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Job Name: The importance of strength
Job Rank: D-rank
Job Location: Reim
Job Rewards: 3,000 Huang & 50EXP
Job Prerequisites: D-rank
Job Overview:
After traveling to Reim to represent Master Abbass in some negotiations, Leila is given an opportunity to meet up with the people of Reim and learn a bit more about their culture. However, when an opportunity arises for her to see true power of a warrior, some thoughts start to stir into Leila's mind... Deciding to find a worthwhile warrior to observe, Leila hopes to gain some insight on a question that is troubling her... And the answer seems to be to find a warrior to participate in a coliseum duel for her to spectate!

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Job Name:The importance of Determination
Job Rank: D-rank
Job Location: Reim
Job Rewards: 3,000 Huang & 50EXP
Job Prerequisites: D-rank
Job Overview:
Believing that the path of a warrior might be the means for her to prove her superiority over the Magicians of Magnostadt, Leila is determined to find a proper master of arms to train her, fortunately, her connections lead her to a special training school for gladiators! Meet up with the master of the school and start your training!

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Job Name: The importance of Resourcefulness
Job Rank: D-rank
Job Location: Reim
Job Rewards: 3,000 Huang & 50EXP
Job Prerequisites: D-rank
Job Overview:
Despite her best efforts, Leila is clearly far from a perfect student, however, a chance encounter with a familiar face leads her to discover a new motivation, the whereabouts of a Magic tool! (the D-rank tool that I'm planning to get from the beta rewards)

Enemy Name: Goon Squad
Rank: D-rank
Needed damage to take down:  C-tier damage
Description:
A group of thugs that are lightly armed, their leader is decently armed, but they all lack proper combat training, the lone reason they need at least C-tier damage to be taken down is due to their numbers
Abilities:
the thugs will all be armed with melee weapons, but possess no significant abilities. their leader is armored and requires at least 2 posts before he can be taken down properly.

Job Name: The importance of freedom
Job Rank: C-rank
Job Location: Balbadd
Job Rewards: 7,000 Huang Huang & 100EXP
Job Prerequisites: C-rank, progression in personal plot
Job Overview:
After several years of training Leila starts to slowly become competent with martial arms, however it seems some events are unfolding within Balbadd, forcing Leila to return to investigate, and set into motion her plans to destroy the man who is the last chain to her past!


Job Name: Final job: No turning back
Job Rank: D-rank
Job Location: Balbadd
Job Rewards: 3,000 Huang Huang & 50EXP
Job Prerequisites: C-rank, completion of personal plot
Job Overview:
With Master Abbass slain it is time for a new start, determined to start a new chapter in her story Leila seeks the help of a Life Magician to help change her appearance permanently.



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Rima Fahim

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With a job like this, you should change the Open to Participants to either Repeatable (Meaning-Anyone can do this job, it's essentially open to the public) or Reserved (Meaning- Only you and someone you invite and do this job). That being said, is this supposed to be a part of a chain of jobs? If so then you need to create more than one job.


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I see~

The idea is that basically it's a none-repeatable job (as part of a chain) that is supposed to tie into an arc-like story, but due to the potential involvement of other players it's difficult to speculate how the chain will go ^^

how would I best resolve this then?


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Just classify it as a Reserved/Chain job. You also have to make sure you create more jobs to actually make it a chain, so just edit this post and add some more jobs to it.~ If you want to turn this into plot, then you can continue to make the plot yourself and keep making jobs for youself. Or if you need help making your plot and would like the staff to get involved then please feel free to visit the Plot Creation section of the forum!


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there we go~ fixed, and this will also run parallel with a plot request =3


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This is just me being picky, but could you remove the chain part of the title and put it like this [Reserved/Chain] and then remove the whole job 1, job 2, ect. Thank you ^^

Now then, let's get into the important stuff. With this chain you're not planning on becoming a warrior or anything right? I know that you were wanting to retcon your class and what not but at this point you'd have to wait until B-Tier to become a warrior, and even then it'd be a secondary class. (Which doesn't really matter in the whole scheme of things, but I just wanted to point it out.)

Anyways, with all of the quests you have a section that's called "Leila's objective:", could you remove that and just put what she has to do in the job overview? Thank you ^^

The Importance of Resourcefulness is fine, however, if you decide to back out of the beta event and not receive your magic tool, you will NOT receive a magic tool just because of this job. I know you most likely wouldn't do that, but I just wanted you to know before hand just in case.

With The importance of Freedom, your going to have to pick either Reim or Balbadd, as you can't have a job in places at one time. We just don't have the quest board for something like that haha. However, you can totally have a job in Reim that ends with you about to board a ship to Balbadd, and then you make a travel thread after the job, get to Balbadd, and then finish the chain there.


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Hey Rima, this quest chain is basically to give some prologue building to Leila becoming a Warrior (once she reaches B-tier) it's basically my way of showing she is starting to dabble into it, but she won't be learning any abilities or becoming a proper warrior until B-tier, this is just a girl swinging a sword/starting her training, consider it like the 'training under a master' period you see in those martial arts movies~

For the importance of resourcefulness I understand entirely, and it was merely to give an IC reasoning for her to obtain the tool, obviously no beta event reward means no tool from this job

For the Importance of freedom I changed it to Balbadd, but like you mentioned it basically has Leila return to Balbadd at the end of the previous job, and continue the chain in Balbadd. ^^

I hope that covered everything, but if it didn't, feel free to let me know =3


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Alrighty, that's completely fine then! I just wanted to make sure you knew that you're not going to get a secondary class from this. ^^ Anyways, the next thing you need to do is if you have ANY enemies in your chain, to make add them to the job. If not, I'll recheck everything and then we should be good to go. :>


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for the first job there aren't any 'actual' enemies, but Leila will be observing two gladiators fighting each other in the arena

for the remaining missions only the third one (with the magic tool) has a enemy, who has his details included, finally while Master Abbass is an enemy in the fourth mission, this mission runs parallel with Leila's plot, so the nature of this enemy is difficult to decide I guess, since it's in staff's hands ^^

last mission has no enemies~


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Okay, so Master Abass will most likely be rped on Solomon's proxy then. However, on the third mission could you please fill out the follow form below and add it under the quest? It's just how we deal with enemies on the site. :P

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[b]Enemy Name:[/b]
[b]Rank:[/b]
[b]Needed damage to take down:[/b]
[b]Description:[/b]
[b]Abilities:[/b]


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added like requested~


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I fixed up the abilities that the Goon Squad will be using, but other than that I just made a few small edits capitalizing some stuff here and there. Everything should be good to go ^^ have fun with your chain/plot.~


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