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1 Agares Starter Guide on 13/12/16, 10:18 pm

Agares

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Imitation Slash

Tier: D-Tier
Class: Assassin.
Type: Offensive.
Range: Close.
Requirements/Drawbacks: It requires extra small items.
Scaling: The illusion factor raises, and it appears to be even more slashes, making it harder to tell which is real.
Sustain: 0.
Cool Down: Two.
Cost: 10 Stamina, 0 Magoi
Description: The user tosses two small items to his sides, and moves his hands towards said airborne objects. Quickly after the user swings both hands towards the enemy, one holding a blade. The effect is that the enemy sees a slash coming from the hand that doesn't have a blade.


Mirror Effect
Tier: D-Tier
Class: Assassin.
Type: Supplementary.
Range: Short-Medium Range.
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user walking slow, and calming his breathing.
Scaling: The number of mirror images double a number of times.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 3
Cost: 10 Stamina, 0 Magoi
Description: The user calm himself down and slows his breathing, walking slow so that he loses presence and leaves after images both in front of him and behind himself.

Killing intent

Tier: C-Tier.
Class: Assassin.
Type: Supplementary.
Range: Short-Medium Range.
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must be in a very bad mood, or have something horrid or “Bad” happen to him
Scaling: The user appears even larger and more menacing. It can temporarily paralyze around the user.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 10 (More of a single use ability)
Cost: 20 Stamina, 0 Magoi
Description: The user's emotion reaches a point that it gives off a illusionary feeling that the user has grown, and is towering over the enemy with a dark and twisted feeling, before giving off a feeling of death. (Not actual death)

Shadow Walk

Tier: D-Tier
Class: Assassin
Type: Supplementary.
Range: Close-Long Range.
Requirements/Drawbacks: Being close to a shadow. User becomes more noticeable in less dark shadows.
Scaling: The user becomes less noticeable.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: 1
Cost: 10 Stamina, 0 Magoi
Description: The user becomes one with the shadows, blending in with them and seemingly disappearing. If the shadows are connected, he can move from one to another.

Force Nullification

Tier: D-Tier
Class: Assassin.
Type: Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Close/Mid
Requirements/Drawbacks: The user must be receiving a blow he can't dodge. After which the user’s muscles are stunned(for a turn).
Scaling: The user gains less of a stun, and can take larger blows.
Sustain: 0
Cool Down: Two
Cost: 10 Stamina, 0 Magoi
Description:

The user goes into Horse Stance* and moves both hands forward, pulling them towards him and stopping right before his hands touch his chest, pushing him back but reducing the amount of damage he would normally take.

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2 Re: Agares Starter Guide on 14/12/16, 06:05 pm

Duquin

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Okay, so most of your abilities seem to be working on a "game" mindset. But quite frankly, the things you are trying to do are simply impossible without using magic. I'll do my best to point out where they are flawed, but when you re-work these just try to ground them more in reality.

ALSO!~ You aren't using the coded version of the template. Please do when you edit these.




Imitation Slash

You can't create illusions without magic. Simply throwing small items to your sides would not mystically create an illusory sword and hide your real weapon.

Because there is no logical reason for the effect you want to occur, this can't be approved. This goes far beyond the limits of sleight of hand after all in well into the territory of magic.


Mirror Effect:

There is no reasonable method of creating after images without magic being given here. This is not dragon ball or bleach, so moving fast enough to create one is far beyond the capabilities of anyone in Magi. Once again, you would need magic to create illusory after images.


Killing Intent:

I understand the anime cliche you're going for, but you can't force an image or a specific emotional response onto another player with this.


Shadow Walk:

You can just disappear into shadows. There are plenty of shadows around every day that you could step into and still be very visible. You don't have any magic that would allow you to disappear. You also can't turn your body into a snake-thin tube human to pass along a thin and narrow shadow connecting two larger shadows. You are a human, you don't have any magic to make these feats possible. Therefore this ability also can't be approved.


Force Nullification:

I love Tai Chi, so once again, I know what you're going for with this ability. Thankfully it isn't outlandish or mystical so this ability can stay it just needs editing.

Requirements: you've got two drawbacks listed here but honestly I would say you could remove both of them. I'd rather you put a requirement like, "must have stable footing" and, "Must assume the horse stance prior to activation."

Drawback: If you were to have any draw back, it would probably be the fact that this would only work against large blunt force threats and would basically be useless against swords, arrows, and other weapons. Unless some large beast is pouncing you or a giant boulder is sent your way, this ability won't be very useful.

Scaling: Just put damage here, the stun thing is hard to quantify.

Cooldown: This should only be 1 post.


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