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1 Rami Naeem Abilities on 04/06/17, 03:45 am

ABILITIES


Dance of Isis
Tier: C
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Rami must have his Singular Chakram when using this ability.
Scaling: Hits
Sustain: 2
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: 20 Stamina
Description:

    Taking a step back Rami performs a two hit combo with his chakram. The first hit is a back slash in which he turns his body completely around to strike the target for D-Tier damage, the second hit is an upward slash where he twirls his body in the opposite direction swinging his arm up in a diagonal fashion dealing D-tier damage.


Serquet’s Pleasure
Tier: D Tier
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range:Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Singluar Chakram must be equipped.
Scaling: Range
Sustain: 2
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 stamina
Description:

    Rami crouches and slightly twists his waist a bit as he prepares to throw his chakram as if it were a frisbee dealing D-tier damage. The chakram itself can travel up to 5m. However since this ability disarms him, he will have to retrieve his Chakram everytime its thrown..


Block
Tier:D
Class: Warrior
Type: Defensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Any weapon can be used
Scaling:Damage
Sustain:2
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

    A simple move that allows Rami to be able to block melee weapon damage up to D-tier. However since he possesses a Chakram that has a hollow middle projectile weapons are a lot harder to block and he is better off dodging them all together.


Anubis' Strike
Tier: D
Class: Warrior
Type: Offensive
Range:Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: A Singluar Chakram is required for this basic move.
Scaling:Hits
Sustain:-
Cool Down: 1 post
Cost: 10 stamina
Description:

    Rami lunges forward performing a downward slash ability toward his opponent with his Chakram. He holds the Chakram behind his back while focusing his sights on the opponent and focuses the forward momentum in his arm to unleash the strike of Anubis through his chakram into the target dealing D-tier damage.


Dodge
Tier: D
Class: Warrior
Type: Range
Range:Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: A Singluar Chakram is required for this basic stance holding the weapon in the front with a single hand.
Scaling:Evasion
Sustain:-
Cool Down: 1 posts
Cost: 10 Stamina
Description:

    By tucking, diving and/or side stepping by 3m at the most, Rami is able to slightly or completely evade some attacks dealt toward him.



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2 Re: Rami Naeem Abilities on 04/06/17, 10:58 pm

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  • Dance of Isis - In your scaling, you misspelled effect. The cost only needs to be 20, not 25. (This applies to every C-TIer ability.) Now then, even though your Chakram has a red string wrapped around it, you can’t really make use of it much. Warrior’s typically don’t have many long-medium ranged abilities. The way you’re using the string on your weapon is similar to how an assassin would use their kind of weapons.

  • Serquet’s Pleasure - In the requirements/drawbacks, you don’t have to nerf yourself so hard. The “This ability cannot be used for a duration of 2 posts after Dance of Isis was used.” is completely unnecessary. Instead, I would make the drawback some kind of attack wind-up or something. Now then, I’m not entirely sure what this ability is supposed to be doing? Is this some form of stance change? Or is this an attack that hits in front of you+behind you. If that’s the case, I don’t really see how hula hooping the chakram around your arm will accomplish that.

  • Ma’ats Protection - This one is a no-go. Warrior’s don’t get access to any form of magoi-manipulation until B-Tier.

  • Stance of Anubis - Alright, this one seems to actually be some kind of stance ability. While a stance-changing ability seems like it might be useful, I personally wouldn’t recommend making one. I mainly say this because you can make any normal ability have a particular “stance” already. For example, in the anime we see Alibaba’s Balbadd sword stance. On our site you wouldn’t need an ability to do that. You could make an ability that describes your character taking up a specific stance, then lashing out with a stylized attack. If that makes any sense.

  • Stance of Ra - The above applies to this as well.

    As for your traits, when I said to combine them earlier, I meant to combine the traits in a seperate post. XD I didn’t think you meant combining them with your abilities post. Sorry for the mix-up.


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3 Re: Rami Naeem Abilities on 05/06/17, 10:36 pm

I fixed the abilities and changed them around a bit



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4 Re: Rami Naeem Abilities on 07/06/17, 02:05 am

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  • General - Remember that D-Tier abilities only require a 1 post cooldown. Also, with requirements/drawbacks I would suggest putting what kind of motion your character would go through before doing this. Such as, some kind of attack wind-up or action. Something like that!

  • Dance of Isis - All you need to do is add the damage portion for these and you should be good to go. Such as; “Taking a step back Rami performs a two hit combo with his chakram. The first hit is a backslash in which he turns his body completely around to strike the target for D-Tier damage, the second hit is an upward slash where he twirls his body in the opposite direction swinging his arm up in a diagonal fashion, dealing D-Tier damage once again.

  • Serquet’s Pleasure - Same goes for this ability, add the damage portion like I did. Also, you need to state how far you can throw your chakram. I’d suggest 5m at this rank, then perhaps you could change the scaling to range. (Which would allow you to throw it even further.) I only suggest this, because hits doesn’t make too much sense, since you’re throwing a single chakram. ; )

  • Block - Please write down on this, that this ability will only be able to block up to D-Tier basic strikes with these weapons. (btw, you misspelled spears). Oh! Also, the last bit where you say “he is better off dodging them all together” isn’t really needed, but I’m not going to make you remove it. Just wanted to throw that out there. ^^ Oh, and the proper scaling for this would be damage, as it increases the tier of attack you can withstand.

  • Anubis’ Strike - Add the damage portion, like we talked about on your earlier abilities.  

  • Dodge - Add a range to this dodge, I think 3m for a D-Tier dodge is fair enough. Also, evasion isn’t really a proper scaling for something like this. I would highly suggest range, as you can dodge much further than usual.


Side Note : When I said you need to post your traits in a different post, I meant like, another thread.


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5 Re: Rami Naeem Abilities on 07/06/17, 07:12 pm

Alright made those corrections as well. Just like you told me to.

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6 Re: Rami Naeem Abilities on 07/06/17, 07:20 pm

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Approved.

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[center][b]Dance of Isis[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Rami must have his Singular Chakram when using this ability.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b] 2
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Taking a step back Rami performs a two hit combo with his chakram. The first hit is a back slash in which he turns his body completely around to strike the target for D-Tier damage, the second hit is an upward slash where he twirls his body in the opposite direction swinging his arm up in a diagonal fashion dealing D-tier damage.[/list]

[center][b]Serquet’s Pleasure[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D Tier
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b]Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Singluar Chakram must be equipped.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Range
[b]Sustain:[/b] 2
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Rami crouches and slightly twists his waist a bit as he prepares to throw his chakram as if it were a frisbee dealing D-tier damage. The chakram itself can travel up to 5m. However since this ability disarms him, he will have to retrieve his Chakram everytime its thrown..[/list]

[center][b]Block[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b]D
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Any weapon can be used
[b]Scaling:[/b]Damage
[b]Sustain:[/b]2
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
A simple move that allows Rami to be able to block melee weapon damage up to D-tier. However since he possesses a Chakram that has a hollow middle projectile weapons are a lot harder to block and he is better off dodging them all together.[/list]

[center][b]Anubis' Strike[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b]Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] A Singluar Chakram is required for this basic move.
[b]Scaling:[/b]Hits
[b]Sustain:[/b]-
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Rami lunges forward performing a downward slash ability toward his opponent with his Chakram. He holds the Chakram behind his back while focusing his sights on the opponent and focuses the forward momentum in his arm to unleash the strike of Anubis through his chakram into the target dealing D-tier damage.[/list]

[center][b]Dodge[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Warrior
[b]Type:[/b] Range
[b]Range:[/b]Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] A Singluar Chakram is required for this basic stance holding the weapon in the front with a single hand.
[b]Scaling:[/b]Evasion
[b]Sustain:[/b]-
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Stamina
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
By tucking, diving and/or side stepping by 3m at the most, Rami is able to slightly or completely evade some attacks dealt toward him.[/list]


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