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1 Gold Experience on 30/04/17, 04:31 pm

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The Magic Weapon:

Fool's Gold:
Name: Fool's Gold
Tier: A
Type: Bastard Sword
Magic Type: Lightning
Material: Bronze-Gold Alloy
Appearance: A simple, two-handed, bastard sword of mysterious origin. The material seems to be a bronze-gold alloy, but there's not telling for certain. There are intricate markings running along the cross-guard and half the blade. A magic circle graces the cross-guard, blending in with the intricate markings. The total length of the sword is 130 cm, the blade taking up 90 cm. The cross-guard is 40 cm in length.
Function:

  • Golden Cloud - By feeding magoi into the sword, the blade of the sword will disperse into a cloud of gold particles 10m around the user. Due to the conductive properties of gold, an alternating magnetic field can induce a current in it, which generates its own field through the use of lightning magic.

    The cloud may be manipulated into any inanimate object of the users choosing. Such as a wall or reshaping the blade into another form. The objects size may not exceed 2.5m on all sides. The object may be placed within or launched away 10m around the user or on the hilt. It may create up to eight smaller objects that size may not exceed 65 cm each and they may only deal D-Tier damage. 10 magoi to activate | 5 to sustain


Shackles of Wealth
Tier: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The magic function Gold Cloud must be active. Using this ability stops Fool's Gold from using other abilities or forming unrelated objects.
Scaling: For every 10 magoi added to the total cost, the number of shackles doubles.
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 4 posts
Cost: 20 | 20 magoi
Description:

    While Gold Cloud is in use, anybody walking within the cloud is showered in the gold particles. Feeding more magoi into Fool's Gold will allow the user to create and attach a golden shackle (up to 2.5 meters in diameter) on a target which can't be removed by normal means. The shackle is able to be freely moved by the user (A-tier strength) within the Gold Cloud, but if the shackle leaves the cloud, the gold returns to the cloud. The shackle is destroyed after being dealt A-tier damage.





Vanity Insanity
Tier: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The magic function Gold Cloud must be active.
Scaling: For every 10 magoi added to the total cost, the range of the cloud is increased by 5 meters.
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 4 posts
Cost: 20 | 20 magoi
Description:

    While Gold Cloud is in use, the user is able to feed more magoi into Fool's Gold in order to create a special electrical current. Everyone within the cloud (other than the user) is able to be affected by the electrical current which reverses an affected individual's sense of direction/movement for 4 posts.





Pumping Veins
Tier: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: The magic function Gold Cloud must NOT be active. Using this ability stops Fool's Gold from using other abilities or forming unrelated objects. Fool's Gold must be stabbed into the ground.
Scaling: For every 10 magoi added to the total cost, the number of statues created doubles.
Sustain: -
Cool Down: 4 posts
Cost: 20 | 20 magoi
Description:

    While Gold Cloud is NOT in use, the user is able feed magoi into the sword and stab Fool's Gold into the ground, release the blade into the ground, and keep the hilt in order to move around freely. The blade will move around a 40 meter area and quickly build up by attracting underground metal objects. The post after releasing the blade into the ground, the user must point the hilt at a spot on the ground up to 40 meters from where the blade was released. That spot is here the built up blade will burst from the ground in the form of a 2.5 meter wide, 3 meter tall, cone-like statue of feminine-legs wearing high heels. The force of the statue bursting from the ground is able to deal A-tier blunt damage (minor piercing damage because of the heels). Using scaling, the number of statues increases by either placing the statues horizontally (next to each other) and/or vertically (on top of each other). After the statue(s) release from the ground, the blade will quickly return to the hilt.


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[center][b]Pumping Veins[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The magic function [i]Gold Cloud[/i] must NOT be active. Using this ability stops Fool's Gold from using other abilities or forming unrelated objects. Fool's Gold must be stabbed into the ground.
[b]Scaling:[/b] For every 10 magoi added to the total cost, the number of statues created doubles.
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 20 magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
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While Gold Cloud is NOT in use, the user is able feed magoi into the sword and stab Fool's Gold into the ground, release the blade into the ground, and keep the hilt in order to move around freely. The blade will move around a 40 meter area and quickly build up by attracting underground metal objects. The post after releasing the blade into the ground, the user must point the hilt at a spot on the ground up to 40 meters from where the blade was released. That spot is here the built up blade will burst from the ground in the form of a 2.5 meter wide, 3 meter tall, cone-like[u] [url=https://www.pinterest.com/pin/512636370060923244/]statue[/url] [/u]of feminine-legs wearing high heels. The force of the statue bursting from the ground is able to deal A-tier blunt damage (minor piercing damage because of the heels). Using scaling, the number of statues increases by either placing the statues horizontally (next to each other) and/or vertically (on top of each other). After the statue(s) release from the ground, the blade will quickly return to the hilt.[/list]



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2 Re: Gold Experience on 30/04/17, 05:45 pm

What's the purpose of the shackle? The way this ability is written, it just seems like you're making a shackle on someone and then are able to manipulate the shackle. I don't see much purpose other than constriction unless there was another that you were intending. I'm only asking because of the previous version of this ability.


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3 Re: Gold Experience on 30/04/17, 06:18 pm

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By "control" I mean "move". I edited it a tiny bit to try and clear up the misunderstanding~

I also added another ability. I was inspired by a fatherly member of the Elite Four.


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4 Re: Gold Experience on 30/04/17, 08:34 pm

They seem fine to me. : ' )

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[center][b]Shackles of Wealth[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The magic function [i]Gold Cloud[/i] must be active. Using this ability stops Fool's Gold from using other abilities or forming unrelated objects.
[b]Scaling:[/b] For every 10 magoi added to the total cost, the number of shackles doubles.
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 20 magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
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While Gold Cloud is in use, anybody walking within the cloud is showered in the gold particles. Feeding more magoi into Fool's Gold will allow the user to create and attach a golden shackle (up to 2.5 meters in diameter) on a target which can't be removed by normal means. The shackle is able to be freely moved by the user (A-tier strength) within the Gold Cloud, but if the shackle leaves the cloud, the gold returns to the cloud. The shackle is destroyed after being dealt A-tier damage.[/list]

[center][b]Vanity Insanity[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The magic function [i]Gold Cloud[/i] must be active.
[b]Scaling:[/b] For every 10 magoi added to the total cost, the range of the cloud is increased by 5 meters.
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 20 magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
While Gold Cloud is in use, the user is able to feed more magoi into Fool's Gold in order to create a special electrical current. Everyone within the cloud (other than the user) is able to be affected by the electrical current which reverses an affected individual's sense of direction/movement for 4 posts.[/list]


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5 Re: Gold Experience on 03/05/17, 05:14 pm

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6 Re: Gold Experience on 03/05/17, 06:04 pm

Approved. o vo

Add to vault!


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7 Re: Gold Experience on 08/05/17, 12:33 am

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8 Re: Gold Experience on 08/05/17, 01:00 am

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Approved, my dude.


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9 Re: Gold Experience on 08/05/17, 07:26 pm

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Since this hasn't been moved yet, I decided to add another ability, Pumping Veins. I didn't want to take up space by posting yet another thread with an "interesting" title~


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10 Re: Gold Experience on 14/05/17, 10:40 pm

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Alright, sorry it took a while to get to this. We were discussing the minor piercing damage on the heels, but we decided it was fine. LOL Anywho, approved for training my dude!

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[center][b]Pumping Veins[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] A
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] The magic function [i]Gold Cloud[/i] must NOT be active. Using this ability stops Fool's Gold from using other abilities or forming unrelated objects. Fool's Gold must be stabbed into the ground.
[b]Scaling:[/b] For every 10 magoi added to the total cost, the number of statues created doubles.
[b]Sustain:[/b] -
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 4 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 20 magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
While Gold Cloud is NOT in use, the user is able feed magoi into the sword and stab Fool's Gold into the ground, release the blade into the ground, and keep the hilt in order to move around freely. The blade will move around a 40 meter area and quickly build up by attracting underground metal objects. The post after releasing the blade into the ground, the user must point the hilt at a spot on the ground up to 40 meters from where the blade was released. That spot is here the built up blade will burst from the ground in the form of a 2.5 meter wide, 3 meter tall, cone-like[u] [url=https://www.pinterest.com/pin/512636370060923244/]statue[/url] [/u]of feminine-legs wearing high heels. The force of the statue bursting from the ground is able to deal A-tier blunt damage (minor piercing damage because of the heels). Using scaling, the number of statues increases by either placing the statues horizontally (next to each other) and/or vertically (on top of each other). After the statue(s) release from the ground, the blade will quickly return to the hilt.[/list]


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11 Re: Gold Experience on 22/05/17, 11:34 am

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Pumping Veins; (A-tier ability from older system turned into training voucher below (I've got 4 of these (3 after this post)))

http://magiworld.forumotion.com/t6747-magic-tool-abilities-resubmit#36991


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12 Re: Gold Experience on 22/05/17, 04:32 pm

Approved! Add to vault!


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