D-tier damage. Jingyi then lands on her feet and steps forwards, turning on her heel and spinning around, dealing D-tier damage to anything within her range. After the spin, Jingyi takes a step back and digs her heels into the ground before lunging forwards.She swings her weapon upward in a Skyward Strike, dealing D-tier damage. The strikes altogether deal B-tier damage. Afterward, Jingyi either sheaths her sword or keeps it drawn.[/list]


Jingyi Style… Whirlwind Fury! - Approved. You'll need to retrain it, of course.
Code:
[center][b]Jingyi Style… Whirlwind Fury![/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Jingyi must have Perfect Balance and she must be standing in the Jingyi Style (feet shoulder-width apart, her hand on the sword’s hilt (which is sheathed)).
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Jingyi stands in the Jingyi Stance with her feet planted into the ground, her hand on the hilt of her sword that’s sheathed. Once the enemy comes within range she draws the sword and lunges forwards, swinging the blade and dealing them D-tier damage. She then steps onto her next leg, pivoting her body and slashing once more, dealing an additional D-tier damage. After the strike, she switches to her next foot, pivoting her body again and swinging out her free leg, kicking her opponent’s weapon out of his hands and sending it 2 meters away. Finally, she does the pivot motions again and kicks once more, kicking her foe away from her (the kick does no damage). The attacks are rapid-fire, with the ability forcing her foe to retrieve their weapon and dealing them C-tier damage.[/list]


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5 Re: Revamped Abilities on 18/06/17, 06:29 pm

Fixed?


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6 Re: Revamped Abilities on 19/06/17, 10:40 am

Mashumi: Windy Day - Keep in mind, in combat, this ability's effect can probably travel a few inches out from the length of the weapon. You could probably just put damage for the scaling. Every scaling allows this ability to blow away gasses/cloud cast by abilities of one more tier.


Mashumi: Cutting Grass - Approved.
Code:
[center][b]Mamushi: Cutting Grass[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Short 1m-3m
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must grip their sword outstretched with both hands and stand with their knees bent (Mamushi Stance). A sword must be equipped and she must have an unimpaired view of her enemy.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Jingyi shifts into the Mamushi Stance and plants her feet into the ground while raising her sword. She then swings it in a downward arc that targets her foe’s knee, dealing C-tier damage to it. For one post afterward, their knee impairs them from running, dodging, and any general use of their leg for one post.[/list]


Mashumi: Spinning Tassel - Approved.
Code:
[center][b]Mamushi: Spinning Tassel[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must know and take the time to shift in the Mamushi Stance and must have wide enough space to spin around.
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration of daze
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b]
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
The user shifts into the Mamushi Stance (sword held in both hands, their knees bent and their feet held shoulder-width apart) before pivoting on their heel and spinning in a 360-degree circle. They swing their sword, the weapon outstretched while the tassel is a red blur that catches the attention of any eye. Foes are dazed by the red blur for 2 posts and are dealt D-tier damage.[/list]


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7 Re: Revamped Abilities on 19/06/17, 04:29 pm

Sorry, Ariel x.x It should be fine now.
Do I have to retrain Spinning Tassel and Cutting Grass?


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8 Re: Revamped Abilities on 19/06/17, 04:55 pm

You'll need to train Spinning Tassel and Cutting Grass, yes. You'll also need to train Windy Day.

approved
Code:
[center][b]Mamushi: Windy Day[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Short (1m-3m)
[b]Requirements:[/b] The users must grip their sword outstretched with both hands and stand with their knees bent (Mamushi Stance). In order to preform [b]Mamushi: Windy Day[/b], Jingyi must have enough room to spin.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Jingyi shifts into the Mamushi Stance, but with her sword held to the side. She then swirls around, causing a small updrift of wind that clears up gasses and clouds around her, clearing the air. The ability is capable of blowing away up to D-tier clouds/gasses unless scaled.[/list]


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9 Re: Revamped Abilities on 11/07/17, 02:46 pm

http://magiworld.forumotion.com/t2277p250-ability-vouchers#47530

These three are for the only three B-tier abilities I have to retrain: Spinning Block, Jingyi Style... Exploding Implosion!, and Jingyi Style... Whirlwind Fury!


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10 Re: Revamped Abilities on 11/07/17, 02:58 pm

Rima Fahim

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β-Tier
β-Tier
Approved!

Code:
[center][b]Spinning Block[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Warriors
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Jingyi must be equipped with a blade and she must have an unimpaired view of an incoming attack. She must brace herself and dig her heels down in preparation for the attack.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
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Jingyi digs her heels into the ground and moves her sword in front of her as an attack approaches. She spins her weapon, catching the incoming attack and knocking it 90 degrees away, leaving her enemy open for attack. This move can parry up to B-tier damage.[/list]

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[center][b]Jingyi Style… Exploding Implosion![/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Warriors
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Jingyi must shift into the Jingyi Stance (feet shoulder-width apart, her hand on her sword’s hilt (which is sheathed)) and she must have the trait: Perfect Balance.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
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Jingyi shifts into her stance as an enemy approaches her. Once within range, she performs a preemptive strike, drawing her sword and striking them in a blow that deals D-tier damage. She then quickly flips once, her weapon outstretched and following her motion, the following strike dealing D-tier damage. Jingyi then lands on her feet and steps forwards, turning on her heel and spinning around, dealing D-tier damage to anything within her range. After the spin, Jingyi takes a step back and digs her heels into the ground before lunging forwards.She swings her weapon upward in a Skyward Strike, dealing D-tier damage. The strikes altogether deal B-tier damage. Afterward, Jingyi either sheaths her sword or keeps it drawn.[/list]

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[center][b]Jingyi Style… Whirlwind Fury![/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] B
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Jingyi must have Perfect Balance and she must be standing in the Jingyi Style (feet shoulder-width apart, her hand on the sword’s hilt (which is sheathed)).
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 3 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 30 stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
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Jingyi stands in the Jingyi Stance with her feet planted into the ground, her hand on the hilt of her sword that’s sheathed. Once the enemy comes within range she draws the sword and lunges forwards, swinging the blade and dealing them D-tier damage. She then steps onto her next leg, pivoting her body and slashing once more, dealing an additional D-tier damage. After the strike, she switches to her next foot, pivoting her body again and swinging out her free leg, kicking her opponent’s weapon out of his hands and sending it 2 meters away. Finally, she does the pivot motions again and kicks once more, kicking her foe away from her (the kick does no damage). The attacks are rapid-fire, with the ability forcing her foe to retrieve their weapon and dealing them C-tier damage.[/list]


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11 Re: Revamped Abilities on 14/07/17, 09:26 pm

Using three vouchers for the remaining three C-tiers I need to train.

Mamushi: Cutting Grass
Mamushi: Ringing Bones
Mamushi: Spinning Tassel


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12 Re: Revamped Abilities on 15/07/17, 12:53 am

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Approved!

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[center][b]Mamushi: Cutting Grass[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Short 1m-3m
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must grip their sword outstretched with both hands and stand with their knees bent (Mamushi Stance). A sword must be equipped and she must have an unimpaired view of her enemy.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 2 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
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Jingyi shifts into the Mamushi Stance and plants her feet into the ground while raising her sword. She then swings it in a downward arc that targets her foe’s knee, dealing C-tier damage to it. For one post afterward, their knee impairs them from running, dodging, and any general use of their leg for one post.[/list]

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[center][b]Mamushi: Ringing Bones[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must grip their sword outstretched with both hands and stand with their knees bent (Mamushi Stance). Jingyi must have an unimpaired view of her enemy.
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
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Jingyi shifts into the Mamushi Stance, but with her sword held to the side. As an enemy comes into range, she swings the sword, hitting their hand and sending vibrations up their arm. They drop their weapon as they are rendered unable to use the hit limb for two posts.[/list]

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[center][b]Mamushi: Spinning Tassel[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C-Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive/Supplementary
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The user must know and take the time to shift in the Mamushi Stance and must have wide enough space to spin around.
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration of daze
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b]
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
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The user shifts into the Mamushi Stance (sword held in both hands, their knees bent and their feet held shoulder-width apart) before pivoting on their heel and spinning in a 360-degree circle. They swing their sword, the weapon outstretched while the tassel is a red blur that catches the attention of any eye. Foes are dazed by the red blur for 2 posts and are dealt D-tier damage.[/list]


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13 Re: Revamped Abilities on 15/07/17, 11:18 am

Mamushi: Gladiolus, Sandy Day, and Windy Day training completed! That should be the last of the abilities!


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14 Re: Revamped Abilities on 15/07/17, 02:23 pm

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[center][b]Mamushi: Gladiolus[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close (0m-1m)
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] User must grip their sword outstretched with both hands and stand with their knees bent (Mamushi Stance). The user must shift into the Mamushi Stance before the use of the ability and they must have an unimpaired vision of the incoming attack.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage blocked
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
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Jingyi shifts into the Mamushi Stance and raises their sword in front of them, bracing herself for the incoming attack. Any incoming attack is then parried and knocked aside, redirecting any tangible attack 45 degrees away from Jingyi. Mamushi: Gladiolus is only able to block up to D-tier damage unless scaled.[/list]

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[center][b]Mamushi: Sandy Day[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium (3m)
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Users must grip their sword outstretched and tilted to the side with both hands and stand with their knees bent (Mamushi Stance). The user must have enough space to spin around.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Duration
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
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Jingyi shifts into the Mamushi Stance, but with their sword held to the side. She then swirls around, and during that spin, she drags her sword through the dirt and throws it in front of her. Her sword throws up a cloud of sand in front of her, impairing vision for those 3m in front of her. Unless dispersed by wind, the sand cloud remains for 1 post.[/list]

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[center][b]Mamushi: Windy Day[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Short (1m-3m)
[b]Requirements:[/b] The users must grip their sword outstretched with both hands and stand with their knees bent (Mamushi Stance). In order to preform [b]Mamushi: Windy Day[/b], Jingyi must have enough room to spin.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cooldown:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
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Jingyi shifts into the Mamushi Stance, but with her sword held to the side. She then swirls around, causing a small updrift of wind that clears up gasses and clouds around her, clearing the air. The ability is capable of blowing away up to D-tier clouds/gasses unless scaled.[/list]


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