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D-Tier:

Heat Mirage
Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium (5m x 5m Barrier/ 10m from caster)
Requirements/Drawbacks: Lance has to point the staff in the direction of where he is placing the wall.
Scaling: The wall will become bigger by 5m for every 10 Magoi spent.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Magoi
Description: The caster creates a 5m x 5m heat wall within ten meters of the caster. Magoi pours from their staff to the wall. The heat from within the wall creates a mild mirage that obscures vision for the opponent or opponents on the opposite side of the wall.

Control Flames
Tier: D
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium (10 Meters)
Requirements/Drawbacks: Lance has to point his staff at the target he is shooting at. Can only shoot one at a time if he changes targets.
Scaling: 1 more flames will be made for every 10 Magoi spent
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1 Post
Cost: 10 Magoi
Description: Lance creates 1 flames of heat, 1 meter large, that forms and shoots at targets with the point of his staff. The flame can inflict D-tier damage and inflict first-degree burns.


C-Tier:

Flame Slice
Tier: C
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Long (20 meters)
Requirements/Drawbacks: Lance has to slice his staff through the air, horizontally or vertically, in order to shoot the Flame Slice.
Scaling: Adds an additional tier of damage per 10 magoi spent.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 Posts
Cost: 20 Magoi
Description: By slicing his staff in the air, Lance creates a crescent of flames 10 meters long and 1 meter wide that forms and shoots in a direction of his choosing, capable of inflicting C-tier damage and second-degree burns to any opponent it touches.

Fire Ball
Tier: C
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Long (20 meters)
Requirements/Drawbacks: Lance has to point his staff at the target.
Scaling: Another Fireball shoots out for every 10 Magoi spent
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 Posts
Cost: 20 Magoi
Description: The caster creates one fireball up to one meter in diameter that travels up to 20 meters away from the user capable of inflicting C-tier damage and second degree burns to an opponent.

Flaming Burst
Tier: C
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Long (20 meters)
Requirements/Drawbacks: Lance points his staff at the target.
Scaling: The flame grows 5 meters in every way for every 10 Magoi spent.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 Posts
Cost: 20 Magoi.
Description: A bright light emits from the orb on Lance's staff and a burst of flames comes out. The burst is a flamethrower like attack and has a 10m long, 2 meters wide and 3 meters tall. The flame burst flies at the enemy and tries to engulf them in flames. If they get engulfed it causes 2nd degree burns to numerous parts of the opponent's body.


Combustion
Tier: C
Class: Magician
Type: Supplementary
Range: Medium (3-10 Meters)
Requirements/Drawbacks: Lance has to point his staff at the object he is heating up.
Scaling: Adds another ally for every 10 Magoi spent
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 Posts
Cost: 20 Magoi
Description: A bright red light flashes from Lance’s staff and the area around an allies attack starts to heat up enough. He can scale the ability in order to use it on more than one ally. The allies attacks now cause Second-Degree burns and a C-rank damage when they hit an enemy with their weapon.

Flame Hit
Tier: C
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Long (20 Meters)
Requirements/Drawbacks: Lance has to point his staff at the target.
Scaling: Double the amount of snakes made by this ability for every 10 magoi spent.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 Posts
Cost: 20 Magoi
Description: A bright red light flashes from his staff as a snake like flame comes out from the staff and tries to strike the opponent. The flame is 10 meters long and 5 meters in width. The flame causes 2nd degree burns to the part of the body it strikes and and causes C-tier damage. It disappears after it strikes.

Fiery Aura
Tier: C
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Requirements/Drawbacks: Lance has to touch himself with his staff.
Scaling: The aura around him expands by 5m for every 10 Magoi spent.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 Posts
Cost: 20 Magoi
Description:
Using the Magoi around him, Lance starts radiates and pushes heat/fire away from him dealing C-tier  fire damage to anything within 0.5m of his body



Last edited by Lance Knighthunter on 17/04/17, 04:15 pm; edited 1 time in total


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Rima and I are splitting your ability grading, as a heads up. Since you have quite a lot here!

As a general note, ALL scaling costs 10 magoi per times scaled regardless of the ability tier.

Also, try to use the scaling we have provided in the ability systems. We've added a lot of different ways to suit an array of abilities.



Heat Mirage

This ability is fine!

Control Flames

Since this is a D-tier ability, it may only have one projectile on initial cast. So, instead of two D-tier flames, it would be one.

This is because two D-tiers would equal one C-tier in terms of damage. Which would make it C-tier damage which would be going over the maximum damage output for a D-tier ability without scaling.

Hits scaling (which this would be) works like this:

Hits: The number of hits or projectiles will double for every 10 magoi/stamina that is invested.

So, it would be along the lines of:

Adds a single flame per 10 magoi spent.

Flame Slice

If you intend on writing sentences for scaling, you should write the scaling for damage like this, for example:

Adds an additional tier of damage per 10 magoi spent.

For the size, it would be 10m long and 1m wide, not tall. Tiny detail change but the rest looks good!

Fire Ball

The scaling would work but it would cost only 10 magoi, not 20. Other than that, this looks good!


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  • Flaming Burst - The scaling on this will work just fine as the base scaling for AoE, which is the ability will grow 5m for every 10 magoi spent.

  • Combustion - You’re gonna need some form of staff movement in the requirements for this. Again, the scaling on this ability can simply be the base scaling for hits, allowing you double the amount of allies targeted by this ability for every 10 magoi spent. You can change the damage from D-Tier to C-Tier, that and you can change it to second degree burns as well. Also, feel free to up the range to atleast Medium.~

  • Flame Hit - You need to make some kind of staff movement for the requirement, also same as Combustion for the scaling.

  • Fiery Aura - You should scale this with AoE, like I said for Flaming Burst. Oh, and add some sort of staff motion for this and you should be good to go!


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Alright updated!


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Approved! You may update these abilities in your vault!

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[center][b]Heat Mirage[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium (5m x 5m Barrier/ 10m from caster)
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Lance has to point the staff in the direction of where he is placing the wall.
[b]Scaling:[/b] The wall will become bigger by 5m for every 10 Magoi spent.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b] The caster creates a 5m x 5m heat wall within ten meters of the caster. Magoi pours from their staff to the wall. The heat from within the wall creates a mild mirage that obscures vision for the opponent or opponents on the opposite side of the wall.

[center][b]Control Flames[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] D
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium (10 Meters)
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Lance has to point his staff at the target he is shooting at. Can only shoot one at a time if he changes targets.
[b]Scaling:[/b] 1 more flames will be made for every 10 Magoi spent
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 1 Post
[b]Cost:[/b] 10 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b] Lance creates 1 flames of heat, 1 meter large, that forms and shoots at targets with the point of his staff. The flame can inflict D-tier damage and inflict first-degree burns.

[center][b]Flame Slice[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long (20 meters)
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Lance has to slice his staff through the air, horizontally or vertically, in order to shoot the Flame Slice.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Adds an additional tier of damage per 10 magoi spent.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b] By slicing his staff in the air, Lance creates a crescent of flames 10 meters long and 1 meter wide that forms and shoots in a direction of his choosing, capable of inflicting C-tier damage and second-degree burns to any opponent it touches.

[center][b]Fire Ball[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long (20 meters)
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Lance has to point his staff at the target.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Another Fireball shoots out for every 10 Magoi spent
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b] The caster creates one fireball up to one meter in diameter that travels up to 20 meters away from the user capable of inflicting C-tier damage and second degree burns to an opponent.

[center][b]Flaming Burst[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long (20 meters)
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Lance points his staff at the target.
[b]Scaling:[/b] The flame grows 5 meters in every way for every 10 Magoi spent.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi.
[b]Description:[/b] A bright light emits from the orb on Lance's staff and a burst of flames comes out. The burst is a flamethrower like attack and has a 10m long, 2 meters wide and 3 meters tall. The flame burst flies at the enemy and tries to engulf them in flames. If they get engulfed it causes 2nd degree burns to numerous parts of the opponent's body.


[center][b]Combustion[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Supplementary
[b]Range:[/b] Medium (3-10 Meters)
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Lance has to point his staff at the object he is heating up.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Adds another ally for every 10 Magoi spent
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b] A bright red light flashes from Lance’s staff and the area around an allies attack starts to heat up enough. He can scale the ability in order to use it on more than one ally. The allies attacks now cause Second-Degree burns and a C-rank damage when they hit an enemy with their weapon.

[center][b]Flame Hit[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Long (20 Meters)
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Lance has to point his staff at the target.
[b]Scaling:[/b] Double the amount of snakes made by this ability for every 10 magoi spent.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b] A bright red light flashes from his staff as a snake like flame comes out from the staff and tries to strike the opponent. The flame is 10 meters long and 5 meters in width. The flame causes 2nd degree burns to the part of the body it strikes and and causes C-tier damage. It disappears after it strikes.

[center][b]Fiery Aura[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Close
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Lance has to touch himself with his staff.
[b]Scaling:[/b] The aura around him expands by 5m for every 10 Magoi spent.
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 Posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 Magoi
[b]Description:[/b]
Using the Magoi around him, Lance starts radiates and pushes heat/fire away from him dealing C-tier  fire damage to anything within 0.5m of his body.


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