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The Second Batch of Spells

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1The Second Batch of Spells Empty The Second Batch of Spells 16/02/17, 08:14 pm

Aoife Reis

Aoife Reis
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C-Tier

Fruit of the Boom!
Tier: C
Class: Magician
Type: Offensive
Range: Medium
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must slam staff to ground, and lift up with mild force
Scaling: Projectile +
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: 20 | 10
Description:

    Utilizing the power of life rukh, Aoife knocks her staff onto the ground, causing two 10cm fruits (apples, oranges, bananas, etc.) to erupt from the ground and lob toward targets up to 7.5m away, bursting into acid on contact to harm the enemy/enemies for C tier damage.


Bloc Avec Carotte
Tier: C
Class: Magician
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Requirements/Drawbacks: Must spin staff in circular motion
Scaling: AoE
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 2 posts
Cost: 20 | 10
Description:

    Aoife spins her staff in front of her, conjuring a 1m in radius large carrot with life magic to block incoming attacks up to C tier damage.



Last edited by Aoife Reis on 17/02/17, 12:53 am; edited 1 time in total


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2The Second Batch of Spells Empty Re: The Second Batch of Spells 17/02/17, 12:45 am

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
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A-Tier

Going to quote from my other grading on the submission on your other account:

For the requirements... how is the wand being waved around in these abilities. While it is, technically, an acceptable requirement. I would recommend being a little more specific.

^ For instance, you mention in the description that she "knocks her staff into the ground" or "spins her staff". Those would be better requirements than just waving the staff around. :o


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3The Second Batch of Spells Empty Re: The Second Batch of Spells 17/02/17, 12:53 am

Aoife Reis

Aoife Reis
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C-Tier

Fixed a doodle~


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Trait Points x2

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4The Second Batch of Spells Empty Re: The Second Batch of Spells 17/02/17, 01:37 am

Diana Corvus

Diana Corvus
A-Tier
A-Tier

Approved for training!

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[center][b]Fruit of the Boom![/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must slam staff to ground, and lift up with mild force
[b]Scaling:[/b] Projectile +
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 10
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Utilizing the power of life rukh, Aoife knocks her staff onto the ground, causing two 10cm fruits (apples, oranges, bananas, etc.) to erupt from the ground and lob toward targets up to 7.5m away, bursting into acid on contact to harm the enemy/enemies for C tier damage.[/list]

[center][b]Bloc Avec Carotte[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must spin staff in circular motion
[b]Scaling:[/b] AoE
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 10
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Aoife spins her staff in front of her, conjuring a 1m in radius large carrot with life magic to block incoming attacks up to C tier damage.[/list]


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5The Second Batch of Spells Empty Re: The Second Batch of Spells 20/02/17, 06:08 am

Aoife Reis

Aoife Reis
C-Tier
C-Tier


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Shard of Solomon x1
Trait Points x2

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6The Second Batch of Spells Empty Re: The Second Batch of Spells 20/02/17, 06:10 am

Ariel

Ariel
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A-Tier

Approved!

Code:
[center][b]Fruit of the Boom![/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Offensive
[b]Range:[/b] Medium
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must slam staff to ground, and lift up with mild force
[b]Scaling:[/b] Projectile +
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 10
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Utilizing the power of life rukh, Aoife knocks her staff onto the ground, causing two 10cm fruits (apples, oranges, bananas, etc.) to erupt from the ground and lob toward targets up to 7.5m away, bursting into acid on contact to harm the enemy/enemies for C tier damage.[/list]

[center][b]Bloc Avec Carotte[/b][/center]
[b]Tier:[/b] C
[b]Class:[/b] Magician
[b]Type:[/b] Defensive
[b]Range:[/b] Short
[b]Requirements/Drawbacks:[/b] Must spin staff in circular motion
[b]Scaling:[/b] AoE
[b]Sustain:[/b] 0
[b]Cool Down:[/b] 2 posts
[b]Cost:[/b] 20 | 10
[b]Description:[/b]
[list]
Aoife spins her staff in front of her, conjuring a 1m in radius large carrot with life magic to block incoming attacks up to C tier damage.[/list]


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